Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Tente usar frases mais claras e naturais, evitando repetições e erros gramaticais. Por exemplo, em vez de 'The weather times where I live', diga 'The weather where I live is usually hot'. Além disso, use conectores para ligar as ideias, como 'and' ou 'but'.

예시: The weather where I live is usually hot, similar to summer. However, it often rains in the evening, and after the rain, the temperature becomes more comfortable for sleeping.

제안: Procure estruturar a resposta com frases completas e evitar hesitações. Use vocabulário adequado e evite expressões confusas como 'I'm too more motivate'.

예시: I definitely prefer hot weather because it motivates me to do outdoor activities such as jogging, swimming, or walking in the park. Therefore, I enjoy hot days more.

제안: Melhore a gramática e complete as ideias para que a resposta fique clara e natural. Use conectores para ligar as frases e evite deixar sentenças incompletas.

예시: It depends on the situation. When I need to do outdoor activities, I prefer dry weather because I don't like getting my clothes wet. However, when I stay at home, I enjoy wet weather because I love to sleep during rainy days.

제안: Evite hesitações e frases incompletas. Organize suas ideias claramente e use vocabulário apropriado para explicar a frequência e o motivo de checar a previsão do tempo.

예시: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast on my cell phone every morning. This helps me plan my day better and avoid unexpected weather, making my day more comfortable and organized.

제안: Evite repetições como 'climate climate change' e use vocabulário mais preciso. Além disso, corrija erros gramaticais e conecte as ideias de forma lógica.

예시: I think climate change has caused serious effects in recent years. For example, the increase in global temperatures has led to warmer ocean waters, which in turn have caused severe floods and extreme weather events in many countries.

제안: Evite hesitações e frases incompletas. Organize suas ideias claramente e use vocabulário adequado para expressar seus motivos para visitar cidades com climas diferentes.

예시: I would definitely love to visit new cities with different climates because I can learn about their culture, lifestyles, food, environment, and nature.

× The weather times where I live, uh, it's usually hot.

✓ The weather times when I live, uh, it's usually hot.

The phrase 'weather times' is incorrect; it should be 'times when' to refer to periods. However, this sentence is awkward and unclear. A better sentence would be 'The weather where I live is usually hot.' But since only errors in the list are corrected, this is the minimal fix.

× It's uh, just like a summertime, but uh, almost all in the evening we, we have a raining down.

✓ It's uh, just like summertime, but uh, almost every evening we have rain.

The phrase 'a summertime' is incorrect because 'summertime' is an uncountable noun and does not take an article 'a'. Also, 'have a raining down' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'have rain' or 'it rains'. The preposition 'in the evening' is better as 'every evening' to express frequency.

× The after the rainy, the temperature is more comfortable to sleep.

✓ After the rain, the temperature is more comfortable for sleeping.

The phrase 'The after the rainy' is incorrect; it should be 'After the rain'. Also, 'comfortable to sleep' should be 'comfortable for sleeping' to use the correct preposition and gerund form.

× I definitely prefer hot weather because I'm too more motivate to do uh, outside activities, uh, such as jogging, swimming or walking in the park.

✓ I definitely prefer hot weather because I'm much more motivated to do outside activities, such as jogging, swimming, or walking in the park.

The phrase 'too more motivate' is incorrect. The correct form is 'much more motivated' to express increased motivation. Also, 'outside activities' is acceptable but 'outdoor activities' is more natural.

× So today's uh, hot weather days are more.

✓ So nowadays, there are more hot weather days.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'Today's hot weather days are more' is incorrect. The correction clarifies the meaning by adding 'nowadays' and restructuring the sentence.

× So it depends on the situation because when I needed to do outside activities, I prefer dry weather because I needed to walk on the street and I don't like to wet my clothes.

✓ So it depends on the situation because when I need to do outside activities, I prefer dry weather because I need to walk on the street and I don't like to get my clothes wet.

The verb tense should be present ('need' instead of 'needed') to match the habitual action. Also, 'wet my clothes' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'get my clothes wet'.

× But when I stay at home, I prefer wet weather because I love to sleep when.

✓ But when I stay at home, I prefer wet weather because I love to sleep then.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'sleep when' which is incomplete. Changing 'when' to 'then' completes the sentence logically.

× Yes, I usually check the weather forecast on my cell phone every morning because, uh, I like to plan my day and uh, it avoids, uh, surprises and my day will be more comfortable and organize it, uh, because I can, umm, to.

✓ Yes, I usually check the weather forecast on my cell phone every morning because I like to plan my day and avoid surprises, so my day will be more comfortable and organized.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains unnecessary fillers. 'It avoids surprises' is incorrect; the subject should be 'I' to avoid surprises. Also, 'organize it' should be 'organized' to describe the day.

× I think the climate climate change has caused severe serious effects in recent years.

✓ I think climate change has caused severe effects in recent years.

The phrase 'severe serious effects' is redundant; 'severe effects' suffices. The tense 'has caused' is correct for recent years. The repeated word 'climate' is a typo.

× For example, the increase in global temperature has lead to warmer ocean waters.

✓ For example, the increase in global temperature has led to warmer ocean waters.

The past participle of 'lead' is 'led', not 'lead'. This is a subject-verb agreement and verb form error.

× Each in turn have caused severe floods and swimming weather events in many countries.

✓ Each in turn has caused severe floods and swimming weather events in many countries.

The subject 'Each' is singular and requires the singular verb 'has' instead of 'have'.

× I definitely love to visit, uh, new cities in with a new, uh, a different weather because, uh, I can learn about the culture, the lifestyles and the, uh, know about the food, the environment, the nature, the how.

✓ I definitely love to visit new cities with different weather because I can learn about the culture, the lifestyles, the food, the environment, and the nature.

The phrase 'in with a new, a different weather' is incorrect; 'with different weather' is correct. The sentence is also incomplete and awkward; the correction removes fillers and completes the list logically.