Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答内容较为丰富且结构清晰，但可以使用更多连接词使表达更连贯自然，例如使用“because”或“so”来连接句子。

예시: I live in Chongqing, where the weather is quite unpredictable because it often alternates between heavy rain and bright sunshine. This makes the air humid and sometimes a bit oppressive, so the weather can be uncomfortable, especially when it's damp for several days in a row.

제안: 回答内容具体且有个人观点，但句子衔接稍显生硬，建议使用更多连接词如“also”或“furthermore”来增强连贯性。

예시: I prefer cold weather to hot weather because in winter we can stay at home comfortably with a heating system. Also, the Spring Festival takes place in winter, which allows us to gather and enjoy a family reunion dinner that symbolizes solidarity and love.

제안: 回答表达清晰且有对比，但可以增加一些具体例子或细节，使内容更丰富。

예시: I prefer dry weather to wet weather because it often makes people feel more comfortable and refreshing. For example, in dry weather, I can go out easily without worrying about getting soaked, whereas wet weather can make people feel humid and heavy, which is quite unpleasant.

제안: 回答自然且内容完整，但句子结构可以更简洁，避免冗余。

예시: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every evening on a weather app while lying in bed. This helps me choose appropriate clothes and plan my journey more conveniently.

제안: 回答内容具体且逻辑清晰，建议在句子间加入更多连接词如“thus”或“as a result”以增强连贯性。

예시: Climate change has had a significant impact on the world, causing more harm than good. For example, it has led to the melting of glaciers and a rise in global temperatures, which as a result contributes to extreme weather and environmental degradation. Therefore, everyone has a responsibility to protect the environment.

제안: 回答中存在语法和表达不够自然的问题，建议使用更连贯的句子结构，并避免数字序号，改用连接词。

예시: Yes, I'd like to visit other cities. My hometown is Baoji in Shaanxi province, but I want to explore other cities in China because I enjoy experiencing new things and journeys. Also, I am attracted to the beautiful and interesting scenery in Jiangnan, especially the Watertown areas.

× Compared with hot weather, I prefer cold weather because there in the winter we can stay at home comfortably with a heating system.

✓ Compared with hot weather, I prefer cold weather because in the winter we can stay at home comfortably with a heating system.

介词“there in the winter”使用不当，应去掉“there”，直接用“in the winter”表示“在冬天”。

× Besides, the Spring Festival takes places in winter.

✓ Besides, the Spring Festival takes place in winter.

动词“take”在第三人称单数时应使用“takes”，但“takes places”是错误搭配，正确表达是“takes place”，表示“发生”。

× On the other hand, wet weather often make people feel more humid and heavy, which can be quite unpleasant.

✓ On the other hand, wet weather often makes people feel more humid and heavy, which can be quite unpleasant.

主语“wet weather”为第三人称单数，谓语动词应加-s，故“make”应改为“makes”。

× Every evening, I am lying on the bed and open a weather app to see what the weather will be like the next day.

✓ Every evening, I lie on the bed and open a weather app to see what the weather will be like the next day.

描述习惯性动作时应使用一般现在时，“I am lying”改为“I lie”。

× For example, it has led to the melting of glaciers and a rise in global temperatures, which in turn contributes to extreme weathers and environmental degradation.

✓ For example, it has led to the melting of glaciers and a rise in global temperatures, which in turn contributes to extreme weather and environmental degradation.

“weather”作为不可数名词，不应加复数形式“weathers”。

× There are two reasons. 1 is that I like to experience new things and new journey. The other is I really like the attractive and interesting scenery in Jiangnan, Watertown.

✓ There are two reasons. The first is that I like to experience new things and new journeys. The second is that I really like the attractive and interesting scenery in Jiangnan, Watertown.

数字序号表达不规范，应使用“the first”与“the second”引导；“new journey”应为复数“new journeys”；第二句缺少连词“that”，使句子完整。