Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时应避免重复和语法错误，句子结构应更清晰自然。例如，避免重复使用“and”，并注意时态和冠词的使用。

예시: I live in the UK, where it usually rains in winter and is sunny during summer. Currently, it's summer, so the sun rises early, around 4 or 5 am, and sets after 9 pm.

제안: 回答时应注意语法准确性和表达的连贯性，避免口语化词汇如“you know”，并用更准确的词汇表达原因。

예시: I prefer hot weather because cold weather makes me feel anxious. Cold temperatures can cause muscle tension and increase heart rate, while warm weather improves blood circulation and makes me feel comfortable.

제안: 回答中应注意时态一致性和语法正确，避免重复和不连贯的表达。可以更具体描述干燥天气带来的不适。

예시: I prefer wet weather because dry air makes my nose feel uncomfortable and dry, sometimes causing nosebleeds. Also, my facial skin feels irritated in dry conditions.

제안: 回答应更准确表达频率和原因，避免数字使用错误（如“1%”），并注意句子结构的清晰。

예시: I don't usually check the weather forecast, but I do so when I plan to travel to a new city or visit a nearby landmark. This helps me ensure the weather is good before buying tickets.

제안: 回答应更完整和连贯，避免句子不完整和语法错误。应具体说明气候变化的影响并用连接词连接观点。

예시: In recent years, the weather has become hotter compared to before. This discourages people from traveling, which negatively impacts the economy because fewer people spend money on tourism.

제안: 回答应避免口语化表达如“you know”，并用更准确的词汇描述想法，句子结构应更自然流畅。

예시: Yes, I would like to visit places with different climates, such as Iceland, which is very cold and has many ice-covered mountains. I want to see the sea and experience how cold it can be, to see if it feels special.

× I live in UK and here the weather is always like raining in winter and and sunny every day in summer.

✓ I live in the UK and here the weather is always like raining in winter and sunny every day in summer.

“UK”前面需要加定冠词“the”，因为“UK”是特定的国家名称，属于单数专有名词，前面应加定冠词。

× Currently it's summer season so the sun will rise fairly early, maybe at four or five and it will the sunset will happen maybe after 9.

✓ Currently it's summer season so the sun will rise fairly early, maybe at four or five and the sunset will happen maybe after 9.

句中“it will the sunset will happen”结构重复且错误，应去掉多余的“it will”，使句子结构正确。

× Personally I prefer hot weather cause cold weather always make me feel nervous and anxious.

✓ Personally I prefer hot weather because cold weather always makes me feel nervous and anxious.

“cause”是口语缩写，应使用正式的“because”。“cold weather”是第三人称单数，谓语动词应使用“makes”而非“make”。

× cold weather always make me feel nervous and anxious.

✓ cold weather always makes me feel nervous and anxious.

主语“cold weather”为第三人称单数，谓语动词应加-s，使用“makes”。

× maybe cold will make your muscles shrink and your heart will beat quicker so you will feel nervous when hot weather will make your blood circling more fluent and make you feel comfortable.

✓ Maybe cold will make your muscles shrink and your heart beat quicker, so you will feel nervous, while hot weather will make your blood circulate more smoothly and make you feel comfortable.

“when”连接词用法不当，应改为“while”表示对比。动词“circling”应改为动词原形“circulate”，副词“fluent”应改为“smoothly”修饰动词。

× I prefer wet weather cause dry weather I will feel uncomfortable about my nose and especially when I was breathing my nose will be really dry and it will make me bloody.

✓ I prefer wet weather because in dry weather I feel uncomfortable about my nose, and especially when I breathe, my nose becomes really dry and it will make me have a nosebleed.

“cause”应改为正式“because”。“dry weather I will feel”缺少介词，应加“in”。“when I was breathing”时态不对，应为一般现在时“when I breathe”。“make me bloody”表达不准确，应改为“make me have a nosebleed”。

× Have a nose bloody and my skin face will also feel really uncomfortable.

✓ I have a nosebleed and my facial skin also feels really uncomfortable.

“nose bloody”错误，应为“nosebleed”。“skin face”词序错误，应为“facial skin”。

× Normally I will not always check in the weather forecast.

✓ Normally I do not always check the weather forecast.

“check in the weather forecast”中“in”多余，应去掉。动词时态应用一般现在时“do not always check”。

× I will check it mainly 1% to travel to a new city or I plan to travel to a landmark nearby my city.

✓ I will check it mainly when I travel to a new city or plan to visit a landmark near my city.

“1%”用法错误，应改为“when”。“nearby my city”应改为“near my city”。

× So I need to confirm that the weather is great that I can ensure I can buy the ticket.

✓ So I need to confirm that the weather is good so that I can be sure to buy the ticket.

“weather is great that I can ensure”表达不通顺，应改为“weather is good so that I can be sure”。

× I think recent years the weather had been hotter compared with previous years though.

✓ I think in recent years the weather has been hotter compared with previous years.

“had been”是过去完成时，表示过去某一时间之前的动作，不符合语境，应改为现在完成时“has been”。

× It will affect people less likely to go out for traveling and then it will make our economy down.

✓ It will make people less likely to go out for traveling and then it will cause our economy to decline.

“affect people less likely”表达不准确，应改为“make people less likely”。“make our economy down”表达错误，应改为“cause our economy to decline”。

× Lots of people will prefer to watch their.

✓ Lots of people will prefer to stay at home.

句子不完整，“watch their”缺少宾语，语义不明，应补充完整。

× Yeah, I would like to try like, you know, iceberg Iceland there will be really cold and have a lot of ice mountain.

✓ Yeah, I would like to try, you know, Iceland with icebergs; it will be really cold and have a lot of ice mountains.

“iceberg Iceland”表达不清，应改为“Iceland with icebergs”。“ice mountain”应为复数“ice mountains”。

× I want to see the seas and I want to experience how cold I can suffer and whether it will be a special feeling.

✓ I want to see the seas and experience how cold I can endure and whether it will be a special feeling.

“how cold I can suffer”表达不自然，应改为“how cold I can endure”。“and I want to”重复，可省略。