Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to directly describe the weather first, then explain why. Use present tense and avoid redundancy. For example, say 'I live in a small village where the weather is usually hot because of the surrounding agricultural activities.'

예시: I live in a small village where the weather is usually hot because of the surrounding agricultural activities.

제안: Your answer is confusing and has grammatical mistakes. Clearly state your preference and reasons. Use linking words to connect ideas. For example, 'I prefer cold weather because it provides relief from the hot sun, and I find it easier to do activities in winter.'

예시: I prefer cold weather because it provides relief from the hot sun, and I find it easier to do activities in winter.

제안: Your answer contradicts itself and is unclear. If you prefer dry weather, explain why you find wet weather uncomfortable. Use clear and logical sentences. For example, 'I prefer dry weather because wet weather makes me feel irritable and uncomfortable.'

예시: I prefer dry weather because wet weather makes me feel irritable and uncomfortable.

제안: Your answer is understandable but could be improved by adding more details and linking words. For example, 'I am usually busy with my hectic schedule, so I rarely have time to check the weather forecast.'

예시: I am usually busy with my hectic schedule, so I rarely have time to check the weather forecast.

제안: Your answer has some good points but needs clearer structure and grammar. Use linking words and be more specific. For example, 'In recent years, climate change has caused many problems. I think increased agricultural production and pollution are the main reasons affecting the environment.'

예시: In recent years, climate change has caused many problems. I think increased agricultural production and pollution are the main reasons affecting the environment.

제안: Your answer is interesting but a bit unclear and slightly off-topic. Clarify your interest in visiting different climates and link it to your hobby. For example, 'As a book lover, I enjoy learning about different places, so I would like to visit cities with different climates to experience new environments.'

예시: As a book lover, I enjoy learning about different places, so I would like to visit cities with different climates to experience new environments.

× Well, I like living a small village so there is a lot of agriculture production.

✓ Well, I like living in a small village so there is a lot of agricultural production.

The phrase 'living a small village' is incorrect because the preposition 'in' is needed to indicate location. Also, 'agriculture production' should be 'agricultural production' as 'agricultural' is the correct adjective form describing production related to agriculture.

× So the weather was almost hot due to the agriculture production.

✓ So the weather is almost hot due to the agricultural production.

The question asks about the current weather, so present tense 'is' should be used instead of past tense 'was'. Also, 'agriculture production' should be 'agricultural production' as explained before.

× Well I like winter because winter leave for me from the sunny heat and I easily do anything in the summer.

✓ Well, I like winter because winter gives me a break from the sunny heat and I can easily do anything in the summer.

The verb 'leave' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'gives' to express that winter provides relief. Also, 'I easily do anything' is awkward; 'I can easily do anything' is clearer and grammatically correct. Present tense is appropriate here.

× Well, I am busy in my hectic schedule that is why I have no time to check the weather forecast.

✓ Well, I am busy with my hectic schedule; that is why I have no time to check the weather forecast.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect after 'busy'; the correct preposition is 'with'. Also, a semicolon or period is better to separate the two independent clauses for clarity.

× Well there is lot of changes of climate in recent years because the growing of agriculture production and the pollution was the main reason which affect the environment.

✓ Well, there are lots of changes in climate in recent years because the growth of agricultural production and pollution are the main reasons which affect the environment.

'There is lot of changes' is incorrect; it should be 'there are lots of changes' because 'changes' is plural. 'Growing of agriculture production' should be 'growth of agricultural production'. Also, 'pollution was the main reason' should be plural 'pollution are the main reasons' to agree with the plural subject. 'Affect' is correct as it refers to plural reasons.