Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够连贯，表达有语法错误，且内容重复。建议简洁明了地描述天气状况，并避免无关内容。

예시: It's been raining all day, which I don't like because my clothes stay wet and never dry.

제안: 回答较好，但有语法错误和重复。建议使用更准确的表达，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: I prefer cold weather because I feel more comfortable when it's cool. For example, if my room is too hot, I find it hard to sleep, so I have to move to another room.

제안: 表达不清晰且语法错误较多。建议简洁表达观点，并用具体例子支持。

예시: I prefer dry weather because I don't like my clothes or room being wet, which makes me uncomfortable.

제안: 回答有些重复且语法不准确。建议简洁说明习惯并用连接词组织句子。

예시: Yes, I check the weather forecast every day to decide what to wear based on whether it will be cold or hot.

제안: 表达有语法错误，且句子结构不够清晰。建议使用更准确的时态和连接词，丰富细节。

예시: I think climate change has caused longer periods of hot weather this year, making people uncomfortable and causing harm to both humans and animals.

제안: 回答不完整且语法错误较多。建议完整表达想法，避免句子中断，并用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: Yes, I like visiting cities with different climates. For example, when my city is very hot, I go to cooler places like Guangxi province to enjoy the weather.

× It's raining all day and I don't like this weather because when I wash my clothes it's always wet and never be dry.

✓ It's raining all day and I don't like this weather because when I wash my clothes they're always wet and never dry.

这里“never be dry”中的“be”用法错误，应直接用形容词“dry”来描述状态，且主语“clothes”复数，谓语应为“are”。

× So I really hate this weather tomorrow or the next month. Always sandy.

✓ So I really hate this weather, whether it's tomorrow or next month. It's always sandy.

原句结构混乱，缺少连词和完整句子，导致表达不清，应补充连词并将“Always sandy”改为完整句子。

× I prefer cold weather because I feel more comfortable when it's cool and I can't live in hot weather.

✓ I prefer cold weather because I feel more comfortable when it's cool, and I can't live in hot weather.

原句缺少逗号连接两个独立分句，影响句子流畅性。

× For example, if my room is too hot and I find it's hard to sleep or I really I have to move to another room.

✓ For example, if my room is too hot, I find it hard to sleep, so I really have to move to another room.

原句中“or I really I have to”结构混乱，缺少连词，应调整为因果关系的完整句子。

× if my clothes is wet or my room is full of the water I will I feel uncomfortable about it.

✓ if my clothes are wet or my room is full of water, I feel uncomfortable about it.

“clothes”是复数，谓语应使用“are”；“full of the water”中“the”多余，应去掉。

× I will see what's the weather tomorrow and to choose what I will dress up and I see the weather is cold or hot I will wear.

✓ I will check what the weather will be tomorrow to choose what to wear. If the weather is cold or hot, I will dress accordingly.

原句结构混乱，表达不清，应拆分为多个句子并调整语序。

× I think this year the hot weather is continued many days and the temperature is higher than before, Because this hot weather everyone feel uncomfortable and many people or animals died because of the hot weather.

✓ I think this year the hot weather has continued for many days and the temperature is higher than before. Because of this hot weather, everyone feels uncomfortable and many people and animals have died.

“is continued”应改为现在完成时“has continued”；“everyone feel”主谓不一致，应为“feels”；“died”应使用现在完成时“have died”表示最近发生的事情。

× Yes, I like to visit other cities that have different climates from where I live, such as when my city is so hot I will go to another place that have cold weather is for example the Guangxi province, and I like to see the.

✓ Yes, I like to visit other cities that have different climates from where I live. For example, when my city is very hot, I will go to another place that has cold weather, such as Guangxi province, and I like to see it.

“that have cold weather”中的“have”应为第三人称单数“has”；句子结构不完整，需分句并补充缺失部分。