Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: My brother, your answer dey confuse small and e no too clear. Try make your sentences short and direct. Talk say e dey rain almost every day because na rainy season, and explain how e dey affect your environment clearly. Avoid repeating words and try use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect your ideas well.

예시: Right now, we are in the rainy season where I live, so it rains almost every day. Because of this, the streets are usually wet and slippery, which makes traveling difficult.

제안: You need to make your answer clearer and more natural. Use simple and correct phrases like 'I prefer cold weather because I can wear warm clothes to stay comfortable.' Also, avoid unclear words like 'eating yourself' and 'when the pound'. Try to explain your reasons logically with linking words like 'because' or 'unlike'.

예시: I prefer cold weather because I can wear warm clothes like cardigans to keep myself comfortable. Unlike hot weather, which is hard to control, cold weather allows me to adjust easily.

제안: Your answer is good but you should avoid repeating words like 'more more' and 'Wet Wet Wet'. Also, try to use linking words like 'because' and give specific reasons. For example, explain why dry weather makes traveling easier and why wet weather is uncomfortable.

예시: I prefer dry weather because it is easier to travel and go anywhere. People feel more comfortable going outside during dry weather, unlike wet weather when the roads are slippery and people prefer to stay indoors.

제안: Your answer is unclear and has some mistakes. Instead of 'army', say 'habit'. Also, explain why you don't check the forecast and how you deal with the weather. Use linking words like 'because' and avoid repeating words.

예시: No, I don't have the habit of checking the weather forecast because I don't understand it well. So, I just accept whatever weather comes and prepare myself accordingly.

제안: Your answer is confusing and has grammar mistakes. Try to say clearly what you think about climate change effects. Use linking words like 'because' and give specific examples, such as how it affects farmers. Avoid repeating words and check your sentence structure.

예시: I think climate change has affected the weather recently because it has made some seasons longer or shorter. This change can be good or bad; for example, some farmers find it easier to grow crops, but others face difficulties.

제안: Your answer is okay but you repeat 'another city' and have unclear parts. Try to be more specific and clear. Use linking words like 'because' to explain why you want to visit places with different climates. Avoid unnecessary repetition.

예시: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates because I want to experience new weather conditions. For example, I would like to visit North America to feel the cold weather and see how it differs from my home.

× Currently where I live now we are in rainy season so it rains almost every day to to travel, sometimes maybe even due to the races in where where we are now.

✓ Currently, where I live now, we are in the rainy season, so it rains almost every day, sometimes maybe even due to the rains where we are now.

The sentence lacked the definite article 'the' before 'rainy season' which is necessary to specify the particular season. Also, 'races' seems to be a typo for 'rains'. The phrase 'there are' is implied but missing, making the sentence unclear. Adding 'the' and correcting 'races' to 'rains' clarifies the meaning.

× I prefer a cold weather unlike a hot weather you because cold weather you can control the weather by using wearing cardigan or eating yourself, but hot weather you cannot control it, especially when the pound.

✓ I prefer cold weather unlike hot weather because with cold weather you can control it by wearing a cardigan or eating warm food, but with hot weather you cannot control it, especially when the sun is strong.

The article 'a' is incorrectly used before uncountable noun 'weather'. Also, 'eating yourself' is incorrect; it should be 'eating warm food' or similar. 'The pound' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'the sun'. The sentence needed correction for article use and clarity.

× I prefer a dry weather cause during the dry weather it is it will be easy for us to travel to go to anywhere and it will be more more comfortable for people to go out, unlike Wet Wet Wet weather where everywhere will be sleeping.

✓ I prefer dry weather because during dry weather it will be easy for us to travel anywhere and it will be more comfortable for people to go out, unlike wet weather where everywhere will be slippery.

Again, 'a' before 'dry weather' is incorrect as 'weather' is uncountable. The phrase 'Wet Wet Wet weather' is redundant and should be 'wet weather'. 'Everywhere will be sleeping' is unclear and likely a misuse; 'slippery' or 'muddy' fits better. The sentence needed correction for article use and word choice.

× No, it's not in my army to to be checking weather forecast because I don't know more about the weather forecast.

✓ No, it's not in my habit to check the weather forecast because I don't know much about it.

'Army' is a wrong word here; the correct word is 'habit'. Also, 'to be checking' is awkward; 'to check' is better. 'Don't know more' should be 'don't know much'. The sentence needed correction for word choice and verb form.

× In the effect of climate change in recent years has been improve cause the way the weather has change makes thing for comfortable and make things easy easier for for people especially all those farmer the the new climate change has been effective for them.

✓ The effect of climate change in recent years has improved because the way the weather has changed makes things more comfortable and easier for people, especially farmers; the new climate change has been effective for them.

'Has been improve' is incorrect; it should be 'has improved' (past participle). 'Has change' should be 'has changed'. 'Thing for comfortable' should be 'things more comfortable'. 'Easy easier' is redundant; 'easier' suffices. 'All those farmer' should be 'farmers'. The sentence needed corrections in verb forms, pluralization, and word choice.

× Yes, I would like to visit another city, especially another city so that I can experience their weather.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit another city, especially one with a different climate so that I can experience its weather.

Repeating 'another city' is redundant. 'Their weather' is plural pronoun referring to singular 'city'; it should be 'its weather'. The sentence needed correction for pronoun agreement and redundancy.

× So for example, I would like to experience North American weather so, so that I it's it will be able to easy for me and make me comfortable.

✓ For example, I would like to experience North American weather so that it will be easy for me and make me comfortable.

The sentence has redundant words 'so, so that I it's it'. These should be simplified to 'so that it'. The phrase 'able to easy' is incorrect; it should be 'easy'. The sentence needed correction for redundancy and clarity.