Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains grammatical errors, such as 'the Texas' and awkward phrasing like 'It will be rain.' Try to make your response more concise and clear by directly describing the weather and avoiding redundancy. Also, use correct grammar and sentence structure to sound more natural.

예시: I live in Dallas, where the weather is usually hot and humid. It can be quite unpredictable, with rain one day and sunshine the next. The humidity is high most of the time, which makes it feel warmer.

제안: Your answer is clear but a bit repetitive and informal with phrases like 'like' and 'those kind of places.' Try to use more precise vocabulary and avoid filler words. Also, structure your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details.

예시: I prefer moderate weather throughout the year, where it is neither too hot nor too cold. This kind of climate is comfortable and allows me to enjoy outdoor activities without extreme conditions.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains incomplete sentences and confusing ideas. Try to organize your thoughts clearly, use complete sentences, and explain your reasons logically. Avoid filler words and ensure your examples support your opinion effectively.

예시: I prefer dry weather because wet conditions can make driving difficult and uncomfortable. Additionally, construction workers and farmers often face challenges working in wet weather, which can delay their tasks.

제안: Your answer is generally clear but has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as 'too applying a sunscreen' and repeated words. Try to use correct grammar and more natural expressions. Also, organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words.

예시: I usually check the weather forecast every morning after I wake up. This helps me decide whether to wear a jacket if it's chilly or apply sunscreen if it's sunny and humid, so I can prepare for the day accordingly.

제안: Your answer is vague, contains many hesitations, and lacks specific information. Try to prepare some basic knowledge about climate change and express your ideas clearly and confidently. Use linking words to connect your points and provide specific examples or effects.

예시: Although I am not an expert, I know that climate change has caused more unpredictable weather patterns, such as extreme storms and temperature fluctuations. These changes affect agriculture and daily life in many regions.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and contains repetitions and filler words. Try to give a complete and coherent response with clear reasons. Avoid repeating words and use linking phrases to make your answer flow better.

예시: Yes, I would love to visit cities with different climates to experience new weather conditions. If I find a place with a climate I enjoy, I might even consider moving there for a better quality of life.

× The weather is very hot and humid here, and the weather in the Texas is not at all predictable.

✓ The weather is very hot and humid here, and the weather in Texas is not at all predictable.

The definite article 'the' is not used before the name of the state 'Texas'. Using 'the' before 'Texas' is incorrect because 'Texas' is a proper noun referring to a specific place and does not require an article.

× It will be rain.

✓ It will rain.

The phrase 'will be rain' is incorrect because 'rain' is a verb here and does not need the verb 'be'. The correct future tense form is 'It will rain'.

× If it is raining today, it will be very hot and even tomorrow, and it will rain again on the very next day.

✓ If it is raining today, it will be very hot even tomorrow, and it will rain again on the next day.

The phrase 'on the very next day' is awkward; 'on the next day' is more natural. Also, 'and even tomorrow' should be 'even tomorrow' without 'and' to improve sentence flow.

× So I prefer those kind of places to live and I I do not prefer like too hot or too cold weather usually.

✓ So I prefer those kinds of places to live, and I do not usually prefer weather that is too hot or too cold.

The phrase 'those kind of places' should be 'those kinds of places' because 'those' is plural and must agree with the plural noun 'kinds'. Also, the sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× wet weather will, which is not very comfortable to drive or to live in a place like people where there will be a lot of construction workers, where they cannot work in a driver.

✓ Wet weather is not very comfortable for driving or living in places where there are many construction workers who cannot work as drivers.

The original sentence has unclear pronoun references and awkward phrasing. 'Wet weather will, which is not very comfortable to drive' is incorrect. The correction clarifies the meaning and corrects pronoun use.

× And also in the agricultural fields with the dry weather, like people cannot, uh, do their work in a best way.

✓ Also, in agricultural fields during dry weather, people cannot do their work in the best way.

The preposition 'with' is incorrect here; 'during' is appropriate to indicate time. Also, 'in a best way' should be 'in the best way'.

× I often check weather forecast every day in the morning right after I wake up so that I can plan my day accordingly.

✓ I often check the weather forecast every day in the morning right after I wake up so that I can plan my day accordingly.

The phrase 'weather forecast' requires the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific forecast.

× Either to wear a jacket if it is too chill or if it is too humid at least too applying a sunscreen on my face so that it is uh, it will make me ready ready for the day.

✓ Either to wear a jacket if it is too chilly or, if it is too humid, at least to apply sunscreen on my face so that I will be ready for the day.

'Too chill' is incorrect; the adjective form 'chilly' should be used. 'Too applying' is incorrect; it should be 'to apply'. Also, 'a sunscreen' is usually just 'sunscreen' without an article.

× I don't know much deep about the climate change and how it has affected, uh, in a residues, but I'll try to say like as far as I know.

✓ I don't know much in depth about climate change and how it has affected us recently, but I'll try to say as far as I know.

'Much deep' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'much in depth'. 'In a residues' is unclear and likely a mishearing; 'recently' fits the context better.

× So according to the because of the climate change, like there are unpredictable weather changes and also there is a problem.

✓ So, because of climate change, there are unpredictable weather changes and also some problems.

The phrase 'according to the because of the climate change' is incorrect and redundant. 'Because of climate change' is sufficient without 'the' before 'climate change'.