Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to use more formal and complete sentences, avoid contractions like 'gonna', and add linking words to improve coherence. Also, provide a bit more specific detail about the seasons.

예시: I live in Thailand, which has three distinct seasons: summer, rainy, and winter. Currently, it is summer, so the weather is very hot and humid. Because of this, I often feel uncomfortable during the day.

제안: Focus on clear sentence structure and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas and explain reasons more clearly. Also, correct vocabulary like 'sweater' to 'sweaty'.

예시: I prefer cold weather because it is more comfortable for outdoor activities. For example, when I play sports, I don't feel sweaty or tired as I do in hot weather.

제안: Use correct comparative forms and avoid filler phrases like 'you know'. Clarify your ideas with complete sentences and use linking words to connect your points.

예시: I prefer dry weather to wet weather because I don't like feeling wet from rain or sweat. It is more comfortable to wear clothes and go outside when the weather is dry.

제안: Avoid vague phrases like 'I'm not that person' and unclear pronouns like 'her'. Use linking words to explain your habits clearly and provide specific examples.

예시: I usually do not check the weather forecast regularly. However, I check it before important events to avoid unexpected weather conditions when I go outside.

제안: Improve grammar by using correct verb forms and sentence structure. Provide clearer and more specific examples with linking words to explain the effects.

예시: In my opinion, climate change has many effects. For example, in agriculture, unstable weather patterns affect farmers' income because crops may fail due to unexpected conditions.

제안: Complete your sentences and avoid incomplete thoughts. Use linking words to explain your reasons clearly and use correct grammar for singular/plural forms.

예시: Yes, I would like to visit other countries with different climates. I want to explore new places and experience different weather to broaden my horizons.

× Since I live in Thailand, it has three seasons and right now it's gonna be summer.

✓ Since I live in Thailand, it has three seasons and right now it's going to be summer.

The phrase 'gonna' is informal and should be replaced with 'going to' in formal speaking or writing to correctly express future tense.

× I prefer cold weather because it's comfortable to go outside, to do something, to do outside activities because I'm not sweater.

✓ I prefer cold weather because it's comfortable to go outside, to do something, to do outside activities because I don't sweat.

The word 'sweater' is a noun meaning a piece of clothing, but the intended meaning is the verb 'sweat'. Using the correct verb form clarifies the sentence.

× When I do something like the activities, for example, when I do some sport, it's not.

✓ When I do activities like sports, it's not uncomfortable.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Rephrasing it to a complete sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I prefer dry weather than wet weather.

✓ I prefer dry weather to wet weather.

The correct preposition after 'prefer' when comparing two things is 'to', not 'than'.

× I don't want to feel like I'm wet from, you know, wear sweater or the rain because it's not comfortable when I wear like some.

✓ I don't want to feel like I'm wet from, you know, wearing a sweater or the rain because it's not comfortable when I wear them.

The verb 'wear' should be in the gerund form 'wearing' after 'from'. Also, 'sweater' needs an article 'a', and 'like some' is unclear; 'them' correctly refers to clothes.

× No, I'm not that person, but I usually check the weather forecast when I want to go to the important events and I don't want to meet her unexpected situation when I go outside.

✓ No, I'm not that person, but I usually check the weather forecast when I want to go to important events and I don't want to meet any unexpected situations when I go outside.

The phrase 'meet her unexpected situation' is incorrect. 'Her' is an incorrect pronoun here, and 'meet' is not used with 'situation'. Using 'any unexpected situations' is appropriate.

× In my opinion the climate change effects a lot.

✓ In my opinion, climate change affects a lot.

'Climate change' is singular, so the verb should be 'affects' (third person singular present tense). Also, 'the' before 'climate change' is unnecessary.

× For example in my field of work I think it's affect their income of agriculture since the climate is unstable so it's affect them first.

✓ For example, in my field of work, I think it affects their agricultural income since the climate is unstable, so it affects them first.

The verb 'affect' should be in third person singular present tense 'affects' to agree with singular subject 'it'. Also, 'income of agriculture' is better expressed as 'agricultural income'.

× Yes, I would like to visit the other countries that has a different weather for me, like I want to explore the world that's different to expand my.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit other countries that have different weather from mine, like I want to explore the world that's different to expand my experience.

'Countries' is plural, so the verb should be 'have' not 'has'. 'Weather' is uncountable and does not take 'a'. Also, 'for me' is better expressed as 'from mine'. The sentence was incomplete, so 'experience' is added to complete the thought.