Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is a bit unclear and has grammatical errors. Try to give a direct response about the weather in your area, use correct tenses, and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to make your answer coherent.

예시: The weather where I live depends on the season. For example, during the monsoon season from June to August, it rains heavily. However, there is little pollution in my area, so the air feels fresh.

제안: Your answer is confusing and has grammatical mistakes. Try to clearly state your preference and explain reasons using linking words. Keep your sentences simple and direct.

예시: I prefer mild weather because very cold weather affects my health. On the other hand, I do not like very hot weather since I do not have an air conditioner at home. So, I prefer moderate temperatures.

제안: Your answer has some good points but lacks clarity and has grammatical errors. Try to organise your ideas logically using linking words and be specific about your preferences.

예시: I often prefer wet weather because I can spend more time with my family indoors. However, wet weather can affect people's work since it is difficult to travel. Despite this, I still like rainy days.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to answer directly and explain why you check the weather forecast, using linking words for coherence.

예시: I do not check the weather forecast regularly, but I do check it before going out. This helps me to dress appropriately and avoid discomfort due to unexpected weather changes.

제안: Your answer has relevant ideas but needs better structure and grammar. Use linking words to connect your points and be more specific in your explanation.

예시: Climate change affects people's lives in many ways. For instance, due to increasing population, rainfall patterns have changed, which harms farmers' crops. Moreover, diseases like malaria and typhoid have increased because mosquitoes breed more during the rainy season.

제안: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to give a clear and concise response with correct verb forms and linking words.

예시: Yes, I would like to visit Shimla because it has a much colder climate than my city. I usually visit there during the hot summer months to enjoy the cool weather.

× Value should depend on the locality, but the locality where I live it rather depend on the season because there is no more pollution in my area.

✓ Value should depend on the locality, but the locality where I live rather depends on the season because there is not much pollution in my area.

The verb 'depend' should be in the third person singular form 'depends' to agree with the singular subject 'locality'. Also, 'no more pollution' is better expressed as 'not much pollution' for clarity.

× In monsoon season that start from June, June to August, the rain is occurred in very large amount.

✓ In the monsoon season that starts from June to August, heavy rain occurs in large amounts.

The verb 'start' should be in third person singular present tense 'starts' to agree with 'season'. 'Is occurred' is incorrect; 'occurs' is the correct present tense form. Also, 'in very large amount' should be 'in large amounts' for plural and natural expression.

× I prefer both weather because I have not like very cold because it affects our health but in hot weather I also feel very because I have no air conditioner at my home that's why I don't prefer more heat but sometime I prefer.

✓ I prefer both types of weather because I do not like very cold weather as it affects our health, but in hot weather, I also feel uncomfortable because I have no air conditioner at my home. That's why I don't prefer too much heat, but sometimes I do.

Incorrect pronoun usage and sentence structure caused confusion. 'I have not like' should be 'I do not like'. 'Feel very' is incomplete; 'feel uncomfortable' is appropriate. 'More heat' should be 'too much heat'. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'.

× Well, it's many times when I prefer wet weather because whenever I try to spend my time with my parents or my family.

✓ Well, many times I prefer wet weather because I try to spend time with my parents or my family.

'It's many times' is incorrect; 'many times' is sufficient. 'Whenever I try to spend my time' is better as 'I try to spend time' for clarity and correctness.

× But wet weather also impact on people's working life, people not able to go at their work in wet feathers.

✓ But wet weather also impacts people's working life; people are not able to go to their work in wet weather.

'Impact on' should be 'impacts' as a verb here. 'Go at their work' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'go to their work'. 'Wet feathers' is a mispronunciation or typo for 'wet weather'.

× No not really but whenever I go out then I check the weather forecast because I have not want to suffer from the weather like my dresses whenever I go to my school that's why I prefer to check the weather because that help to in different.

✓ No, not really, but whenever I go out, I check the weather forecast because I do not want to suffer from the weather, like getting my clothes wet when I go to school. That's why I prefer to check the weather because it helps me prepare differently.

'I have not want' is incorrect; it should be 'I do not want'. The sentence was run-on and unclear; breaking it into parts improves clarity. 'That help to in different' is incorrect; 'it helps me prepare differently' is correct.

× How will the climate change effect on the people's life due to more populations, the rain not occur on its time that impact on farmers crops and also case different types diseases like the mosquitoes in rainy season creates more malaria and typhoid diseases.

✓ How will climate change affect people's lives due to increasing population? Rain does not occur on time, which impacts farmers' crops and also causes different types of diseases, like mosquitoes in the rainy season creating more malaria and typhoid cases.

'Effect' should be 'affect' as a verb. 'Populations' should be 'population' (uncountable). 'Rain not occur on its time' should be 'rain does not occur on time'. 'Impact on farmers crops' should be 'impacts farmers' crops'. 'Case different types diseases' should be 'causes different types of diseases'.

× Yes, I would like to visit on Shimla because it is the coldest place in the world.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit Shimla because it is the coldest place in the world.

'Visit' does not require the preposition 'on' before a place name.

× I visits there during when it when it is the hot weather in my city.

✓ I visited there when it was hot weather in my city.

'Visits' should be past tense 'visited' to match the past time reference. 'During when it when it is' is redundant and incorrect; 'when it was' is correct.