Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“a lot of shower”应为“a lot of showers”，且句子结构不够自然。建议注意冠词和复数形式的使用，同时丰富细节描述，使表达更流畅自然。

예시: The weather in my hometown is usually sunny, but from March to July, we experience the rainy season with frequent showers. I prefer sunny days because they allow me to enjoy outdoor activities like going to the beach or watching sports.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如“prefer to hot weather”应为“prefer hot weather”，“I can going”应为“I can go”。建议加强语法基础，使用正确的动词形式，并避免重复表达。

예시: I prefer hot weather because it lets me enjoy outdoor activities, such as going to the beach with my friends and having picnics in the park, which are not possible in cold weather.

제안: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，如“limits to my activity”应为“limits my activities”，“love travel”应为“love to travel”。建议注意动词搭配和句子结构，使表达更准确自然。

예시: I prefer dry weather because wet conditions limit my activities. Since I love traveling to other cities, wet roads can easily make my shoes dirty, which is inconvenient.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如“seldom to check”应为“seldom check”，“weather for cars”表达不明确。建议简化句子结构，明确表达习惯和频率。

예시: Actually, I seldom check the weather forecast because it doesn't affect me much. When I was a student, I just went to class and stayed at home afterward, so I usually checked the weather only once a week.

제안: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，如“made someone feel anxiety”应为“makes people feel anxious”。建议使用更准确的词汇和句式，表达观点时更具体。

예시: In recent years, especially during summer vacations, the weather has become very hot. This makes it difficult for people to travel outside because the heat causes anxiety and brings many inconveniences.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如“I'm big fan”应为“I'm a big fan”，“If I have opportunity”应为“If I have the opportunity”。建议注意冠词使用，丰富表达，使回答更自然流畅。

예시: Yes, I'm a big fan of traveling. If I have the opportunity, I would love to visit cities with different climates because it allows me to experience unique weather conditions, which would make me very happy.

× However, from March to July it becomes rainy season which brings a lot of shower.

✓ However, from March to July it becomes the rainy season which brings a lot of showers.

这里“rainy season”前缺少定冠词“the”，因为特指某一季节；“shower”应为复数“showers”，表示多次降雨。

× I prefer sunny day because it allows me to go outside to have some outdoor activity like watching or going to beach.

✓ I prefer sunny days because it allows me to go outside to have some outdoor activities like watching or going to the beach.

“sunny day”应为复数“sunny days”，表示一般情况；“outdoor activity”应为复数“outdoor activities”；“going to beach”前应加定冠词“the”。

× I prefer to hot weather because hot weather allows me to have some outdoor activity like I can going to beach with my friend and have some picnic in the park.

✓ I prefer hot weather because hot weather allows me to have some outdoor activities like going to the beach with my friends and having a picnic in the park.

“prefer to hot weather”中“to”多余，应直接用“prefer hot weather”；“going to beach”前应加定冠词“the”；“friend”应为复数“friends”；“have some picnic”应为“having a picnic”。

× I prefer to hot weather because hot weather allows me to have some outdoor activity like I can going to beach with my friend and have some picnic in the park.

✓ I prefer hot weather because hot weather allows me to have some outdoor activities like going to the beach with my friends and having a picnic in the park.

“can going”结构错误，应改为“going”；动词后接动名词形式。

× However, this the cold weather cannot do.

✓ However, cold weather cannot do this.

“this the cold weather”结构错误，应调整为“cold weather cannot do this”；去掉多余的“the”。

× I prefer dry weather, you know, if the weather is wet, it limits to my activity because I'm the person who love travel to other city and if the road is wet, it's easy to make my shoes dirty.

✓ I prefer dry weather, you know, if the weather is wet, it limits my activities because I'm a person who loves to travel to other cities and if the road is wet, it's easy to make my shoes dirty.

“limits to my activity”中“to”多余，应为“limits my activities”；“love travel”应为“loves to travel”；“other city”应为复数“other cities”。

× I'm the person who love travel to other city

✓ I'm the person who loves to travel to other cities

主语是第三人称单数“who”，谓语动词应加-s，变为“loves”；“other city”应为复数“other cities”。

× Actually I seldom to check the weather for cars because the weather will not influence me because when I'm a student I just need to go to the classroom and after the school I stay at home, so I often check the weather once a week.

✓ Actually, I seldom check the weather forecast because the weather does not influence me. When I was a student, I just needed to go to the classroom and after school I stayed at home, so I often checked the weather once a week.

“seldom to check”中“to”多余，应为“seldom check”；“weather for cars”应为“weather forecast”；时态应与过去时间点一致，改为过去时。

× Actually I seldom to check the weather for cars because the weather will not influence me because when I'm a student I just need to go to the classroom and after the school I stay at home, so I often check the weather once a week.

✓ Actually, I seldom checked the weather forecast because the weather did not influence me. When I was a student, I just needed to go to the classroom and after school I stayed at home, so I often checked the weather once a week.

描述过去习惯时，动词应使用过去时态，如“seldom checked”，“did not influence”，“was”，“needed”，“stayed”。

× Obviously in recent years I feel especially in the summer vacation, the weather is very hot.

✓ Obviously, in recent years, I have felt that especially during the summer vacation, the weather is very hot.

“I feel”应改为现在完成时“have felt”，表示从过去到现在的持续感受；“in the summer vacation”应为“during the summer vacation”。

× Obviously in recent years I feel especially in the summer vacation, the weather is very hot.

✓ Obviously, in recent years, I have felt that especially during the summer vacation, the weather is very hot.

“in the summer vacation”应改为“during the summer vacation”，表示在某段时间内。

× It's hard for people to travel outside because the hot weather made someone feel anxiety and expose a lot of inconvenience.

✓ It's hard for people to travel outside because the hot weather makes some people feel anxious and causes a lot of inconvenience.

“made someone feel anxiety”中“someone”应为“some people”，“anxiety”应为形容词“anxious”；“expose a lot of inconvenience”应改为“causes a lot of inconvenience”。

× Yes, I'm big fan of travelling.

✓ Yes, I'm a big fan of travelling.

“big fan”前缺少不定冠词“a”。

× If I have opportunity I really want to visit other city that have different climates.

✓ If I have the opportunity, I really want to visit other cities that have different climates.

“have opportunity”应为“have the opportunity”；“other city”应为复数“other cities”；“that have”与复数“cities”一致。

× It allows me to experience some special climates I never get and I will feel over the moon.

✓ It allows me to experience some special climates I have never experienced and I will feel over the moon.

“I never get”表达不准确，应为“I have never experienced”，时态和表达更自然。