Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: حاول أن تكون إجابتك أكثر وضوحًا وتنظيمًا، واستخدم جملًا كاملة ومترابطة لتصف الطقس بدقة. تجنب التكرار وكن محددًا في وصف الفصول.

예시: The weather where I live is generally mild. Summers are not too hot, and winters are quite warm. We also enjoy many sunny days throughout the year.

제안: حاول توسيع إجابتك بإضافة أسباب تفضيلك للطقس البارد واستخدم كلمات ربط لتوضيح أفكارك بشكل أفضل.

예시: I prefer cold weather because it feels fresh and comfortable. Also, I find it easier to stay active when it's cold rather than hot.

제안: قم بتوضيح سبب عدم حبك للطقس الممطر بشكل أكثر تحديدًا واستخدم جمل مترابطة لتقديم إجابة أكثر سلاسة.

예시: I prefer dry weather because rain can be annoying and makes it difficult to go outside. Dry days are more convenient for outdoor activities.

제안: حاول تحسين تركيب الجملة لتكون أكثر دقة وطبيعية، واذكر سبب اهتمامك بالتحقق من النشرة الجوية.

예시: Yes, I check the weather forecast every morning to plan my day accordingly. It helps me decide what to wear and whether to carry an umbrella.

제안: حاول تقديم إجابة أكثر تفصيلاً مع أمثلة واضحة، واستخدم كلمات ربط لتوضيح تأثيرات تغير المناخ.

예시: I think climate change has caused the weather to become hotter and more unpredictable. For example, there is more frequent heavy rain, which sometimes leads to flooding.

제안: حاول أن تكون إجابتك أكثر وضوحًا وتركيزًا على السؤال، وقدم أسبابًا لاهتمامك بزيارة مدن ذات مناخ مختلف.

예시: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates because it would be interesting to experience new weather conditions and cultures.

× The weather is not hot and summer and warm and winter.

✓ The weather is not hot in summer and warm in winter.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'and' to connect different time periods and descriptions, which causes confusion. The correct conjunction to indicate conditions during specific seasons is 'in'. Using 'and' repeatedly here is incorrect conjunction use (ID 16).

× I like cold weather more, it's nice and fresh.

✓ I like cold weather more because it's nice and fresh.

The original sentence uses a comma splice to connect two independent clauses with 'and', which is incorrect. Using 'because' properly connects the reason for liking cold weather. This is an incorrect conjunction use (ID 16).

× I like dry weather. It's annoying. It's easy to go outside.

✓ I like dry weather because it's not annoying and it's easy to go outside.

The original sentences are fragmented and the use of 'It's annoying' is unclear. Combining the ideas with 'because' and 'and' clarifies the meaning and corrects conjunction use (ID 16).

× I check it every day. I check in at in the morning.

✓ I check it every day. I check it in the morning.

The phrase 'check in at in the morning' contains redundant and incorrect prepositions. The correct preposition is 'in' for time of day, and 'check it' is the correct verb phrase. This is incorrect preposition use (ID 11).

× The weather is hotter now. There is more rain. Rain.

✓ The weather is hotter now, and there is more rain.

The original sentences are fragmented and the repetition of 'Rain.' is unnecessary. Combining the ideas into one sentence improves sentence structure (ID 26).

× Yes, I want to see us. Anyways, I think it's fun.

✓ Yes, I want to see other places. Anyway, I think it's fun.

The pronoun 'us' is incorrectly used to refer to other cities or places. It should be replaced with a noun or pronoun that correctly refers to the intended object. Also, 'Anyways' should be 'Anyway'. This is incorrect pronoun use (ID 12) and incorrect adverb use (ID 13).