Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答较自然，但句子较长且缺少适当的连接词，建议分句表达并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: I live in the southern part of China. It is very warm and humid here, so people tend to sweat a lot during the summer.

제안: 回答中出现了不恰当的词汇，且表达不够清晰，建议避免使用不当词汇，句子结构应更简洁明了。

예시: Personally, I prefer cold weather because I can wear more clothes to keep warm. However, in hot weather, even after removing clothes, I still feel hot and need to use air conditioning.

제안: 回答内容具体且有逻辑，但句子较长，建议适当分句并使用连接词使表达更自然。

예시: I prefer wet weather to dry weather. Especially during autumn and winter, frequent rain helps me feel cool and relaxed, creating a sense of calmness.

제안: 回答简洁且符合逻辑，但可以增加一些细节使内容更丰富。

예시: I hardly ever check the weather forecast because the weather here is quite constant throughout the year. Therefore, I usually know what to expect without checking.

제안: 回答表达不够准确，语法有误，建议使用更准确的表达并注意时态和单复数。

예시: Although I'm not an expert, I think climate change causes global warming. This might explain why the weather has been getting warmer in recent years.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达重复，建议注意主谓一致，避免重复表达，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: I would love to visit cities with cooler climates. For example, some cities in Russia or Alaska have snow even in summer, which would be a great way to escape the heat.

× ...why it's getting warmer and hotter this years.

✓ ...why it's getting warmer and hotter this year.

这里的“years”应为单数形式“year”，因为指的是今年这一年，而不是多年的时间。年份作为时间单位时，通常用单数形式。

× ...cities that has a cooler temperature throughout the year.

✓ ...cities that have a cooler temperature throughout the year.

关系代词that指代复数名词cities，谓语动词应使用复数形式have，而不是单数has。主谓一致错误。