Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“I'm leaving”应为“I live”，“the weather in there was never going good”表达不准确且不自然。建议使用简单且正确的句子描述天气情况，并避免冗余。

예시: I live in Changzhou, a city in the southeastern part of Fujian province. The weather there is quite unpredictable, as it often rains suddenly.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，句子不完整且重复，表达不清晰。建议使用完整句子，明确表达喜好，并用连接词使句子连贯。

예시: I prefer mild weather because it is neither too hot nor too cold. It makes me feel comfortable, and the air tends to be fresher during such weather.

제안: 回答表达基本清楚，但存在语法错误和句子未完成的问题。建议注意主谓一致，避免句子中断，并适当扩展细节。

예시: I prefer dry weather because the air feels fresher and cleaner, making it more comfortable to be outside. I don't like wet weather since it often forces me to carry an umbrella.

제안: 回答中有许多语法和表达错误，句子结构混乱，影响理解。建议简化句子，直接回答问题，并用连词连接句子。

예시: I usually check the weather forecast every morning on my phone. It helps me plan my day, especially to decide what to wear or whether to take an umbrella.

제안: 回答中语法错误和表达不完整，句子结构不清晰。建议使用完整句子，明确表达观点，并适当举例说明。

예시: In recent years, I think climate change has caused more extreme weather events, such as storms and heat waves, mainly due to the increase in greenhouse gases.

제안: 回答表达基本清楚，但存在语法错误和重复。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并具体说明想去的地方或体验。

예시: Yes, I would like to visit places with different climates. For example, I have never seen snow, so I want to experience snowy weather in other cities.

× I'm leaving a city named Changzhou which is located in the southeastern of Fujian province, and the weather in there was never going good because it will be suddenly raining in earth.

✓ I live in a city named Changzhou which is located in the southeast of Fujian province, and the weather there is never very good because it suddenly rains heavily.

这里“leaving”用错了，应该用“live”表示居住；“in the southeastern of”应改为“in the southeast of”，因为“southeast”是方向名词，不需要加“ern”；“in there”应改为“there”；“was never going good”时态和表达不正确，应改为“is never very good”；“it will be suddenly raining in earth”表达不自然且错误，应改为“it suddenly rains heavily”。这些都是介词和时态的错误。

× Actually, I don't like the weather was too cold or too hot.

✓ Actually, I don't like the weather to be too cold or too hot.

这里“don't like the weather was”时态和结构错误，应该用不定式“to be”来表达喜欢或不喜欢某种状态。

× I like the middle weather because it will make me comfortable and pleasant and it will.

✓ I like moderate weather because it makes me feel comfortable and pleasant.

“middle weather”表达不准确，应该用“moderate weather”；“it will make me comfortable and pleasant and it will”句子不完整且重复，应简化为“it makes me feel comfortable and pleasant”。

× And in the middle weather the the fresh, the air will be more fresh.

✓ And in moderate weather, the air is fresher.

“in the middle weather”应改为“in moderate weather”；“the the fresh, the air”重复且错误，应改为“the air”；“will be more fresh”时态不合适，改为一般现在时“is fresher”。

× I prefer dry weather because the air feels fresher and cleaner, which make it more comfortable to be outside in context.

✓ I prefer dry weather because the air feels fresher and cleaner, which makes it more comfortable to be outside.

“which make it”主谓不一致，应为“which makes it”；“in context”多余且不自然，应去掉。

× I don't like wet weather because it often makes me carry an umbrella which can.

✓ I don't like wet weather because I often have to carry an umbrella.

“makes me carry an umbrella which can”结构不完整且不通顺，应改为“have to carry an umbrella”表达必须带伞的意思。

× As I usually check it the weather for race every morning on my phone, I do legs because it helps me plan my day better, especially if I need to decide what well or whether to carry an umbrella.

✓ I usually check the weather forecast every morning on my phone because it helps me plan my day better, especially if I need to decide what to wear or whether to carry an umbrella.

句子结构混乱，“check it the weather for race”错误，应为“check the weather forecast”；“I do legs”无意义，应去掉；“what well”应为“what to wear”。

× In recent years I think the weather has become more unprecedented with extreme events like storms and heat waves happening more frequently with mainly due to the increase of greenhouse gases which occurs.

✓ In recent years, I think the weather has become more unpredictable, with extreme events like storms and heat waves happening more frequently, mainly due to the increase of greenhouse gases.

“more unprecedented”用词错误，应为“more unpredictable”；“with mainly due to”结构错误，应为“mainly due to”；“which occurs”多余且不正确，应去掉。

× Yes, I'd like to see the different weather in different in other places because for example, I never saw the snow, so I want to see the snow things happen in other places.

✓ Yes, I'd like to see different weather in other places because, for example, I have never seen snow, so I want to see snow in other places.

“the different weather in different in other places”重复且错误，应为“different weather in other places”；“I never saw the snow”时态错误，应为现在完成时“have never seen snow”；“see the snow things happen”表达不清，应简化为“see snow”。