Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在重复词汇，且语法错误较多，建议减少重复，注意语法正确性，并使用更自然的表达方式。

예시: It's a sunny day with a clear blue sky and few clouds. I enjoy sunny days because they always make me feel happier.

제안: 回答中有多次重复，表达不流畅，建议简洁明了地表达观点，并使用正确的比较结构。

예시: I prefer cold weather to hot weather because hot weather makes me feel tired and irritable.

제안: 回答中有大量重复和未完成的句子，建议注意句子完整性，避免重复，并提供具体细节。

예시: I prefer dry weather because in wet weather, clothes take a long time to dry, which worries me.

제안: 回答中有重复和语法错误，建议简洁表达习惯，并说明具体时间和频率。

예시: Yes, I check the weather forecast every night before I go to bed to prepare for the next day.

제안: 回答中有重复和语法错误，建议使用正确的比较级和完整句子，具体说明气候变化的影响。

예시: I think temperatures have become higher in recent years. For example, summer temperatures now often reach 40 degrees, which never happened before.

제안: 回答不完整且重复较多，建议简洁明了地表达愿望，并说明原因。

예시: Yes, I would like to visit cities with cooler climates because I live in a very warm city and would enjoy more comfortable weather in summer.

× I live in a very warm cities.

✓ I live in a very warm city.

这里的名词cities是复数形式，但前面的限定词a表示单数，因此应使用单数形式city。

× it's always makes me feel more happier.

✓ it always makes me feel happier.

动词makes前面已经有助动词is（it's），导致动词重复，应去掉is。此外，more happier是比较级的错误用法，happier本身就是比较级，不需要more。

× Yes, I prefer cold weather than hot weather because I I can't.

✓ Yes, I prefer cold weather to hot weather because I can't.

prefer后面应使用介词to而不是than，表示偏好。

× that makes me more tired and more angrier.

✓ that makes me more tired and angrier.

angrier已经是比较级，不需要more修饰。

× if if you in the wet weather, your clothes cannot dry for long days, even even even for three days, they can't be dry.

✓ if you are in the wet weather, your clothes cannot dry for many days, even for three days, they can't dry.

缺少动词are，导致句子不完整。'dry for long days'表达不自然，改为'dry for many days'更合适。'can't be dry'应改为'can't dry'。

× I usually can't get the.

✓ （此句不完整，建议补充完整内容）

句子不完整，缺少宾语或后续内容，导致表达不清。

× I will check the weather every day for tomorrow because always before my always before before my sleep.

✓ I will check the weather every day for tomorrow, always before I sleep.

always的位置应靠近动词，且重复的词语应删除，句子更通顺。

× I think the temperatures are more higher because, because now in the summer the the degrees always can get the 4040°.

✓ I think the temperatures are higher because now in the summer the temperature can always reach 40°C.

more higher是错误的比较级用法，higher即可。'the degrees always can get the 40'表达不自然，改为'temperature can always reach 40°C'更准确。

× That's that's what that was never happened before.

✓ That's something that has never happened before.

原句结构混乱，时态错误，改为现在完成时表达过去未发生的情况更合适。

× I like to visit other cities that have different weather from my where I live now.

✓ I like to visit other cities that have different weather from where I live now.

my在此处多余，应去掉。

× I like to visit, I like to live, I like to visit some weather will be more comfortable in the summer that maybe I.

✓ I like to visit some places where the weather is more comfortable in the summer.

句子结构混乱，表达不完整，需简化并补充完整，使意思明确。