Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时句子较长且有语法错误，表达不够自然。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并注意时态和语法的正确使用。

예시: The weather in my area is quite unpredictable. It often rains in the morning, but the sun usually comes out in the afternoon. During summer nights, it rains heavily, which sometimes disturbs my sleep.

제안: 回答内容较好，但有语法错误和用词不当，如“AT shirt”应为“T-shirt”，且句子连接不够流畅。建议注意词汇准确性和句子连贯性。

예시: I prefer moderate weather, around 24 degrees Celsius. It's comfortable because you can wear a T-shirt or light clothes and enjoy outdoor activities easily.

제안: 回答中有重复词汇“actually”，且开头不够自然。建议开头直接表达观点，避免重复，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: I actually prefer dry weather because where I live, it rains a lot. The high humidity makes my clothes and bed sheets damp, which is uncomfortable. Therefore, I would like to live in a drier place.

제안: 回答不够完整且有语法错误，最后一句“Advanced”无意义。建议明确说明频率和方式，避免无关词汇。

예시: Yes, I sometimes check the weather forecast, especially before I travel. I find it useful to know the local climate to prepare accordingly.

제안: 回答内容较好，但句子结构不够自然，且有语法错误。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意时态和语法。

예시: I think the most noticeable effect of climate change is that temperatures in my area have increased. Last winter was the warmest I have ever experienced. Also, sea levels have risen recently due to melting ice.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不自然，如“have experience or different places”。建议使用更准确的表达，并注意句子结构。

예시: Yes, I think it would be interesting to experience different places and see how people adapt to their climates. I especially want to visit northern China, where winters are very cold, so I can try skating there.

× I think the climate in my area is terrible and unpredictable because it's always raining in the morning and then the sun comes out in the afternoon and especially in the summer it always raining during the whole night and I can't even have a good sleep.

✓ I think the climate in my area is terrible and unpredictable because it's always raining in the morning and then the sun comes out in the afternoon, and especially in the summer it is always raining during the whole night and I can't even have a good sleep.

句中缺少动词“is”，导致句子结构不完整。'it always raining'应改为'it is always raining'，以符合主谓一致和时态要求。

× I prefer moderate weather. I think maybe about 24° is the most comfortable and pleasant environment. You can wear AT shirt or a light clothes and you can do some outdoor activities.

✓ I prefer moderate weather. I think maybe about 24° is the most comfortable and pleasant temperature. You can wear a T-shirt or light clothes and you can do some outdoor activities.

'AT shirt'应为'a T-shirt'，冠词使用错误；'a light clothes'中'clothes'为复数，不能用不定冠词'a'，应去掉'a'。此外，'environment'用词不当，应改为'temperature'更符合语境。

× Or wet weather, actually. Actually I prefer the dry weather because the place I live is always raining so the high humidity makes my clothes and bed sheets damp and uncomfortable. So I really want a more dry place.

✓ Wet weather, actually. Actually, I prefer dry weather because the place I live in is always rainy, so the high humidity makes my clothes and bed sheets damp and uncomfortable. So I really want a drier place.

句首的'Or'用法不当，应去掉；'the dry weather'前不需要定冠词；'the place I live is always raining'应改为'the place I live in is always rainy'，动词和形容词使用错误；'more dry'应改为比较级'drier'。

× Yes, I sometimes check the weather but not for a regular time. I just checked in before my trip. I think it's convenient if you know the local climate. Advanced.

✓ Yes, I sometimes check the weather but not at regular times. I just checked it before my trip. I think it's convenient if you know the local climate in advance.

'not for a regular time'应改为'not at regular times'，介词使用错误；'checked in'通常指登记入住，应改为'checked it'；'Advanced'单独使用不合适，应改为'in advance'表示提前。

× I think the most notable point is the temperature where I live is higher than any other years and the last winter is the most warm winter I have ever experienced. Another point is the sea level is higher recently because of the ice melt.

✓ I think the most notable point is that the temperature where I live is higher than in any other year, and last winter was the warmest winter I have ever experienced. Another point is that the sea level has risen recently because of the ice melting.

'than any other years'应改为'than in any other year'，单复数和介词错误；'the last winter is the most warm winter'时态和比较级错误，应改为'last winter was the warmest winter'；'sea level is higher recently'时态错误，应改为'sea level has risen recently'；'ice melt'应改为'ice melting'。

× Yes, I think it's interesting to have experience or different places and see how people adapt to their climate. And I really want to go to the north part of China where temperature is really low in winter and I want to skating there.

✓ Yes, I think it's interesting to have experiences in different places and see how people adapt to their climate. And I really want to go to the northern part of China where the temperature is really low in winter, and I want to skate there.

'have experience or different places'表达不清，应改为'have experiences in different places'；'north part'应为'northern part'，形容词用法；'temperature is really low'前应加定冠词'the'；'want to skating'动词不定式后应接动词原形，改为'want to skate'。