Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more concise and grammatically correct. Avoid redundancy and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, you can say, "Today it's sunny, but a few days ago we had storms and flooding, which made it inconvenient to go out because the rain was unpredictable."

예시: Today it's sunny, but a few days ago we had storms and flooding, which made it inconvenient to go out because the rain was unpredictable.

제안: Good answer with clear opinion and reason. To improve, use linking words like "because" and avoid repeating similar phrases. Also, try to use more varied vocabulary such as "temperature" and "concentrate."

예시: I prefer cold weather because it helps me concentrate better, whereas hot weather makes it difficult to focus on tasks.

제안: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and unclear phrases. Try to organize your ideas clearly and use linking words like "because" and "so." For example, "I prefer dry weather because it is more convenient to go out. When it rains a lot, the streets become muddy and slippery, which is uncomfortable."

예시: I prefer dry weather because it is more convenient to go out. When it rains a lot, the streets become muddy and slippery, which is uncomfortable.

제안: Good structure and clear explanation. To improve, correct small grammar errors and use more natural phrases like "dress appropriately." For example, "Yes, every morning I check the weather forecast first thing to choose suitable clothes for the day."

예시: Yes, every morning I check the weather forecast first thing to choose suitable clothes for the day.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and lacks specific details. Try to give clear examples and complete your sentences. For example, "Climate change affects geological landscapes and changes people's lifestyles. For instance, rising sea levels cause flooding, which disrupts daily life."

예시: Climate change affects geological landscapes and changes people's lifestyles. For instance, rising sea levels cause flooding, which disrupts daily life.

제안: Your answer has unclear phrases and grammar mistakes. Try to express your ideas clearly and use linking words. For example, "Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates because they are often linked to different cultures and lifestyles. Visiting such places helps me understand diverse cultures."

예시: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates because they are often linked to different cultures and lifestyles. Visiting such places helps me understand diverse cultures.

× So it's not it was not convenient to go out since you didn't know what time it will rain.

✓ So it was not convenient to go out since you didn't know what time it would rain.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses incorrectly. Since the context is about past events, 'will rain' should be changed to 'would rain' to maintain past tense consistency.

× I prefer dry wiser since it's convenient to go out if someplace it always rain.

✓ I prefer dry weather since it's convenient to go out if someplace always rains.

The word 'wiser' is incorrect here; it should be 'weather'. Also, 'if someplace it always rain' is ungrammatical; it should be 'if someplace always rains' to agree with singular subject and verb.

× I prefer dry wiser since it's convenient to go out if someplace it always rain.

✓ I prefer dry weather since it's convenient to go out if someplace always rains.

The verb 'rain' should be 'rains' to agree with the singular subject 'someplace'.

× It's not convenient to go out because the street is muddy and slippery, so dry weather will be more comfortable for.

✓ It's not convenient to go out because the street is muddy and slippery, so dry weather will be more comfortable.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'for' which is incomplete. Removing 'for' completes the sentence properly.

× I think it's a good habit because it can help me to suit for the weather.

✓ I think it's a good habit because it can help me to suit the weather.

The preposition 'for' after 'suit' is unnecessary and incorrect. 'Suit' is a transitive verb here and does not require a preposition.

× Well, climate change shapes the geological landscapes and also influence people's living habits.

✓ Well, climate change shapes the geological landscapes and also influences people's living habits.

Subject-verb agreement error: 'climate change' is singular, so the verb should be 'influences' not 'influence'.

× The sea level rises and people feel annoyed about the.

✓ The sea level rises and people feel annoyed about it.

The sentence ends with 'about the' which is incomplete. Replacing 'the' with 'it' completes the sentence.

× Yeah, it's different climates, always close to different, umm, humanity, cultures and living habits.

✓ Yeah, different climates are always close to different, umm, human cultures and living habits.

'Humanity' is a noun meaning 'humankind' and is incorrect here; 'human' as an adjective modifies 'cultures'. Also, sentence structure improved for clarity.

× I think it's essential to visit some different places with be real climate to understand different cultures.

✓ I think it's essential to visit some different places with real climates to understand different cultures.

The phrase 'with be real climate' is ungrammatical. It should be 'with real climates' to be correct and plural to match 'places'.