Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时应避免语法错误和重复表达，句子应更简洁自然。例如，'I love sunny days because I enjoy lying on the ground and feeling the warm sunshine on my face, which helps me relax.'

예시: I love sunny days because I enjoy lying on the ground and feeling the warm sunshine on my face, which helps me relax.

제안: 回答不完整且有语法错误，应完整表达观点并避免重复。可以说：'I don't like very cold or hot weather, but if I had to choose, I prefer cold weather because I can wear layers to keep warm.'

예시: I don't like very cold or hot weather, but if I had to choose, I prefer cold weather because I can wear layers to keep warm.

제안: 表达不清晰且有语法错误，应更准确表达原因。比如：'I prefer dry weather because wet weather makes my skin oily, while dry weather encourages me to drink more water to stay hydrated.'

예시: I prefer dry weather because wet weather makes my skin oily, while dry weather encourages me to drink more water to stay hydrated.

제안: 回答应更流畅且语法正确。可以说：'Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every morning, especially before traveling, to prepare for the next day.'

예시: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every morning, especially before traveling, to prepare for the next day.

제안: 回答中有语法和词汇错误，应更准确表达观点。比如：'Climate change has caused temperatures to rise significantly in recent years. In some Chinese cities, temperatures can reach as high as 35 degrees Celsius.'

예시: Climate change has caused temperatures to rise significantly in recent years. In some Chinese cities, temperatures can reach as high as 35 degrees Celsius.

제안: 回答应更自然且具体。可以说：'Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates. For example, I want to experience the desert despite its heat because I enjoy the sand and unique atmosphere.'

예시: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates. For example, I want to experience the desert despite its heat because I enjoy the sand and unique atmosphere.

× Well in my hometown the weather is almost a sunny day and I love the sunny day because I like the feelings of laying on the ground and just feeling.

✓ Well, in my hometown the weather is almost always sunny, and I love sunny days because I like the feeling of lying on the ground and just feeling.

这里'sunny day'应为复数形式'sunny days'，因为表示一般的天气情况，且'sunny'前应加副词'almost always'表示频率。'laying'应改为'lying'，因为'lay'是放置，'lie'是躺下。

× It makes me warm and helped me to relax.

✓ It makes me warm and helps me to relax.

前半句用现在时，后半句用过去时不一致，应统一用现在时。

× But if I had to choose, I may choose the cold weather because at least you can wire most layers makes you warm.

✓ But if I had to choose, I might choose the cold weather because at least you can wear most layers that make you warm.

'may'表示许可或可能性，'might'更适合假设语气。'wire'应为'wear'，表示穿衣服。'makes'应改为复数形式'make'，因为主语是复数'layers'。

× I prefer the dry weather because the wet weather always makes my higher oil and at least the dry weather I can drink more water to release the feelings of dry.

✓ I prefer dry weather because wet weather always makes my hair oilier, and at least in dry weather I can drink more water to relieve the feeling of dryness.

'higher oil'应为'hair oilier'，形容词比较级。'feelings of dry'应为'feeling of dryness'，名词形式。

× Yes, I almost checked a weather forecast every day when I get up I always the weather first, especially when I want to travel.

✓ Yes, I almost check the weather forecast every day when I get up; I always check the weather first, especially when I want to travel.

描述习惯动作应使用一般现在时，'checked'改为'check'。

× I always the weather first, especially when I want to travel.

✓ I always check the weather first, especially when I want to travel.

句子缺少谓语动词'check'，导致句子结构不完整。

× I will check the weather in the next day in advance to ensure.

✓ I will check the weather for the next day in advance to be sure.

'in the next day'应为'for the next day'，'ensure'后需宾语，改为'be sure'更自然。

× Well, I think the climate changed a lot in recent years.

✓ Well, I think the climate has changed a lot in recent years.

表示最近几年发生的变化，应使用现在完成时'have changed'。

× Firstly the temporary become higher and higher for some.

✓ Firstly, the temperature has become higher and higher in some places.

'temporary'应为'temperature'，'for some'应为'in some places'，表示某些地方。

× In some city in China it almost can reach 35 disagree, which is very high.

✓ In some cities in China, it can almost reach 35 degrees, which is very high.

'city'应为复数'cities'，'disagree'应为'degrees'，表示温度单位。

× Yes, I would like to visit other cities that have different climates. For example, I want to go to the desert even though it's very hot because I love the sand and the feelings of hotels.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit other cities that have different climates. For example, I want to go to the desert even though it's very hot because I love the sand and the feeling of hot weather.

'feelings of hotels'应为'feeling of hot weather'，原句中'hotels'与上下文不符，可能是拼写错误。