Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够连贯，句子结构不完整，且信息表达不清晰。建议直接回答天气情况，并补充具体描述，避免重复地名。

예시: I live in Suzhou, which is in the southeast of China. The weather here is generally warm and humid throughout the year.

제안: 回答较为简洁且相关，但可以增加更多细节和原因，使回答更丰富。

예시: I prefer cold weather because it allows me to enjoy winter activities like playing in the snow, which is very fun and refreshing.

제안: 回答中存在语法和词汇错误，表达不清晰。建议使用正确词汇并说明原因。

예시: I prefer dry weather because it feels fresher and more comfortable than wet weather.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和发音拼写错误，表达不流畅。建议简洁明了地说明习惯和频率。

예시: Yes, I check the weather forecast every night to prepare for the next day.

제안: 回答过于简单且缺乏具体内容，建议详细说明气候变化的影响并使用连贯句子。

예시: In recent years, climate change has caused hotter summers, which makes people feel uncomfortable and increases health risks.

제안: 回答不完整且表达不清楚。建议明确表达观点并给出具体理由。

예시: No, I prefer to stay in my city because I like the warm climate here and don't want to adapt to colder places.

× Suzhou lives in the South East of China.

✓ Suzhou is in the South East of China.

这里应该使用“be动词”来描述地点，不能用“lives”，因为“lives”表示“居住”，而城市本身是一个地点，不会“居住”。

× Because there is warm.

✓ Because it is warm.

“there is warm”结构不正确，应该用“it is warm”来描述天气的状态。

× I like cold weather because I can play snow in the winter.

✓ I like cold weather because I can play in the snow in the winter.

“play snow”缺少介词“in”，正确表达是“play in the snow”，表示在雪中玩耍。

× I like white wiser because white wiser. Era is fresh.

✓ I like white water because white water is fresh.

“white wiser”拼写错误，应为“white water”；“Era”应为“it”，指代前面的“white water”。

× Yes, I AM. I. Chuck everyday. I check every night.

✓ Yes, I am. I check every day. I check every night.

“Chuck”应为“check”，且“everyday”应分开为“every day”，表示“每天”。

× Recent years. Weather is hot. In summer, people are very hot.

✓ In recent years, the weather has been hot. In summer, people feel very hot.

“Recent years”需要加介词“in”构成时间状语；描述持续的过去到现在的状态应使用现在完成时“has been”；“people are very hot”表达不准确，应为“people feel very hot”，表示人的感受。

× No, because I think. There is very. Warm.

✓ No, because I think it is very warm.

“There is very. Warm.”结构不完整且错误，应改为“it is very warm”来表达天气很暖和。