Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用正确的时态和单复数形式。

예시: Today is sunny and very hot because a typhoon is coming to Guangdong province, which will bring terrible weather.

제안: 回答不够连贯且有语法错误，建议直接回答问题并用简洁的句子表达理由，避免重复和不必要的填充词。

예시: I prefer cold weather because I can wear beautiful clothes, and Guangdong is usually hot, so I don't experience cold weather often.

제안: 回答内容较好，但存在语法错误和表达重复，建议注意时态一致和句子简洁，同时提供更具体的细节。

예시: I prefer dry weather because Guangdong is very humid, about 95% humidity all year, which makes the weather sticky and uncomfortable. It also causes problems like clothes taking a long time to dry.

제안: 回答不够流畅且有语法错误，建议简洁明了地说明习惯和时间，避免重复和语法错误。

예시: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every morning after I wake up and see the sunlight.

제안: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，建议完整表达观点，使用正确的语法，并举例说明。

예시: One major effect of climate change is the rising sea levels, which is caused by human activities like cutting down too many trees.

제안: 回答表达有些混乱，建议注意语法和词汇的准确使用，避免重复，并清晰表达原因。

예시: Yes, I'd love to visit cities with different climates, like Sichuan province. I'm interested because of its unique culture and spicy food, which helps me feel more comfortable despite the humidity.

× because they're a typhoon will come into Guangdong province and it brings a terrible weather to us.

✓ because there is a typhoon coming into Guangdong province and it brings terrible weather to us.

这里的错误是单复数问题。'typhoon' 是单数，应该用 'there is' 而不是 'they're'。另外，'weather' 是不可数名词，不需要加冠词 'a'。建议记住不可数名词不加冠词，单数名词前用正确的单数形式。

× because I'm leaving Guangdong province and, and uh, and it lived there.

✓ because I live in Guangdong province and I have lived there.

这里的错误是过去时使用不当。'I'm leaving' 表示正在离开，不符合语境，应使用一般现在时 'I live'。'it lived there' 语法错误，主语应为 'I'，且应使用现在完成时 'have lived' 表示持续居住。建议注意时态和主语的一致性。

× I prefer dry weather because I live in Guangdong province where the humidity is too high is very high, around 95% whole year.

✓ I prefer dry weather because I live in Guangdong province where the humidity is very high, around 95% of the whole year.

这里的错误是重复和表达不清。'is too high is very high' 重复，应删去一个。'whole year' 前应加介词 'of the'。建议注意句子简洁和介词使用。

× It also bring us many difficult problems like the clothes.

✓ It also brings us many difficult problems like with clothes.

主语 'It' 是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加 -s，改为 'brings'。'like the clothes' 表达不清，改为 'like with clothes' 更合适。建议注意主谓一致和介词搭配。

× It always happening in I haven't after I wake up, I always see the sun, sunlight and then I will check the fro uh the weather forecast too.

✓ It always happens after I wake up. I always see the sunlight and then I check the weather forecast too.

'It always happening' 应为一般现在时 'It always happens'。'in I haven't' 语法错误，应删去。'I will check' 改为一般现在时 'I check' 与习惯动作一致。建议注意时态和句子结构。

× Well the famous 1 of it is is the sea level is rising and it also and it because of the human activity like like cuts too much trees or or.

✓ Well, one famous effect is that the sea level is rising because of human activities like cutting down too many trees.

句子结构混乱，重复 'is is'，缺少连词 'that'，'cuts too much trees' 应为动名词短语 'cutting down too many trees'，'too much' 用于不可数名词，树应用复数 'many trees'。建议理清句子结构，注意动词形式和量词使用。

× Yes, I'd love to visit city with different climate like Sichuan province.

✓ Yes, I'd love to visit a city with a different climate like Sichuan province.

'city' 是可数名词，单数时前面应加冠词 'a'。'climate' 也应加冠词 'a'。建议注意可数名词的冠词使用。

× Although they're also humanity humid but the spicy food can help my skin feel more comfortable than.

✓ Although it is also very humid, the spicy food can help my skin feel more comfortable.

'they're' 用错，指代应为 'it'。'humanity humid' 应为 'very humid'。句中 'but' 与 'although' 重复，删去 'but'。句尾 'more comfortable than' 不完整，删去 'than'。建议注意代词使用，形容词搭配和句子连贯。