Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to form complete sentences and avoid grammatical errors. Also, add a linking phrase to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, start with a clear topic sentence and then explain your feelings about the weather.

예시: The weather where I live is usually very hot, which I don't enjoy because it makes me feel uncomfortable.

제안: Use the correct tense and add more details to support your preference. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

예시: I prefer cold weather because winter is my favorite season, and I enjoy the cool breeze and festive atmosphere during that time.

제안: Pay attention to article usage and verb agreement. Also, explain why wet weather gives you a positive feeling with specific details.

예시: I prefer wet weather because the rain refreshes the environment and makes me feel calm and relaxed.

제안: Avoid repeating the word 'check' and clarify the frequency of checking the forecast. Use linking words to connect your ideas.

예시: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast daily, especially when I expect bad or dry weather, so I can plan my day accordingly.

제안: Focus on grammatical accuracy and clarity. Use specific examples and linking words to explain the effects of climate change clearly.

예시: Climate change has caused increased air pollution and extreme weather events in recent years, which have negatively affected the environment and people's health.

제안: Improve sentence structure and clarify your preference. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

예시: Yes, I would like to visit cities with wet and cold climates because I enjoy experiencing different weather conditions from my usual hot environment.

× In the area where I live is very hot.

✓ The area where I live is very hot.

The original sentence lacks a proper subject. Adding 'The' before 'area' completes the subject, making the sentence grammatically correct.

× I will prefer cold weather because winter is my favorite season.

✓ I prefer cold weather because winter is my favorite season.

Using 'will' with 'prefer' is incorrect here because preferences are generally expressed in the present tense. 'I prefer' correctly states a general preference.

× I will prefer a wet weather because it give me a positive feeling.

✓ I prefer wet weather because it gives me a positive feeling.

'Weather' is an uncountable noun and does not take the article 'a'. Also, 'give' should be 'gives' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Additionally, 'will prefer' should be 'prefer' as explained earlier.

× I will prefer a wet weather because it give me a positive feeling.

✓ I prefer wet weather because it gives me a positive feeling.

The verb 'give' must agree with the singular subject 'it', so it should be 'gives'. Also, 'a wet weather' is incorrect because 'weather' is uncountable and does not take 'a'.

× I have to check whenever there is bad weather or dry weather.

✓ I have to check whenever there is bad or dry weather.

Using 'or' between 'bad weather' and 'dry weather' is acceptable but can be improved by combining adjectives to avoid repetition, making the sentence smoother.

× Due to climate change, there is a air pollution and decision causes in the world and it is a have negative effect of climate change in the recent years.

✓ Due to climate change, there is air pollution and disasters in the world, and it has had negative effects in recent years.

'Air pollution' is uncountable and does not take 'a'. 'Decision causes' is unclear and likely incorrect; 'disasters' fits better. 'It is a have' is incorrect; correct form is 'it has had'. Also, 'in the recent years' should be 'in recent years'.

× Yes, I would like to visit the cities which have wet climate because I like cold climate to visit.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit cities that have a wet climate because I like cold climates.

'The cities' is too specific; 'cities' is better here. 'Which' is better replaced by 'that' for defining clauses. 'Wet climate' and 'cold climate' need articles and pluralization respectively. 'To visit' at the end is unnecessary and awkward.