Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific reasons using linking words. Avoid redundancy and grammatical errors.

예시: The weather where I live is usually warm, but I especially enjoy rainy days because they are cool and make me feel relaxed and comfortable.

제안: Focus on giving a clear and grammatically correct answer. Use linking words to explain your preference with specific reasons. Avoid vague phrases and incorrect grammar.

예시: I prefer cold weather because it is pleasant and allows people to go outside easily without any problems.

제안: Use present tense consistently and avoid repeating similar ideas. Start with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to add specific supporting details.

예시: I prefer wet weather because rainy days make me feel calm and comfortable, which helps me relax.

제안: Make your answer more natural by using correct prepositions and clearer sentence structure. Provide specific details about frequency and reasons using linking words.

예시: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast on Google before visiting a new place because it helps me plan my travel better.

제안: Try to provide at least one specific effect of climate change even if your knowledge is limited. Use linking words to connect your ideas and make your answer more informative.

예시: Although I don't know much, I think climate change has caused more extreme weather events like floods and heatwaves in recent years.

제안: Avoid one-word answers. Give a clear opinion and support it with reasons or examples to make your answer more complete and natural.

예시: No, I prefer to stay in cities with climates similar to mine because I find it more comfortable and easier to adapt.

× I most like a raining day because it is very cool and I feel very comfortable and relaxed in this weather.

✓ I most like a rainy day because it is very cool and I feel very comfortable and relaxed in this weather.

The word 'raining' is the present participle form of the verb 'rain' and is used to describe an action. However, when describing a type of day characterized by rain, the adjective form 'rainy' should be used. Using 'raining' here is incorrect because it does not function as an adjective.

× Well, I prefer to cold weather because it is a very good weather and all people are going anywhere, any problem.

✓ Well, I prefer cold weather because it is very good weather and all people can go anywhere without any problem.

The phrase 'prefer to cold weather' is incorrect; 'prefer' is directly followed by the noun without 'to' in this context. Also, 'a very good weather' is incorrect because 'weather' is an uncountable noun and does not take 'a'. The phrase 'all people are going anywhere, any problem' is unclear and grammatically incorrect; it should be 'all people can go anywhere without any problem' to convey the intended meaning.

× I preferred wet weather because I like raining days and it is comfortable and I feel very relaxed and I also feel calm.

✓ I prefer wet weather because I like rainy days and it is comfortable and I feel very relaxed and I also feel calm.

The use of 'preferred' is past tense, but the context is about a general preference, so the present tense 'prefer' is appropriate. Also, 'raining days' should be 'rainy days' as explained earlier.

× Well, I also have a habit of checking the weather when I go in new place and I also check weather on Google because it is very important for traveling.

✓ Well, I also have a habit of checking the weather when I go to a new place and I also check the weather on Google because it is very important for traveling.

The phrase 'go in new place' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'to' as in 'go to a new place'. Also, 'check weather' should be 'check the weather' because 'weather' here is specific and requires the definite article 'the'.

× Well, I don't have a lot of knowledge about this, but I also know some effect of climate change in recent years.

✓ Well, I don't have a lot of knowledge about this, but I also know some effects of climate change in recent years.

The word 'effect' should be plural 'effects' because it refers to multiple impacts of climate change. Using singular 'effect' here is incorrect when referring to more than one.