Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer needs to be clearer and more natural. Try to avoid unclear phrases like 'very compare compared' and 'makes a lot of vibes'. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and provide specific details about the weather in each season.

예시: I live in Georgia, where the weather changes with the seasons. In summer, it is usually warm and perfect for going to the beach. In winter, it gets cold, and many people enjoy skiing in the mountains. This variety makes living here very enjoyable.

제안: Your answer should be more coherent and avoid unclear expressions like 'go now and winter to be tender'. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific reasons for your preference.

예시: I prefer hot weather because I enjoy visiting the beach during summer. The warm weather lifts my mood, and my friends and I often gather outdoors to have fun together.

제안: Your answer is generally clear but could be improved by correcting grammar and using linking words. Also, explain more specifically why dry weather is better for you.

예시: I always prefer dry weather because I don't drive, and I dislike using an umbrella. Moreover, dry days make it easier to meet friends and stay positive, which is very important to me.

제안: Your answer is good but can be improved by using present tense consistently and adding linking words for coherence.

예시: Yes, I check the weather forecast every morning before I leave for work. This helps me decide how to dress and whether I need to carry an umbrella. It has become an important part of my daily routine.

제안: Your answer is unclear and lacks specific details. Try to express your ideas more clearly, use correct vocabulary, and provide examples of climate change effects.

예시: I think climate change has caused global warming, which leads to more extreme weather. For example, we have experienced heavier rains recently, which affect our daily lives.

제안: Your answer needs to be clearer and more organized. Use linking words to connect your ideas and explain why you want to visit places with different climates, giving specific reasons.

예시: I would like to visit cities with different climates to learn how people adapt to their environment. For instance, I want to see how they prepare for winter and stay safe during harsh weather.

× I live in Georgia, the climate is very compare compared to the seasons.

✓ I live in Georgia, the climate varies a lot compared to the seasons.

The phrase 'very compare compared' is incorrect. The correct form is 'varies a lot compared to' to express differences between seasons clearly.

× Always in summer we have warm weather, in winter cold weather and it is very comfortable.

✓ In summer, we always have warm weather; in winter, cold weather, and it is very comfortable.

The original sentence lacks proper punctuation and conjunctions, making it unclear. Adding commas and a semicolon improves clarity and sentence flow.

× It makes a lot of vibes.

✓ It creates a lively atmosphere.

The phrase 'makes a lot of vibes' is incorrect. 'Vibes' is informal and 'make' is not typically used with 'vibes' in this context. 'Creates a lively atmosphere' is more appropriate.

× In summer you can go to the beach in winter on the mountain.

✓ In summer, you can go to the beach; in winter, to the mountains.

The sentence lacks proper punctuation and parallel structure. Adding commas and semicolons clarifies the meaning and improves readability.

× I prefer hot weather because I love to visit beaches, go now and winter to be tender.

✓ I prefer hot weather because I love to visit beaches, go out now, and enjoy mild winters.

The phrase 'go now and winter to be tender' is unclear and incorrect. 'Go out now' and 'enjoy mild winters' better express the intended meaning.

× The mood is very high in summer and in good weather.

✓ The mood is very high in summer and during good weather.

Adding 'during' before 'good weather' improves the sentence's grammatical correctness and clarity.

× We also gather together with my friends and we enjoy.

✓ We also gather together with my friends and enjoy ourselves.

The verb 'enjoy' requires an object or reflexive pronoun here. 'Enjoy ourselves' correctly completes the sentence.

× I always prefer dry weather because I don't drive and also don't like using umbrella in wet weather.

✓ I always prefer dry weather because I don't drive and also don't like using an umbrella in wet weather.

The noun 'umbrella' requires the indefinite article 'an' before it.

× It's a pleasure to work, to meet up with friends, enjoy the weather and be stay positive.

✓ It's a pleasure to work, meet up with friends, enjoy the weather, and stay positive.

The phrase 'be stay positive' is incorrect; 'stay positive' is the correct form. Also, parallel structure is improved by removing 'to' before 'meet up' and 'enjoy'.

× Yes, I checked the weather forecast every day, usually in the morning before I leave for work.

✓ Yes, I check the weather forecast every day, usually in the morning before I leave for work.

The question asks about habitual action, so present tense 'check' is appropriate instead of past tense 'checked'.

× I think it's important to show really climate change factor is global warm warm globalization process.

✓ I think it's important to show that the climate change factor is global warming and globalization process.

The original sentence is unclear and has incorrect word usage. 'Show that' introduces a clause, and 'global warming' is the correct term.

× I think and fall so much much rains, which give us a special.

✓ I think there has been a lot of rain, which affects us significantly.

The original sentence is grammatically incorrect and unclear. The correction provides a clear and grammatically correct expression.

× I would like to visit other cities that have different climate now from my living place.

✓ I would like to visit other cities that have a different climate from where I live now.

'Different climate now from my living place' is awkward. Using 'a different climate from where I live now' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× It's important to know, be aware how people live there, what are their main supports, what they are gathering for winter to stay in safety.

✓ It's important to know and be aware of how people live there, what their main sources of support are, and what they gather for winter to stay safe.

The sentence lacked prepositions and had awkward phrasing. Adding 'of' after 'aware', correcting word order, and using 'stay safe' improves clarity.