Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时应避免重复表达“comfortable”，并且注意语法和表达的自然流畅性。可以更具体描述天气特点，如温度范围或季节变化。

예시: The weather in my city is generally mild and dry all year round, with warm summers and cool winters. This makes it ideal for outdoor activities like jogging and relaxing in parks.

제안: 回答中表达不够清晰，语法错误较多，且内容不够具体。建议用更准确的词汇表达喜好，并说明原因。

예시: I prefer cold weather because I enjoy wearing layered clothes and cozy sweaters. In contrast, hot weather feels uncomfortable and limits my clothing choices.

제안: 回答中句子结构较长且有语法错误，建议分句表达并使用连接词，使表达更连贯自然。

예시: I prefer dry weather because I grew up in a dry region in northeast China, where people enjoy outdoor activities comfortably. On the other hand, wet climates can make clothes damp and uncomfortable.

제안: 回答较好，但表达略显重复和不够简洁。建议简化句子结构，使用更自然的表达方式。

예시: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast on my iPhone around 6 or 7 AM before leaving home. This helps me decide what to wear and whether to bring an umbrella.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不完整且不清晰。建议使用完整句子，明确说明气候变化的具体影响。

예시: In my opinion, climate change has greatly affected people's daily lives by causing more extreme weather, such as hotter summers and colder winters, which sometimes prevent people from going outside.

제안: 回答内容较好，但表达略显简单。建议丰富细节，使用更准确的词汇描述体验。

예시: Yes, I would love to visit cities with different climates. For instance, visiting Harbin with its cold weather would allow me to enjoy unique attractions like the Ice Festival, which would be a fascinating experience.

× For example, the people can enjoy living outdoors for some activities like jogging or just chilling out.

✓ For example, people can enjoy living outdoors for some activities like jogging or just chilling out.

这里的“the people”使用了定冠词，表示特定的人群，但句意是泛指人们，因此应去掉“the”，使用复数名词“people”。

× It's quite comfortable climate for citizens to enjoy their own.

✓ It's quite a comfortable climate for citizens to enjoy on their own.

“comfortable climate”前缺少不定冠词“a”，因为这里指的是一个可数名词的单数形式。此外，“enjoy their own”表达不完整，应该是“enjoy on their own”，表示“自己享受”。

× Well, I prefer cold weather because in cold winter I can take on many clothes which is decorated in different cartoons.

✓ Well, I prefer cold weather because in cold winter I can wear many clothes which are decorated with different cartoons.

“take on”用法不当，正确表达穿衣服应使用“wear”。“clothes”是复数，谓语动词应为“are”。“decorated in different cartoons”应改为“decorated with different cartoons”，表示“以不同卡通图案装饰”。

× However in hot summer it surely get white and I can't take off any clothes because it's just one piece.

✓ However, in hot summer it surely gets hot and I can't take off any clothes because it's just one piece.

主语“it”是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加-s，变为“gets”。“get white”表达不清，应为“gets hot”。

× Well, I prefer dry weather because I have lived in a dry climate in the northeast of China, the citizens living in there can enjoy pleasant outdoor life.

✓ Well, I prefer dry weather because I have lived in a dry climate in the northeast of China, and the citizens living there can enjoy pleasant outdoor life.

“citizens living in there”中“in there”多余，正确表达为“living there”。

× In comparison, in some western climate which is really wet, my clothes can get a lot of water in it, which is really uncomfortable.

✓ In comparison, in some western climates which are really wet, my clothes can get a lot of water in them, which is really uncomfortable.

“climate”应为复数“climates”，因为指多个地区的气候。谓语动词应与复数主语一致，改为“are”。“my clothes”是复数，代词应为“them”而非“it”。

× It's almost in six or 7:00 AM in the morning, so in that situation I can choose what clothes I will get and considering if I take an umbrella.

✓ It's almost six or 7:00 AM in the morning, so in that situation I can choose what clothes I will wear and consider if I take an umbrella.

“almost in six”中“in”多余，应去掉。动词“get”用法不当，应改为“wear”。“considering”应改为动词原形“consider”，与前面的“can”构成并列谓语。

× Well, based on my observation, I think climate change have a huge impact on People's Daily life.

✓ Well, based on my observation, I think climate change has a huge impact on people's daily life.

主语“climate change”是单数，谓语动词应为“has”。“People's Daily life”中的“People's”应小写，且“Daily”应为形容词小写。

× For example, climate change generally costs a number of extreme climates, such as the most hottest summer and the coldest winters or in at that time citizens can't get out to.

✓ For example, climate change generally causes a number of extreme weather events, such as the hottest summers and the coldest winters, when citizens can't go outside.

“costs”用法错误，应为“causes”。“extreme climates”表达不准确，应为“extreme weather events”。“the most hottest”是错误的比较级用法，应为“the hottest”。“or in at that time citizens can't get out to”语法混乱，应改为“when citizens can't go outside”。

× Yes, I will definitely visit other cities that have different climates from where I live. It's a really nice experience.

✓ Yes, I would definitely like to visit other cities that have different climates from where I live. It would be a really nice experience.

回答未来意愿时，使用“would like to”更合适，表达愿望。原句时态不匹配，改为虚拟语气更自然。

× For example, if I go to Harbin City, which is a really cold climate, I can experience some cold facilities like the Ice Mountain, which is really new for me.

✓ For example, if I go to Harbin City, which has a really cold climate, I can experience some cold attractions like the Ice Mountain, which is really new to me.

“Harbin City, which is a really cold climate”表达错误，应为“which has a really cold climate”。“cold facilities”用词不当，应为“cold attractions”。“new for me”应改为“new to me”。