Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时应注意语法准确性和表达的连贯性。例如，“there is only two seasons”应为“there are only two seasons”。另外，内容应更具体，避免模糊表达，如“People always wear lightly in winter”不符合实际，应改为“People wear light clothes in summer but warmer clothes in winter”。

예시: In Hong Kong, there are mainly two seasons: summer and winter. Summers are hot and humid with frequent rain, while winters are cooler and drier. People usually wear light clothes in summer and warmer clothes in winter.

제안: 回答应更完整，避免句子未完成或语法错误，如“really discomfort”应为“really uncomfortable”。同时，使用连接词使表达更流畅，如“because”后应紧跟原因。

예시: I prefer cold weather because in Hong Kong, summer is often rainy and hot, which makes it uncomfortable to go outside. Cold weather is more pleasant and refreshing for me.

제안: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，如“because in because in”和“discomfortable”。应简洁表达原因，并使用正确词汇，如“uncomfortable”。

예시: I prefer dry weather because wet weather makes surfaces damp and sticky, which is uncomfortable. Also, wet floors can be slippery and unsafe.

제안: 回答较完整，但存在语法错误，如“almost checked”应为“almost check”或“I check almost every day”。句子应更简洁，避免重复，如“to decide whether how much clothes I I need to wear”应改为“to decide how many clothes I need to wear”。

예시: I check the weather forecast almost every day. In summer, I see if it will rain so I can bring an umbrella. In winter, I check the temperature to decide how many clothes to wear to stay warm.

제안: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，表达不清晰。应注意句子完整性和逻辑连贯性，避免重复和停顿。建议明确说明气候变化的具体影响，如温度升高导致的不适和疾病传播。

예시: In recent years, temperatures have gradually increased, especially in summer. This makes people feel uncomfortable when going outside. Also, warmer weather helps mosquitoes survive, which can increase the risk of diseases.

제안: 回答表达了意愿，但存在语法和重复问题，如“the Beijing”应为“Beijing”，句子应更流畅。建议使用连接词和更准确的表达。

예시: Definitely, I would like to visit cities with snow because I have never seen it before. For example, Beijing in China and Iceland in Europe have snowy winters, and I am very curious about experiencing snow.

× Many people in Hong Kong always say that there is only two seasons in Hong Kong of the summer and winter.

✓ Many people in Hong Kong always say that there are only two seasons in Hong Kong: summer and winter.

句中主语是复数（two seasons），谓语动词应使用复数形式“are”，而不是单数“is”。此外，表达季节时应直接用“summer and winter”而非“of the summer and winter”。

× In summer, the weather of Hong Kong is raining frequently and it's humid.

✓ In summer, the weather in Hong Kong is rainy frequently and it's humid.

“weather”后应使用介词“in”表示地点，且“raining”用作形容词时应改为“rainy”。

× People always wear lightly in winter.

✓ People always wear light clothes in winter.

“wear”后应接名词，不能直接接副词“lightly”。应使用形容词“light”修饰名词“clothes”。

× because in the summer of Hong Kong it's raining frequently, then it's very unconvenient to go out and also the high temperature always makes me become sweaty and really discomfort.

✓ because in the summer in Hong Kong it rains frequently, so it's very inconvenient to go out, and also the high temperature always makes me sweaty and really uncomfortable.

“it's raining”改为一般现在时“it rains”更符合习惯表达；“unconvenient”拼写错误，应为“inconvenient”；“discomfort”是名词，应改为形容词“uncomfortable”。

× But in cold.

✓ But I prefer cold weather.

句子不完整，缺少主语和谓语，需补充完整表达。

× I prefer dry weather because in because in the wet weather then the floor or or anywhere like the walls will be will be moist then it make me feel sticky and and discomfortable.

✓ I prefer dry weather because in wet weather the floor or anywhere like the walls will be moist, which makes me feel sticky and uncomfortable.

“in because in”重复，应删去；“discomfortable”拼写错误，应为“uncomfortable”；“make”应为第三人称单数“makes”。

× Also wet weather will make the floor wet sand.

✓ Also, wet weather will make the floor wet and sandy.

“wet sand”应改为形容词形式“wet and sandy”来描述地面状态。

× I almost checked the weather forecast every day because in summer I can check whether it's raining on that day.

✓ I almost check the weather forecast every day because in summer I can check whether it's raining on that day.

“almost checked”时态错误，应使用一般现在时“almost check”，因为描述的是习惯动作。

× Then I to decide whether I should bring an umbrella to go out, and in the winter I can know the temperature and to decide whether how much clothes I I need to wear to be more warm.

✓ Then I decide whether I should bring an umbrella to go out, and in winter I can know the temperature and decide how many clothes I need to wear to keep warm.

“to decide”前不需要“to”；“how much clothes”应为“how many clothes”，因为clothes是可数名词；“to be more warm”应改为“to keep warm”。

× First of all, I think in recent years the temperature are becoming higher gradually than is in the Especially in the summer, people will feel very discomfort to to leave because the, uh, temperature were too high and in to be further, the the hot weather is beneficial to mosquitoes living then it may cause.

✓ First of all, I think in recent years the temperature has been gradually increasing, especially in summer. People feel very uncomfortable going outside because the temperature is too high. Furthermore, the hot weather is beneficial to mosquitoes, which may cause problems.

“temperature are”应为“temperature has been”，主谓一致；“discomfort”应为形容词“uncomfortable”；“to to leave”表达不当，应为“going outside”；“temperature were”应为“temperature is”；句子结构混乱，需拆分并调整。

× Definitely, because I've never seen snow before. I really, I'm really curious about it. So I would like to visit the cities that have snow in the winter. For example, the Beijing in China and Iceland in Europe are really curious about snow. So I will, I'm definitely want to visit.

✓ Definitely, because I've never seen snow before. I'm really curious about it. So I would like to visit cities that have snow in winter. For example, Beijing in China and Iceland in Europe. I'm definitely going to visit them.

“the Beijing”错误，地名前不加定冠词；“are really curious about snow”主语错误，应为“I am really curious”；“I'm definitely want to visit”语法错误，应为“I definitely want to visit”或“I am definitely going to visit”。