Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: حاول أن تجعل إجابتك أكثر تنظيماً وطبيعية، وابتعد عن التكرار. استخدم جمل واضحة ومترابطة مع تفاصيل محددة عن الطقس في كل فصل.

예시: The weather in the UAE is very hot during the summer because of its desert climate. However, in winter, the temperature drops and it becomes quite cool, which I enjoy. This contrast is similar to the weather in Thailand, where I have also experienced seasonal changes.

제안: حاول استخدام روابط بين الجمل لجعل الحديث أكثر سلاسة، ووضح أسباب تفضيلك للطقس البارد مع أمثلة محددة.

예시: I prefer cold weather because I enjoy winter activities. For example, during winter, I often go to the desert for hunting and falconry, which keeps me active. In contrast, the summer heat makes me stay indoors and relax with coffee.

제안: حاول أن تكون إجابتك أكثر وضوحاً وتنظيماً، وقدم أسباباً محددة لتفضيلك نوع الطقس مع استخدام مفردات مناسبة.

예시: I prefer wet weather because dry weather makes me feel uncomfortable. For instance, during dry days, my car gets dusty quickly, which is annoying. Therefore, I find wet weather more pleasant.

제안: حاول أن تستخدم جمل أكثر طبيعية ومنظمة، ووضح متى ولماذا تتحقق من النشرة الجوية مع أمثلة.

예시: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every morning to plan my day. I like to know if it will be hot or cold so I can dress appropriately and decide my activities.

제안: حاول أن تعبر عن أفكارك بوضوح وبترتيب منطقي، واستخدم مفردات مناسبة لشرح تأثيرات تغير المناخ مع أمثلة واضحة.

예시: I think climate change has caused more extreme weather in recent years. For example, the Middle East experiences hotter summers and colder winters than before, which affects people's daily lives.

제안: حاول أن تجعل إجابتك أكثر تنظيماً وطبيعية، وقدم أسباباً واضحة لزيارة الأماكن ذات المناخ المختلف مع تفاصيل محددة.

예시: Yes, I would like to visit Switzerland because my friends have told me it has beautiful nature, clean cities, and cold weather. I am especially interested in seeing the mountains and enjoying the fresh air there.

× The weather is so hot at summer because we are on UAE in the Middle East, but in the winter it's so cold.

✓ The weather is so hot in summer because we are in the UAE in the Middle East, but in the winter it's so cold.

The preposition 'at' is incorrect when referring to seasons; 'in' is the correct preposition. Also, 'on UAE' should be 'in the UAE' because countries use 'in'.

× It's same Thailand, the weather there and I like the weather in the winter anyway.

✓ It's the same as Thailand, the weather there, and I like the weather in the winter anyway.

The sentence lacks the comparative phrase 'the same as' to correctly compare weather. Also, a comma is needed for clarity.

× I prefer the cold weather because I like the winter.

✓ I prefer cold weather because I like winter.

When speaking generally about seasons and weather, articles 'the' are usually omitted.

× I have a lot of activity in my day.

✓ I have a lot of activities in my day.

'Activity' is countable in this context, so the plural form 'activities' is needed after 'a lot of'.

× Just I sit in the my home and the coffee.

✓ I just sit in my home and drink coffee.

The phrase 'Just I sit' is unnatural; 'I just sit' is correct. Also, 'the my home' is incorrect; 'my home' is correct. 'And the coffee' is incomplete; 'and drink coffee' is needed.

× What weather? Because the dry weather it's not good and I feel weird in it and my cards will be so unclean when I clean my car.

✓ What weather? Because dry weather is not good, I feel weird in it, and my car gets very dirty when I clean it.

'The dry weather it's not good' is incorrect; 'dry weather is not good' is correct. 'My cards' should be 'my car'. 'Will be so unclean' is awkward; 'gets very dirty' is better.

× Yes, I am habit of checking the weather of course, because I like to see the weather every day, how it's changed and how it's been so hot and how it should be cold, of course.

✓ Yes, I have a habit of checking the weather, of course, because I like to see how the weather changes every day, how it's been so hot, and how it should be cold, of course.

'I am habit' is incorrect; 'I have a habit' is correct. 'How it's changed' should be 'how the weather changes' for clarity.

× I affect the climate changes will be so good because every year a robber be hot in the Middle East be cold so and maybe in 2013 years more I think the weather will change to a lot, but the Middle East and the robots will be the Middle East hot.

✓ I think the effects of climate change will be significant because every year the weather in the Middle East becomes hotter or colder. Maybe in the next few years, the weather will change a lot, but the Middle East will remain hot.

The original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. It needs restructuring for clarity and correct verb usage.

× Yes, I want to visit Switzerland because all my friends go for it and they say for me they have a good nature and cold weather and a clean city and I like the mountains there and the the. Nature.

✓ Yes, I want to visit Switzerland because all my friends have gone there and they told me it has beautiful nature, cold weather, and a clean city. I like the mountains and the nature there.

'Go for it' is incorrect; 'have gone there' is correct. 'Say for me' should be 'told me'. Repetition of 'the the' is an error. Sentence structure improved for clarity.