Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Tu respuesta es un poco confusa y contiene errores gramaticales. Debes usar oraciones completas y claras, y evitar errores como 'Will we have' que no encaja en el contexto. Además, intenta usar vocabulario más variado y conectar tus ideas de forma natural.

예시: I live in a tropical city with abundant vegetation, many trees, and a wide variety of flowers. I really enjoy this kind of weather because it is warm and pleasant throughout the year.

제안: Tu respuesta tiene varios errores gramaticales y algunas frases no son claras, como 'So I prefer the warm water' y 'You can enjoy auto'. Trata de estructurar mejor tus ideas y usar vocabulario adecuado para expresar tus preferencias de manera clara y coherente.

예시: I prefer warm weather because when it's too cold, I have to stay indoors, and when it's too hot, I need air conditioning. Warm weather allows me to enjoy outdoor activities comfortably.

제안: Tu respuesta está incompleta y contiene errores gramaticales como 'you had to stay indoor'. Además, termina abruptamente. Intenta completar tus ideas y usar conectores para que la respuesta sea más fluida y natural.

예시: I definitely prefer dry weather because when it rains, I have to stay indoors doing activities like watching TV or reading. However, dry weather allows me to go outside and enjoy various activities.

제안: Tu respuesta es clara pero contiene errores como 'I checked the water' en lugar de 'I check the weather'. También repites 'almost every day'. Trata de usar vocabulario correcto y evitar repeticiones para mejorar la naturalidad.

예시: Yes, I check the weather almost every day because I have various activities with my children, such as swimming classes and visits to the park, so it's important to know the forecast.

제안: Tu respuesta es comprensible pero repetitiva y con errores gramaticales como 'more hot and hot'. Intenta usar vocabulario más preciso y evitar repeticiones para expresar tus ideas con mayor claridad.

예시: I believe the climate is getting hotter each year. For example, my city used to be cooler in the past, but now the temperatures are rising steadily.

제안: Tu respuesta tiene errores gramaticales y algunas frases poco claras, como 'Different experience in life are very important to your memories to grow up as person'. Trata de usar oraciones completas y vocabulario adecuado para expresar tus ideas claramente.

예시: Yes, of course. I enjoy visiting different kinds of cities, whether hot or cold. Experiencing new climates, like snow, is amazing and helps me grow as a person.

× Will we have a lot of vegetation, lot of trees, a great variety of flowers.

✓ We have a lot of vegetation, lots of trees, and a great variety of flowers.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'Will we have' which is a future tense question form, but the context requires a present tense statement. Also, 'lot of trees' should be 'lots of trees' to correctly express plural quantity. The sentence should be declarative, not interrogative.

× I prefer warm weather because when it's so cold you have to be inside of your house.

✓ I prefer warm weather because when it's so cold you have to be inside your house.

The preposition 'of' after 'inside' is unnecessary and incorrect in this context. 'Inside your house' is the correct phrase.

× It when it's so hot that the same it had to be in the air conditioning because it's it's too hot outside.

✓ When it's so hot, you have to be in the air conditioning because it's too hot outside.

The original sentence is fragmented and confusing. It contains redundant and misplaced words like 'It when', 'the same it had to be'. The corrected sentence is clear and grammatically correct.

× So I prefer the warm water. You can enjoy auto.

✓ So I prefer warm weather. You can enjoy outdoors.

'Warm water' is incorrect; the intended meaning is 'warm weather'. Also, 'auto' is likely a mispronunciation or typo for 'outdoors'. The correction reflects the intended meaning.

× Definitely I prefer dry weather because when it's rainy you had to stay indoor just watching TV or reading a book, you know, just indoor activities.

✓ Definitely I prefer dry weather because when it's rainy you have to stay indoors just watching TV or reading a book, you know, just indoor activities.

The phrase 'you had to stay' incorrectly uses past tense 'had' instead of present tense 'have' to match the habitual action. Also, 'indoor' should be 'indoors' as an adverb.

× Yes, I checked the water almost every day because I have a variety of activities with my children, like going to swimming classes or going to the park, you know?

✓ Yes, I check the weather almost every day because I have a variety of activities with my children, like going to swimming classes or going to the park, you know?

'Checked' is past tense but the context implies a habitual action, so present tense 'check' is correct. Also, 'water' is incorrect; it should be 'weather'.

× Well, I think that is definitely getting hotter every year.

✓ Well, I think that it is definitely getting hotter every year.

The sentence is missing the pronoun 'it' after 'think that'. Including 'it' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× Nowadays it's a little bit more hot and hot every year.

✓ Nowadays it's a little bit hotter every year.

The phrase 'more hot' is incorrect; the comparative form of 'hot' is 'hotter'. Also, 'and hot every year' is redundant and incorrect.

× I enjoy different kind of cities, hot or cold, even the snow is really amazing.

✓ I enjoy different kinds of cities, hot or cold; even snow is really amazing.

'Different kind' should be plural 'different kinds' to agree with plural 'cities'. Also, 'the snow' is better as 'snow' in general sense.

× Different experience in life are very important to your memories to grow up as person, so I really enjoy.

✓ Different experiences in life are very important for your memories and to grow as a person, so I really enjoy them.

The original sentence has subject-verb disagreement ('experience' vs 'are'), missing articles, and unclear phrasing. The correction fixes pluralization, adds necessary articles, and clarifies meaning.