Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Ответ должен быть более структурированным и естественным. Избегайте лишних пауз и повторов, используйте связующие слова для плавности речи.

예시: I live in Varmesh, a city in South Park. The weather is generally pleasant; summers are sunny with occasional rain, and winters are mild without much cold.

제안: Ответ должен быть более ясным и логичным. Избегайте неясных выражений и повторов, используйте связующие слова для улучшения связности.

예시: I definitely prefer hot weather because I was born in summer. Sunny days make me feel energetic and motivated to complete my tasks.

제안: Ответ слишком короткий и содержит повторы. Следует давать более развернутый ответ с конкретными деталями и использовать связующие слова.

예시: I prefer wet weather because it helps plants grow and keeps the environment fresh. Although it can be inconvenient sometimes, I enjoy the coolness it brings.

제안: Ответ содержит ошибки и нечеткие выражения. Следует использовать правильные фразы и более логично структурировать ответ.

예시: Yes, I check the weather forecast almost every day. This helps me plan my activities, like meeting friends or going out, based on the weather conditions.

제안: Ответ содержит противоречия и ошибки. Следует четко выразить мнение и использовать точные слова, избегая путаницы.

예시: Climate change is a serious problem today. One of its most devastating effects is global warming, which causes ice to melt and leads to rising sea levels.

제안: Ответ неясен и содержит ошибки. Следует давать четкий и связный ответ с конкретными примерами.

예시: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates. For example, I once lived in a city with a cold winter, which was very different from my hometown.

× sometimes it can be raining

✓ sometimes it can rain

The modal verb 'can' should be followed by the base form of the verb, not the '-ing' form. Therefore, 'can be raining' is incorrect; it should be 'can rain'.

× I was born in summer so I'm looking for a summer person

✓ I was born in summer so I'm a summer person

The phrase 'looking for a summer person' is incorrect in this context. The student likely means to say they identify as a 'summer person'. The preposition 'for' is unnecessary and changes the meaning.

× I love sunny and because sunny reflects sun, sunny weather reflects on my mind

✓ I love sunny weather because it reflects the sun and brightens my mind

The original sentence is fragmented and uses 'sunny' as a noun incorrectly. 'Sunny' is an adjective and should modify 'weather'. Also, the phrase 'reflects on my mind' is unclear; 'brightens my mind' or similar is more appropriate.

× I feel energy to do my tasks

✓ I feel energetic to do my tasks

'Energy' is a noun, but the sentence requires an adjective to describe the feeling. 'Energetic' is the correct adjective form to express feeling lively or active.

× I now enjoy our wet weather weather

✓ I now enjoy our wet weather

The word 'weather' is repeated unnecessarily. Removing the duplicate improves clarity.

× I definitely have a ability to check the weather of the past

✓ I definitely have the ability to check the past weather

The article 'a' is incorrect before 'ability' because 'ability' starts with a vowel sound and is a singular noun requiring 'an' or 'the'. Also, 'weather of the past' is better expressed as 'past weather'.

× I want to know what is weather like outside

✓ I want to know what the weather is like outside

The sentence structure is incorrect. The correct form is 'what the weather is like' with the definite article 'the' before 'weather' and proper word order.

× Now climate change is rarely a serious problem

✓ Now climate change is a serious problem

The adverb 'rarely' contradicts the intended meaning. Climate change is generally considered a serious problem, so 'rarely' should be removed.

× the most devastating consequences of it is global warming

✓ the most devastating consequence of it is global warming

The subject 'consequences' is plural but the verb 'is' is singular. To agree, either change 'consequences' to singular 'consequence' or change 'is' to 'are'. Here, singular is preferred.

× as a result amount of ice I performed

✓ as a result, the amount of ice has decreased

The phrase 'amount of ice I performed' is incorrect and unclear. Likely, the student meant to say the amount of ice has changed due to global warming. Using 'has decreased' is appropriate past participle form here.

× I definitely want to change different cities and places for climate

✓ I definitely want to visit different cities and places with different climates

The verb 'change' is incorrect here; 'visit' fits better. Also, 'for climate' is incorrect preposition usage; 'with different climates' is correct.

× different dictionary

✓ different climates

'Dictionary' is a wrong word here; likely the student meant 'climate'. Replacing 'dictionary' with 'climates' corrects the meaning.

× where climate is totally different, uh, for example. In the winter

✓ where the climate is totally different, for example, in the winter

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'climate'. Also, the sentence should be continuous without abrupt stops, and 'for example' should be integrated properly.