Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如'scrunching hot'和'joined up'不符合英语习惯表达，且句子结构不够自然。建议使用更地道的表达方式，并注意形容词和副词的正确使用。

예시: It's very hot here. After walking outside for just 10 minutes, I feel exhausted. I think Wuhan is one of the sunniest cities in China, with temperatures often above 40 degrees Celsius.

제안: 回答中表达不够清晰，存在语法错误和不自然的词汇使用，如'scrunchy'和'joined up'。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免重复，并使用正确的形容词。

예시: Actually, I don't like either cold or hot weather. Summers are too hot and uncomfortable, especially in a sunny city like mine. Winters are also unpleasant because I have to wear bulky clothes.

제안: 回答较为自然，但可以增加连接词使句子更连贯，同时丰富细节描述。建议适当扩展理由，使用更多连接词。

예시: I prefer dry weather because wet seasons make me feel uncomfortable. For example, even if I wash my clothes every day, they never dry properly, which is really annoying.

제안: 回答中存在不自然的表达，如'scratch at the weather forecast'。建议使用更准确的动词，并保持句子简洁自然。

예시: Yes, I check the weather forecast on my phone every day. I usually scroll through the app to see if I need to take an umbrella.

제안: 回答未完成且表达不完整，缺少结尾。建议完整表达观点，使用连贯的句子，并补充具体影响。

예시: I believe climate change has caused serious problems like rising temperatures. For example, summers are much hotter now and harder to bear. When I was a child, we only used fans, but now air conditioners are necessary.

제안: 回答表达了观点，但重复使用'I mean'显得冗余。建议减少重复，使用更多连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: Yes, I would love to visit cities with different climates because it offers new experiences and broadens my horizons. For instance, I want to visit Mongolia to see its vast grasslands, which I think would be breathtaking and enjoyable.

× It's hot, scrunching hot.

✓ It's hot, scorching hot.

单词“scrunching”用法错误，正确的形容词应为“scorching”，表示“炽热的”。

× After walking in the street for only 10 minutes, I feel like I am joined up.

✓ After walking in the street for only 10 minutes, I feel like I am burned up.

“joined up”用法错误，表达被热得难受应使用“burned up”或类似表达。

× I think Wuhan is one of the most sunniest cities across the whole China.

✓ I think Wuhan is one of the sunniest cities across the whole of China.

“most sunniest”是重复比较级，正确用法是“sunniest”。

× I think Wuhan is one of the most sunniest cities across the whole China.

✓ I think Wuhan is one of the sunniest cities across the whole of China.

“across the whole China”应为“across the whole of China”，需要加介词“of”。

× Well, can I say I don't like them either, no matter it's cold or hot.

✓ Well, can I say I don't like either, no matter if it's cold or hot.

“them”指代不明确，应去掉；“no matter it's cold or hot”应改为“no matter if it's cold or hot”。

× Hot summer is too scrunchy, makes me feel like I am joined up, especially in one of the most sunniest cities across the whole China.

✓ Hot summer is too scorching, makes me feel like I am burned up, especially in one of the sunniest cities across the whole of China.

“scrunchy”用词错误，应为“scorching”；“joined up”错误，应为“burned up”；“most sunniest”重复比较级，应为“sunniest”；“across the whole China”应为“across the whole of China”。

× And in winter I need to wear the bulky.

✓ And in winter I need to wear bulky clothes.

“the bulky”不完整，应补充名词“clothes”表示“笨重的衣服”。

× Even if I wash clothes every single day, none of them are dry enough to wear.

✓ Even if I wash clothes every single day, none of them is dry enough to wear.

“none”作为单数时谓语动词用单数“is”。

× I just like scroll through my phone screen and scratch at the weather forecast.

✓ I just like to scroll through my phone screen and check the weather forecast.

“like scroll”应为“like to scroll”；“scratch at the weather forecast”用词错误，应为“check the weather forecast”。

× Then I will know whether to take an umbrella.

✓ Then I will know whether I need to take an umbrella.

“whether to take an umbrella”结构不完整，需加主语和谓语使句子完整。

× Well, I think climate change recently has led to many serious problems such as increasing heat.

✓ Well, I think climate change has recently led to many serious problems such as increasing heat.

“recently”应放在助动词“has”之后，符合现在完成时的语序。

× When I was a kid, my family didn't have an air conditioner, we just used the electric fan.

✓ When I was a kid, my family didn't have an air conditioner; we just used an electric fan.

两个独立分句应用分号或句号分开；“the electric fan”应为“an electric fan”。

× However, nowadays if I can't use.

✓ However, nowadays I can't use one.

句子不完整，缺少谓语和宾语，需补充完整。

× Yes, I definitely want to do this because it's an amazing experience to experience different things and broaden my horizons.

✓ Yes, I definitely want to do this because it's an amazing opportunity to experience different things and broaden my horizons.

“experience”重复使用，建议用“opportunity”替换第一个“experience”使表达更自然。