Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时应注意语法准确性和表达自然流畅。例如，“north part of China”应改为“the northern part of China”。此外，避免重复和冗余，句子之间应更连贯。

예시: I live in the northern part of China. Summers are usually hot and humid, while winters tend to be cold and dry. Recently, the average temperature during summer has been quite high.

제안: 回答中存在表达不清和语法错误，如“it's easy for me to spread”不合适，应表达为“I tend to sweat a lot”。建议用更准确的词汇表达感受，并避免重复。

예시: I definitely prefer cold weather because I tend to sweat a lot in hot weather, which makes me feel uncomfortable. In cold weather, I can wear warm clothes and feel cozy, so I find it more pleasant.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，如“pray for my father”和“in advisor”不合适。建议用更准确的表达说明干燥和湿润天气的影响，并注意句子结构。

예시: I prefer wet weather because dry weather can irritate the nose and throat. On the other hand, humid weather helps keep the skin moisturized and prevents itchiness.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，如“just one times per week”应为“only once a week”。建议简洁明了地表达习惯，并注意句子连贯。

예시: I rarely check the weather forecast, maybe only once a week. Since I don't go out shopping often, the weather doesn't affect my daily plans much.

제안: 回答中时态使用不当，如“every summer I went”应为“every summer I go”。建议用更准确的表达说明气候变化的影响，并注意句子结构。

예시: Climate change is evident because every summer when I visit my hometown, I notice that the average temperature is rising. This is mainly due to the increase in carbon dioxide, which causes the greenhouse effect.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如“my families will go”应为“my family goes”，地名拼写错误。建议用更准确和连贯的句子描述旅行经历。

예시: Every summer holiday, my family goes on a trip to a new city with a different climate. Last year, we visited Weihai, which is a cool city with very different weather. We also plan to visit Qinhuangdao, known for its beautiful mountains and pleasant climate.

× I live in north part of China.

✓ I live in the northern part of China.

这里'north part'应为复合形容词'northern part'，表示中国的北部地区，且需要加定冠词'the'。

× I live in north part of China.

✓ I live in the northern part of China.

缺少定冠词'the'，表示特指中国的北部地区。

× In summer it's humid and hot, In winter it's cold and dry.

✓ In summer, it's humid and hot; in winter, it's cold and dry.

句中应注意大小写和标点，'In winter'不应大写，且用分号分隔两个独立句子更合适。

× I seldom check weather forecast just one times per week.

✓ I seldom check the weather forecast, just once per week.

'times'应为单数形式'once'，表示一次；且缺少定冠词'the'。

× I seldom check weather forecast just one times per week.

✓ I seldom check the weather forecast, just once per week.

'weather forecast'前应加定冠词'the'，表示特指天气预报。

× Maybe because I'm not a person who always go out for shopping, so to have there is no relationship between me, house and the weather.

✓ Maybe because I'm not a person who always goes out shopping, so there is no relationship between me, my house, and the weather.

'go out for shopping'应为'go out shopping'；'to have there is no relationship'语序错误，应为'there is no relationship'；'house'前应加物主代词'my'。

× Maybe because I'm not a person who always go out for shopping, so to have there is no relationship between me, house and the weather.

✓ Maybe because I'm not a person who always goes out shopping, so there is no relationship between me, my house, and the weather.

主语'who'指代单数，谓语动词应为'goes'，保持主谓一致。

× Obviously there exists this climate change because every summer I went to my home, I can find the average temperature is increasing as the carbon dioxide is increasing, which we call the greenhouse effect.

✓ Obviously, climate change exists because every summer when I go home, I can find the average temperature is increasing as the carbon dioxide is increasing, which we call the greenhouse effect.

'went'应改为一般现在时'go'，因为描述的是每年夏天的习惯动作。

× It's obviously every summer holiday my families will go for a trip to a new place.

✓ Obviously, every summer holiday my family will go on a trip to a new place.

'families'应为单数形式'family'，表示一个家庭；'go for a trip'应为'go on a trip'。

× Last year we go to Shannon Weihai, which is really cool city.

✓ Last year we went to Shannon Weihai, which is a really cool city.

'go'应为过去式'went'；'cool city'前应加不定冠词'a'。

× Last year we go to Shannon Weihai, which is really cool city.

✓ Last year we went to Shannon Weihai, which is a really cool city.

描述过去发生的事情，动词应使用过去式'went'。

× Or we will go to Qinghuangdao, there many mountains, you know, that's really cool here.

✓ Or we will go to Qinghuangdao; there are many mountains, you know, that's really cool here.

'there many mountains'缺少动词，应为'there are many mountains'。