Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够自然且有语法错误，表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地描述天气特点，避免无关内容。

예시: I live in Guangdong, where the weather is usually hot and humid, especially in summer.

제안: 回答中有语法和发音错误，表达不连贯。建议直接表达偏好并给出具体原因。

예시: I prefer cold weather because Guangdong is very hot in summer, so cooler temperatures are more comfortable for me.

제안: 回答不完整且语法错误较多。建议完整表达偏好并举例说明。

예시: I prefer dry weather like in Xinjiang because it is comfortable and many fruits grow well there.

제안: 回答表达不清晰且有语法错误。建议简洁说明习惯及频率。

예시: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every day, especially before planning a trip or outdoor activity.

제안: 回答有语法错误且表达不够准确。建议用更准确的词汇和句式描述气候变化的影响。

예시: I think climate change has caused global warming and increased pollution, which affects the environment worldwide.

제안: 回答表达较为混乱，建议简洁明了地表达愿望并说明原因。

예시: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates to experience new cultures and enjoy different weather.

× Yeah, I live in Guangdong and there's nothing special, and Guangdong is very hot.

✓ Yeah, I live in Guangdong and there is nothing special, and Guangdong is very hot.

这里的"there's"是"there is"的缩写，适用于单数名词。"nothing"是不可数名词，使用单数形式"there is"是正确的。此句无错误，保持原句。

× Yeah, also, but it's still a tour vacation.

✓ Yeah, also, it is still a tour vacation.

句子结构混乱，"also"和"but"连用不合适，且"tour vacation"表达不清，应改为"it is still a tour vacation"或更合适的表达。建议去掉"but"，使句子通顺。

× My first preference is code, because you know, I live in Guangdong.

✓ My first preference is cold, because you know, I live in Guangdong.

单词"code"拼写错误，应为"cold"，表示寒冷。拼写错误导致句意不明。

× When I get summer vacation, I always really got very hot and but cold is different.

✓ When I have summer vacation, it is always really hot, but cold is different.

"get summer vacation"表达不自然，应为"have summer vacation"；"I always really got very hot"结构混乱，应改为"it is always really hot"；"and but"连用错误，应去掉"and"。

× It's not very cold but.

✓ It's not very cold, though.

句子末尾使用"but"不完整，应使用"though"或补充完整句子，使表达完整。

× I preferred Dr. you know, in Xinjiang region, and the weather is very dry, and it can find many fruits such as.

✓ I prefer dry weather, you know, in Xinjiang region, and the weather is very dry, and you can find many fruits such as apples and grapes.

"preferred"为过去式，语境应使用一般现在时"prefer"；"Dr."应为"dry"；"it can find"主语错误，应为"you can find"；句子不完整，需补充例子。

× Yeah, I have the habit of checking the weather forecast, especially when I want to get a summer vacation and also when I, grandma and my grandpa watch the weather TVI always watch them.

✓ Yeah, I have the habit of checking the weather forecast, especially when I want to have a summer vacation, and also when my grandma and grandpa watch the weather on TV, I always watch it with them.

"get a summer vacation"应为"have a summer vacation"；"when I, grandma and my grandpa watch the weather TV"结构混乱，应调整为"when my grandma and grandpa watch the weather on TV"；"watch them"指代不明，应为"watch it with them"。

× I realized that carbon dioxide are always increasing in return this year and it also caused the global warming and bring to many pollutions for global.

✓ I realized that carbon dioxide is always increasing this year, and it also causes global warming and brings much pollution to the world.

"carbon dioxide"是不可数名词，谓语动词应使用单数"is"；"caused"和"bring"时态不一致，应改为一般现在时"causes"和"brings"；"pollutions"应为不可数名词"pollution"；"for global"表达错误，应为"to the world"。

× Yeah, when I get a summer vacation, I always go with my parents or my family to another city to join different cultures and classmates, and I think this is a good thing.

✓ Yeah, when I have a summer vacation, I always go with my parents or my family to another city to experience different cultures and meet classmates, and I think this is a good thing.

"get a summer vacation"应为"have a summer vacation"；"join different cultures and classmates"表达不当，应改为"experience different cultures and meet classmates"，使表达更自然。