Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时语言不够自然，表达重复且不连贯，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用连词使表达更流畅。

예시: The weather where I live is mostly sunny because it is located at a higher altitude than nearby areas. We rarely have rain, so the sun shines almost every day.

제안: 表达不够清晰，语法错误较多，建议直接表达观点并用具体原因支持，避免重复和语法错误。

예시: I prefer cold weather because I feel more comfortable in it. Hot weather makes me sweat and feel restless since it's too hot to go outside.

제안: 回答内容混乱且不连贯，建议明确表达观点，使用具体例子支持，并注意语法和词汇的准确性。

예시: I prefer dry weather because it helps food stay fresh and clothes dry quickly. In wet weather, clothes take longer to dry, which is inconvenient.

제안: 回答较为完整，但表达不够流畅，建议使用连词连接句子，避免重复，并提高语言的自然度。

예시: Yes, I check the weather forecast every morning because it helps me decide what to wear and whether I need to bring an umbrella. This routine is very useful for planning my day.

제안: 回答中有重复和语法错误，建议简洁表达观点，使用比较结构，并避免重复。

예시: I think climate change has caused summers to become hotter and winters to become colder compared to the past.

제안: 回答重复且语法错误较多，建议直接表达意愿并用具体理由支持，注意句子结构和词汇使用。

예시: Yes, I would like to visit cities like London, which has a rainy climate. It would be interesting to experience different weather since my hometown is always sunny.

× So just the rainy sun, just a few.

✓ So just a few rainy days.

这里使用了错误的动词形式“rainy sun”，应使用名词短语“rainy days”来表达“下雨的日子”。动词的现在分词形式不能直接用作名词。

× So just the rainy sun, just a few.

✓ So just a few rainy days.

“sun”是单数名词，但这里想表达的是“几天雨天”，应使用复数形式“days”。

× It's a little bit higher around other area.

✓ It's a little bit higher than other areas.

比较级后应使用介词“than”来引出比较对象，且“area”应为复数形式“areas”。

× because our this place is outstanding.

✓ because this place is outstanding.

“our this place”中“our”与“this”重复使用，造成语法错误，应去掉“our”。

× How do they ever come to us?

✓ How does rain ever come to us?

句子缺少明确主语，应明确指代“rain”，并且使用第三人称单数助动词“does”。

× I prefer a cold weather because the cold weather that means I can I feel just more comfortable.

✓ I prefer cold weather because cold weather means I feel more comfortable.

“weather”是不可数名词，前面不应加不定冠词“a”，且句子中多余的“that”和“I can”应删除。

× On the other hand, the hot weather doesn't make me sweating, make me noisy because it's too hot, there's nowhere to go.

✓ On the other hand, hot weather doesn't make me sweat or feel noisy because it's too hot and there's nowhere to go.

“make me sweating”应改为“make me sweat”，动词后接动词原形；“make me noisy”表达不清，应改为“feel noisy”；连接词使用不当，需调整句子结构。

× I prefer dry weather because dry weather I mean everything can get there, such as the food that that can get stirred easily, but in the wet weather the clothes can't.

✓ I prefer dry weather because it means everything can dry, such as food that can be stored easily, but in wet weather clothes can't dry.

“dry weather I mean”表达不清，应改为“it means”；“get there”应为“dry”；“that that”重复，应删除一个；“stirred”应为“stored”。

× Can't win.

✓ Can't dry.

“win”与上下文不符，应为“dry”，表示“不能干燥”。

× It's worst I can't read where it's fastly.

✓ It's worse; I can't dry clothes quickly.

“worst”应为比较级“worse”；“read”应为“dry”；“fastly”是错误的副词形式，应为“quickly”。

× If it's gathering store, I should bring an umbrella.

✓ If it's going to storm, I should bring an umbrella.

“gathering store”表达错误，应为“going to storm”，表示“将要下暴风雨”。

× I often check the weather in the morning because it helps me get a plan on what I what I should wear today and prepare for the rain.

✓ I often check the weather in the morning because it helps me make a plan about what I should wear today and prepare for the rain.

“get a plan on”表达不自然，应改为“make a plan about”；重复“what I”应删除一个。

× the temperatures is higher than the past and the winter the temperature also is lower than the in the past.

✓ the temperatures are higher than in the past and in winter the temperature is also lower than in the past.

“temperatures”是复数，谓语应为“are”；“the past”前应加介词“in”；句子结构需调整以表达清晰。

× the temperatures is higher than the past and the winter the temperature also is lower than the in the past.

✓ the temperatures are higher than in the past and in winter the temperature is also lower than in the past.

比较级后应使用介词“than”，且“in the past”前应加“in”。

× I think so. I moving to another city like London, which is more like more likely to rain.

✓ I think so. I would like to move to another city like London, which is more likely to rain.

“I moving”缺少助动词，应为“I would like to move”；“more like more likely”重复，应简化为“more likely”。

× because in my hometown there is the weather is always sunny.

✓ because in my hometown the weather is always sunny.

“there is the weather is”结构重复，应删除“there is”。

× I enjoy the different weather makes.

✓ I enjoy the different weather.

“weather makes”表达不完整且不正确，应删除“makes”。