Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: حاول تبسيط الجمل وتجنب التكرار، واستخدم عبارات أكثر طبيعية لوصف الطقس مع ربط الأفكار بشكل أفضل.

예시: The weather where I live is mostly hot and sunny because it's near the equator. Summers are humid, while winters can be chilly sometimes, but overall it's warm throughout the year.

제안: استخدم جمل أكثر ترابطًا ووضح الأسباب بشكل أكثر تحديدًا مع استخدام كلمات ربط مناسبة.

예시: I prefer hot weather because I live in a tropical region and I'm accustomed to sunny days. Cold weather feels uncomfortable to me, so warm temperatures suit me better.

제안: حاول استخدام تراكيب لغوية أكثر دقة وتجنب الأخطاء النحوية، وقدم تفاصيل أو أمثلة توضح تفضيلك.

예시: I prefer dry weather because wet conditions make me and many people in my community feel uncomfortable. Also, we experience dry weather more frequently, so it's more familiar to us.

제안: تجنب التكرار وكن أكثر وضوحًا في التعبير، واستخدم جمل قصيرة ومترابطة لتوضيح عاداتك.

예시: I don't usually check the weather forecast because the weather here is mostly stable and sunny all year. So, I don't find it necessary to check it often.

제안: حاول تقديم رأي أكثر وضوحًا مع أمثلة أو أسباب، وابتعد عن العبارات العامة أو الغامضة.

예시: Although I'm not a climate expert, I believe climate change causes unpredictable weather patterns, which can affect agriculture and daily life negatively.

제안: حاول تحسين النطق واستخدام كلمات صحيحة، وقدم إجابة أكثر تنظيماً مع ربط الأفكار بشكل منطقي.

예시: I would like to visit cities with different climates out of curiosity, not because I want to escape my own weather. It's not a top priority, but if I get the chance, I would enjoy experiencing new climates.

× The weather where I live is a very hot weather because it's the middle of the Greenwich line.

✓ The weather where I live is very hot because it's near the Greenwich line.

The word 'weather' is uncountable, so 'a very hot weather' is incorrect. Also, 'the middle of the Greenwich line' is awkward; 'near the Greenwich line' is clearer.

× Usually the summer is very steamy and the winter is very chilly and freezing, but mostly it's sunny and hot weather day.

✓ Usually, the summer is very steamy and the winter is very chilly and freezing, but mostly the days are sunny and hot.

'Sunny and hot weather day' is incorrect; 'days' should be plural and 'weather' is uncountable, so rephrasing is needed.

× I prefer the hot weather and the reason why 'cause I live in a very tropical area so I am more used to the sunny days than the freezing days.

✓ I prefer hot weather because I live in a very tropical area, so I am more used to sunny days than freezing days.

'The hot weather' is acceptable but 'the reason why 'cause' is informal and redundant; also, 'the sunny days' and 'the freezing days' should be without 'the' for general statements.

× So the hot weather is more suitable for me than winter.

✓ So hot weather is more suitable for me than winter.

'The hot weather' is acceptable but omitting 'the' makes it more natural when comparing general weather types.

× I prefer the dry weather due to the wet weather is a bit uncomfy for me and for most of my community and the other reason that we are used to the dry more often than the wet weather.

✓ I prefer dry weather because wet weather is a bit uncomfortable for me and most of my community, and another reason is that we are more used to dry weather than wet weather.

'The dry weather' and 'the wet weather' are acceptable but repetitive; 'uncomfy' is informal and should be 'uncomfortable'; sentence structure improved for clarity.

× I do not establish any habit of checking the weather forecast due to the weather is mostly stable during the whole year which is a sunny and hot weather.

✓ I do not have a habit of checking the weather forecast because the weather is mostly stable throughout the year, being sunny and hot.

'Do not establish any habit' is unnatural; 'have a habit' is correct. Also, 'due to' should be 'because' for clauses. 'Which is a sunny and hot weather' is incorrect; rephrased for clarity.

× Therefore, there is no reason no reason for me to check constantly about the forecast.

✓ Therefore, there is no reason for me to check the forecast constantly.

Repetition of 'no reason' is an error. Also, 'check constantly about the forecast' is incorrect; 'check the forecast constantly' is correct.

× I am not an expert of climate in general, but I do prefer a stable and constant weather without the ups and downs and the constant changing about the weather.

✓ I am not an expert on climate in general, but I do prefer stable and constant weather without the ups and downs and constant changes in the weather.

The correct preposition is 'expert on' not 'expert of'. 'Constant changing about the weather' is incorrect; 'constant changes in the weather' is correct.

× I would prefer to visit other city to explore other temperatures and weather for the sake of curiosity, not for the sake of getting away with our weather.

✓ I would prefer to visit other cities to explore different temperatures and weather for the sake of curiosity, not to get away from our weather.

'Other city' should be plural 'other cities' to match 'temperatures'. 'Getting away with our weather' is incorrect; 'get away from our weather' is correct.

× Whenever there is a chance, I would give it a try and experience some other Withers.

✓ Whenever there is a chance, I would give it a try and experience some other weathers.

'Withers' is a typo for 'weathers'. Also, 'experience some other weathers' is acceptable though 'weather' is usually uncountable; here it refers to different types of weather in different places.