Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时应避免句子结构不完整和语法错误，且注意表达的连贯性。可以更自然地描述天气特点，并补充具体细节。

예시: The weather in my city is quite humid, especially in mid-June when summer makes it very hot and sticky. This is because Zhejiang is located on the coast of China, which influences the climate.

제안: 回答时应避免语法错误和不自然的表达，且句子应更完整。可以具体说明喜欢冬天的原因。

예시: I definitely prefer cold weather because I enjoy playing in the snow with my friends during winter.

제안: 回答中有重复和犹豫词，应避免。句子应更简洁且表达清晰。

예시: I prefer dry weather because wet weather makes me feel humid and uncomfortable.

제안: 回答较好，但“feel the temperature approximately”表达不够自然。可以用更地道的表达方式。

예시: Yes, I check the weather forecast every day to know the temperature accurately so I can choose appropriate clothes.

제안: 回答不完整且表达不清晰，应更具体说明气候变化的影响，并使用连贯的句子。

예시: I think climate change has affected our social life by causing more extreme weather events around the world, such as storms and heatwaves.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，应简洁明了地表达想法，并避免重复。

예시: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates because it allows me to experience new environments and enjoy various weather conditions.

× Because Zhejiang is located in the coastline of China, it.

✓ Because Zhejiang is located on the coastline of China.

介词使用错误。英文中表示“位于某地”应使用介词'on'而非'in'。这里应说“located on the coastline”。

× Because Zhejiang is located in the coastline of China, it.

✓ Because Zhejiang is located on the coastline of China.

介词使用错误，'located'后应接'on'表示“位于……上”，而不是'in'。

× Because Zhejiang is located in the coastline of China, it.

✓ Because Zhejiang is located on the coastline of China.

句子末尾的'it'没有明确指代，且句子不完整，应删除。

× And for me, absolutely winter because we can express the snow and we can also play in the snows with my friends.

✓ And for me, absolutely winter because we can experience the snow and we can also play in the snow with my friends.

动词'express'用错，应为'experience'表示“体验”；'snows'应为不可数名词'snow'。

× And for me, absolutely winter because we can express the snow and we can also play in the snows with my friends.

✓ And for me, absolutely winter because we can experience the snow and we can also play in the snow with my friends.

'express'是动词，意思是“表达”，此处应使用'experience'表示“体验”；'snows'错误，'snow'是不可数名词，不用复数形式。

× And for me, absolutely winter because we can express the snow and we can also play in the snows with my friends.

✓ And for me, absolutely winter because we can experience the snow and we can also play in the snow with my friends.

代词使用错误，'snows'应为不可数名词'snow'，不应加复数。

× Umm, for me it's uh, I I'm more fond of dry weather because the wet weather makes me humid and I will feel uncomfortable in the wet weather, so maybe.

✓ Umm, for me, I'm more fond of dry weather because wet weather makes me feel humid and uncomfortable, so maybe.

'makes me humid'表达不自然，应为'makes me feel humid'；重复使用'the wet weather'冗余，简化表达更好。

× Umm, for me it's uh, I I'm more fond of dry weather because the wet weather makes me humid and I will feel uncomfortable in the wet weather, so maybe.

✓ Umm, for me, I'm more fond of dry weather because wet weather makes me feel humid and uncomfortable, so maybe.

代词和句子结构重复，'it's uh, I I'm'不合适，应简化为'I am'。

× With the temperature rising, I think the climate change is to our social life because there are some extreme weather and extreme circumstances all over, all over the world.

✓ With the temperature rising, I think climate change affects our social life because there is some extreme weather and extreme circumstances all over the world.

'climate change is to our social life'结构不完整，应改为'affects our social life'；'there are some extreme weather'中'weather'为不可数名词，应用单数形式。

× With the temperature rising, I think the climate change is to our social life because there are some extreme weather and extreme circumstances all over, all over the world.

✓ With the temperature rising, I think climate change affects our social life because there is some extreme weather and extreme circumstances all over the world.

'weather'是不可数名词，不能用复数形式'some extreme weather'应改为'some extreme weather'（不可数）；'circumstances'复数正确。

× With the temperature rising, I think the climate change is to our social life because there are some extreme weather and extreme circumstances all over, all over the world.

✓ With the temperature rising, I think climate change affects our social life because there is some extreme weather and extreme circumstances all over the world.

'extreme weather'和'extreme circumstances'中'adjective + noun'搭配正确，无需改动。

× Yeah, absolutely. I like to visit other cities because I can feel a new attitude to the city which have different climate and various weathers in the city I can enjoy although.

✓ Yeah, absolutely. I like to visit other cities because I can experience a new attitude to the city which has a different climate and various weather that I can enjoy.

'which have'主语是单数'city'，应改为'which has'；'climate'为不可数名词，前面应加'different'；'weathers'错误，'weather'不可数。

× Yeah, absolutely. I like to visit other cities because I can feel a new attitude to the city which have different climate and various weathers in the city I can enjoy although.

✓ Yeah, absolutely. I like to visit other cities because I can experience a new attitude toward the city which has a different climate and various weather that I can enjoy.

'attitude to'应改为'attitude toward'更自然；'feel a new attitude'表达不准确，改为'experience a new attitude'更合适。