Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Ваш ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткую структуру. Рекомендуется использовать правильные формы глаголов и более связные предложения, чтобы ответ был естественным и понятным.

예시: The weather where I live is very changeable. For example, it can be hot in the morning but rainy and cool in the evening. I prefer hot weather because it allows me to wear lighter clothes comfortably.

제안: Ответ хороший, но можно добавить связующие слова для плавности и немного расширить детали, чтобы сделать ответ более естественным и полным.

예시: I prefer hot weather rather than cold because it lets me wear lighter clothes and enjoy outdoor activities comfortably. Moreover, in hot weather, I can do almost everything, which is not possible when it's cold.

제안: Ответ хороший, но стоит улучшить связность с помощью более разнообразных связующих слов и немного упростить структуру для естественности.

예시: I prefer dry weather over wet because it makes outdoor activities more comfortable. For instance, I can go shopping or ride my bicycle easily. On the other hand, wet weather usually keeps me indoors, limiting my activities.

제안: Ответ неясен и содержит ошибки. Рекомендуется использовать простые и четкие предложения, чтобы ясно выразить мысль и улучшить грамматику.

예시: No, I don't usually check the weather forecast. Instead, I look at what other people are wearing to decide how to dress and whether to go outside.

제안: Ответ содержит много грамматических ошибок и нечеткую структуру. Рекомендуется использовать простые предложения и конкретные примеры, чтобы сделать ответ более понятным и связным.

예시: I believe climate change is caused by human activities, like using cars and developing technology, which harm nature. Many people do not try to protect the environment.

제안: Ответ понятен, но можно улучшить связность и грамматику, а также сделать предложения более естественными и плавными.

예시: Yes, I would definitely like to visit other cities because I enjoy traveling. The climate difference is not a big deal for me because seeing new places is more important than staying at home.

× I live in the place where the weather are very changeable, like in the morning you can have hot and in the evening it's rain and it's really cool.

✓ I live in a place where the weather is very changeable; for example, in the morning it can be hot, and in the evening it rains and is really cool.

The subject 'weather' is singular, so the verb should be 'is' not 'are'. Also, 'it's rain' is incorrect; it should be 'it rains'. The sentence also needed clearer structure for better understanding.

× But however, I think the hot weather is much better because and hot again, we're very open to clothes and.

✓ However, I think hot weather is much better because when it's hot again, we can wear lighter clothes.

The phrase 'But however' is redundant; use either 'but' or 'however'. The sentence is incomplete and unclear; 'because and hot again, we're very open to clothes and' is grammatically incorrect and needs rephrasing for clarity.

× In contrast, wet weather often makes me want to stay home, which limits what can I can do.

✓ In contrast, wet weather often makes me want to stay home, which limits what I can do.

The phrase 'what can I can do' is incorrect; the correct word order is 'what I can do'. The extra 'can' is redundant and disrupts the sentence structure.

× No, I'm not in the habit of checking the weather forecast. I do it very early, but I just watch what people wear for the weather and definitely because of them I am choosing what should I wear or should I go out and I'm pleasure.

✓ No, I'm not in the habit of checking the weather forecast. I do it very early, but I just watch what people wear for the weather, and because of them, I decide what I should wear or whether I should go out, and it gives me pleasure.

The sentence has incorrect word order in 'what should I wear' which should be 'what I should wear' in indirect questions. Also, 'I'm pleasure' is incorrect; it should be 'it gives me pleasure' or 'I enjoy it'. The sentence needed restructuring for clarity.

× I think it's because of people develop technologies and because of that many people buy cars doing the very bad things and destroying the nature, and they don't even really need to try.

✓ I think it's because people develop technologies, and because of that, many people buy cars, which causes very bad things and destroys nature, and they don't even really try to help.

The phrase 'people develop technologies' needs a clearer connection; 'because of people develop' is incorrect. Also, 'doing the very bad things' is awkward; better to say 'which causes very bad things'. 'Destroying the nature' should be 'destroys nature'. The sentence needed correction for tense and clarity.

× Yes, I would definitely like to visit other cities because I like to traveling but if they have different climates from where I live, it's not that big deal because to see other cities is much important to me than sitting at home.

✓ Yes, I would definitely like to visit other cities because I like traveling, but if they have different climates from where I live, it's not a big deal because seeing other cities is much more important to me than sitting at home.

The phrase 'I like to traveling' is incorrect; it should be 'I like traveling' or 'I like to travel'. Also, 'it's not that big deal' should be 'it's not a big deal'. 'To see other cities is much important' should be 'seeing other cities is much more important'. The sentence needed corrections in verb form and article usage.