Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不完整且有语法错误，建议完整表达四季特点，避免句子中断。

예시: I live in a place with four distinct seasons. Summers are very hot, while winters can be extremely cold.

제안: 回答不完整且表达不清，建议完整表达原因并避免口语缩写。

예시: I prefer hot weather because I am quite thin and find it hard to tolerate the cold. In winter, I often feel very uncomfortable.

제안: 回答中断且有重复词，建议完整表达观点并使用连词使句子更流畅。

예시: I prefer dry weather because wet conditions make it hard for my clothes to dry, and I worry about bacteria growing in damp environments.

제안: 时态使用不当，建议使用一般现在时，并简化句子结构。

예시: I check the weather forecast every morning before leaving home to decide what clothes to wear.

제안: 回答不完整且表达不清，建议完整说明气候变化的影响并使用连词连接观点。

예시: One major effect of climate change is global warming caused by emissions from industries and air conditioners, which leads to rising temperatures worldwide.

제안: 表达稍显重复，建议使用更自然的表达方式并丰富细节。

예시: Yes, I would like to visit cities with long summers or mild springs because I enjoy warm weather and dislike the cold.

× We have the distinct Four Seasons where I live and the summer is too hot. The winter is so cold and the.

✓ We have the distinct Four Seasons where I live. The summer is too hot, and the winter is so cold.

原句中“and the.”部分不完整，导致句子结构错误。应将句子拆分并补全，使表达完整清晰。

× I prefer hot weather 'cause I think I'm a bit thin so I can't hold the cold weather and I think in the winter I almost can't see my.

✓ I prefer hot weather because I think I'm a bit thin, so I can't tolerate the cold weather. Also, in the winter, I almost can't see my breath.

原句中“'cause”非正式且句子结构混乱，且“can't hold the cold weather”表达不准确，应改为“can't tolerate the cold weather”。“I almost can't see my.”句子不完整，需补充完整表达。

× I prefer dry weather. Because I think in wet weather my clothes are difficult to to dry and there might be a lot of bacterias growing in the.

✓ I prefer dry weather because I think in wet weather my clothes are difficult to dry, and there might be a lot of bacteria growing on them.

“difficult to to dry”中重复“to”，应去掉一个。“bacterias”是错误的复数形式，正确为“bacteria”。“growing in the”不完整，应改为“growing on them”。

× I checked the weather forecast every day, especially in the morning before I go out from home, I usually check the temperature to consider what clothes I wear.

✓ I check the weather forecast every day, especially in the morning before I go out from home. I usually check the temperature to decide what clothes to wear.

“checked”用过去式不符合习惯表达，应使用一般现在时“check”。“consider what clothes I wear”表达不自然，应改为“decide what clothes to wear”。

× The most important one is the emissions from the industry and from the air conditioners. This gas can cause the global warming and I think.

✓ The most important ones are the emissions from industry and air conditioners. These gases can cause global warming, I think.

“one”与“emissions”复数不匹配，应改为“ones”。“This gas”与“emissions”复数不符，应改为“These gases”。“the global warming”中“the”不必要，应去掉。

× Yes, I really want to visit the cities which have a long time in the summer or in spring, because I like the relatively hot weather and afraid of the cold.

✓ Yes, I really want to visit cities that have long summers or springs because I like relatively hot weather and am afraid of the cold.

“which have a long time in the summer or in spring”表达不自然，应改为“that have long summers or springs”。“and afraid of the cold”缺少主语，应加上“am”。