Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答较为简短且缺乏细节，建议增加具体描述，如温度范围或季节特点，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: The weather in my city is quite mild. In summer, temperatures usually stay around 25 degrees Celsius, which is not too hot. In winter, it rarely drops below 5 degrees, so it's quite comfortable year-round.

제안: 表达中有语法错误和重复，建议简化句子结构，使用正确的时态和词汇，并增加连接词使内容连贯。

예시: I prefer cold weather because it snows in winter. My friends and I enjoy throwing snowballs and building snowmen, which is very fun and interesting.

제안: 回答不清晰且语法错误较多，建议用简单明了的句子表达观点，并避免重复和错误词汇。

예시: I prefer wet weather because I don't like hot and dry conditions. Rainy days feel cooler and more comfortable to me.

제안: 表达不够自然且有语法错误，建议使用正确的时态和句型，清晰表达习惯，并使用连接词。

예시: I usually don't check the weather forecast. Instead, I look at the sky; if it's cloudy, I take an umbrella. If it's sunny, I go out without any worries.

제안: 语法和表达不准确，建议使用正确的时态和词汇，增加具体细节，并用连接词使句子连贯。

예시: Climate change has caused the world to become warmer. In recent years, temperatures have reached record highs, and some glaciers are melting and disappearing.

제안: 回答内容混乱且不连贯，建议简化表达，明确说明想去的地方和原因，避免无关内容。

예시: I live in northern China, where winters are very cold. I would like to visit southern China because it has a warmer climate, which would be a nice change.

× I can play it with my friends and we can through the snowball, snowball to each others and also make the snowman.

✓ I can play with my friends and we can throw snowballs to each other and also make a snowman.

动词play后不需要加it，throw是正确的动词形式，snowball应为复数形式snowballs，each others应为each other，snowman前需要加不定冠词a。

× I can play it with my friends and we can through the snowball, snowball to each others and also make the snowman.

✓ I can play with my friends and we can throw snowballs to each other and also make a snowman.

介词with用于表示和朋友一起玩，throw后面直接接名词snowballs，to each other表示相互之间。

× I can play it with my friends and we can through the snowball, snowball to each others and also make the snowman.

✓ I can play with my friends and we can throw snowballs to each other and also make a snowman.

play后不需要it，each others应为each other，代词使用错误。

× I prefer the wet weather because in the dry weather it it respects the hots in for me so I didn't like the hot weather as I just mentioned so the wet 1 is my prefer.

✓ I prefer the wet weather because in dry weather it is hot for me so I don't like hot weather as I just mentioned, so wet weather is my preference.

it it重复，应为it is；respects the hots in for me表达错误，应为it is hot for me；didn't like时态不合适，应为don't like；the wet 1 is my prefer表达不正确，应为wet weather is my preference。

× I would say no, I not have a hobby in checking the weather forecasts and just look at the sun and if they are cloudy I will bring the umbrella.

✓ I would say no, I don't have a habit of checking the weather forecasts and just look at the sun, and if it is cloudy I will bring an umbrella.

not have应为don't have；hobby用法不当，应为habit；they指代不明，应为it；the umbrella前应使用不定冠词an。

× If they're on the sun there I will just go out.

✓ If the sun is out, I will just go out.

they're on the sun表达错误，应为the sun is out，代词使用不当。

× The climate change make the world become warmer and warmer.

✓ Climate change makes the world become warmer and warmer.

climate change是单数，谓语动词应使用makes。

× They have the most highest temperatures in recent years and also some ice mountains well will be disappeared.

✓ There have been the highest temperatures in recent years and also some ice mountains will disappear.

most highest是错误的最高级表达，应为highest；well will be disappeared表达错误，应为will disappear。

× I would say is because now I'm in the north of China and then in the winter our city will be very close.

✓ I would say it is because now I'm in the north of China and in the winter our city is very cold.

句中缺少it作形式主语；close用错，应为cold。

× So I want to travel to the South of China. It is close to it is very hot and it is not. It's very convenient account football.

✓ So I want to travel to the south of China. It is very hot there and very convenient for playing football.

close to it is very hot and it is not表达不清，应为It is very hot there；convenient后应加介词for，account football表达错误，应为playing football。