Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答内容较为完整，但用词稍显口语化，如"super hot"，建议使用更正式的表达。此外，句子结构可以更丰富，避免简单罗列。

예시: In Chongqing, summers are extremely hot, winters can be quite cold, and the city experiences frequent rainfall during spring and autumn.

제안: 回答较好，表达了偏好并给出了原因。建议在连接句子时使用连接词，使表达更流畅。

예시: I prefer cold weather because it helps people stay refreshed and comfortable. Moreover, during hot summers, I often have to stay indoors in air-conditioned rooms to avoid the intense heat and sunshine.

제안: 回答内容具体且有例子支持，但句子结构较简单，建议使用连接词增强连贯性。

예시: I prefer dry weather because it makes me feel comfortable and is more convenient. For instance, in Chongqing, the frequent wet weather often makes it difficult for clothes to dry properly.

제안: 回答清晰且有逻辑，建议在句子间使用连接词，使表达更自然。

예시: I check the weather forecast every morning to know the exact temperature. This helps me decide what clothes to wear and whether I need to bring an umbrella.

제안: 回答未完成，且句子结构不完整。建议完整表达观点，避免句子中断，并使用连接词使内容连贯。

예시: In recent years, climate change has led to an increase in natural disasters such as hurricanes, typhoons, and floods. These events have become more frequent and severe, causing significant damage to communities.

제안: 回答表达了意愿，但用词如"never good"较口语化且略显负面，建议使用更正式和积极的表达，并丰富内容。

예시: Yes, I would like to visit other cities with different climates. Since Chongqing's weather can be quite challenging, experiencing diverse climates would be refreshing and interesting.

× In recent years, climate change led to an increase of natural disasters such as hurricanes, typhoons and floods.

✓ In recent years, climate change has led to an increase in natural disasters such as hurricanes, typhoons and floods.

这里使用现在完成时态（has led）更合适，因为句子强调的是从过去到现在的持续影响。过去式（led）只表示过去发生的动作，不强调持续性。建议使用现在完成时表达最近几年发生的变化。

× In recent years, climate change led to an increase of natural disasters such as hurricanes, typhoons and floods.

✓ In recent years, climate change has led to an increase in natural disasters such as hurricanes, typhoons and floods.

短语中应使用介词'in'搭配'increase'，表示“增加的数量或范围”，而不是'of'。这是固定搭配，使用正确的介词能使表达更地道。

× Those natural disasters have become more frequent and severe, which caused the.

✓ Those natural disasters have become more frequent and severe, which has caused serious problems.

原句不完整，缺少宾语，导致句子结构错误。需要补充完整的内容，使句子表达完整且通顺。

× so I'd like to have an experience of other cities with different climates.

✓ so I'd like to have an experience in other cities with different climates.

表达“在其他城市体验”时，应该用介词'in'，表示地点。'experience of'通常用于表示对某事的理解或知识，不适合此处。