Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
What's the weather like where you live?
수험생
In my city, summer is too hot and winter is too cold. Autumn is not too hot or too cold, and spring is my favorite weather now is summer.
시험관
Do you prefer cold or hot weather?
수험생
I like hot weather because I can eat ice cream and watermelon in summer and I can swim in the river. It makes me relaxed.
시험관
Do you prefer dry or wet weather?
수험생
I like wet weather because there is a smell of dirt after a rain. I enjoy running in the rain without umbrella.
시험관
Are you in the habit of checking the weather forecast? When and how often?
수험생
Sometimes I check the weather forecast. I often check it before I go out so that I can know what clothes I should wear.
시험관
What do you think are the effects of climate change in recent years?
수험생
The extreme sky lane may increase, and climate change is affecting people's health and agricultural ecology.
시험관
Would you like to visit other cities that have different climates from where you live?
수험생
Yes, I like to challenge new things and I believe that I can quickly adapt to the different weather.
평가
총점
Part 1
What's the weather like where you live?
점수: 65.0제안: 回答时应避免信息混乱，明确表达当前季节和喜好。句子结构需更自然，避免语法错误。
예시: In my city, the weather varies a lot. Summer is very hot, and winter is quite cold. I especially like spring because the temperature is comfortable.
Do you prefer cold or hot weather?
점수: 75.0제안: 回答较好，但可以使用更多连接词使句子更连贯，同时丰富细节。
예시: I prefer hot weather because I can enjoy eating ice cream and watermelon. Moreover, I often swim in the river, which helps me relax.
Do you prefer dry or wet weather?
점수: 80.0제안: 回答自然且有细节，但可增加连接词使表达更流畅。
예시: I like wet weather because after the rain, the smell of the earth is refreshing. Also, I enjoy running in the rain without an umbrella.
Are you in the habit of checking the weather forecast? When and how often?
점수: 85.0제안: 回答清晰且结构合理，可以用连接词连接句子，使表达更自然。
예시: I sometimes check the weather forecast, especially before going out, so that I know what clothes to wear.
What do you think are the effects of climate change in recent years?
점수: 60.0제안: 回答中存在语法和词汇错误，需使用准确词汇表达观点，并提供具体影响。
예시: Climate change has caused more extreme weather events recently. It affects people's health and damages agriculture.
Would you like to visit other cities that have different climates from where you live?
점수: 80.0제안: 回答简洁自然，但可增加连接词和具体理由，使表达更丰富。
예시: Yes, I like to try new experiences, and I believe I can quickly adapt to different climates when visiting other cities.
문법
× Autumn is not too hot or too cold, and spring is my favorite weather now is summer.
✓ Autumn is not too hot or too cold, and spring is my favorite season; now it is summer.
句子中“spring is my favorite weather now is summer”结构混乱，缺少连接词，且“weather”用词不当，应为“season”。建议用分号或连接词分开两个独立句子，且将“weather”改为“season”。
× I enjoy running in the rain without umbrella.
✓ I enjoy running in the rain without an umbrella.
“umbrella”前缺少冠词“an”，英语中单数可数名词前通常需要冠词。
× I often check it before I go out so that I can know what clothes I should wear.
✓ I often check it before I go out so that I can know what clothes I should wear.
此句语法正确，无需修改。
× The extreme sky lane may increase, and climate change is affecting people's health and agricultural ecology.
✓ The extreme sky haze may increase, and climate change is affecting people's health and agricultural ecology.
“sky lane”用词错误，应为“sky haze”（雾霾）。此处属于词汇错误，非语法错误，故不在本次修改范围内。
× I like to challenge new things and I believe that I can quickly adapt to the different weather.
✓ I like to challenge new things and I believe that I can quickly adapt to different weather.
“the different weather”中“the”不必要，通常表达“不同的天气”时不加定冠词。
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