Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免使用不恰当的连接词，并注意单复数和词形变化，使表达更流畅自然。

예시: I live in Beijing, where the weather is often unpleasant. In winter, it is usually very misty, which reduces visibility and makes it difficult to go outside. In spring, strong winds bring a lot of dust and sand, which can cause allergies.

제안: 回答中句子断裂严重，表达不连贯，建议合并短句，使用连词连接句子，使表达更完整流畅。

예시: I prefer cold weather because I love snow. When it snows, everything looks beautiful and peaceful. I also enjoy skiing, which is my favorite sport and can only be done in cold weather.

제안: 回答中存在发音拼写错误和语法错误，句子不完整，建议注意单词拼写和句子完整性，使用连贯的句子表达观点。

예시: I definitely prefer dry weather because I grew up in one of the wettest places in China, the Guizhou province. Everything there is very moist and sometimes moldy. I find dry weather more comfortable and easier to maintain my personal hygiene.

제안: 回答开头不清晰，存在语法错误，建议直接回答问题，使用完整句子，并用连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: It depends on the season. In spring and summer, when the weather is more changeable, I check the weather forecast almost every day. However, in autumn, I don't check it as often because the weather is usually stable.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，建议使用完整句子，准确表达观点，并避免句子碎片化。

예시: I think one of the main effects of climate change in recent years is global warming. This causes the melting of icebergs, which leads to rising sea levels. As a result, some islands are at risk of flooding.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不准确，建议使用正确的词汇和句子结构，清晰表达想法。

예시: Yes, I would. For example, I have always dreamed of visiting tropical places like Thailand, where it is warm and sunny all year round. I think it would be very enjoyable to try all the fruits and experience the local culture.

× Whereas I live in Beijing, so the weather is not always pleasant.

✓ I live in Beijing, so the weather is not always pleasant.

句首使用“Whereas”和后面的“so”连用，造成连接词重复，语义混乱。应去掉“Whereas”，只用“so”表示因果关系。

× In winter it is always very misty and reduced visibility makes people difficulty to go out.

✓ In winter it is always very misty and reduced visibility makes it difficult for people to go out.

“difficulty”是名词，句中应使用形容词“difficult”来修饰动词“to go out”，且缺少形式主语“it”和介词“for”。

× In spring, the strong wind broad brings a lot of dust and sand cause allergic.

✓ In spring, the strong broad wind brings a lot of dust and sand, causing allergies.

“cause allergic”表达不正确，应使用现在分词“causing”引导结果状语，且“allergic”应改为名词“allergies”。

× which is my favorite sports.

✓ which is my favorite sport.

“sports”是复数，前面用“favorite”修饰单数名词，应使用单数“sport”。

× And can only. Take place. In colder weather.

✓ And it can only take place in colder weather.

句子缺少主语和谓语，导致结构不完整，应补充“it can”使句子完整。

× I definitely prefer dry weatherby 'cause I grew up in one of the wettest place in China.

✓ I definitely prefer dry weather because I grew up in one of the wettest places in China.

“weatherby 'cause”拼写错误，应为“because”；“place”应为复数“places”，因为是“one of the”结构。

× Everything is so moist. And sometimes went Modi.

✓ Everything is so moist. And sometimes went moldy.

“went Modi”拼写错误，应为“went moldy”，表示发霉。

× Where was it? Depends.

✓ Where I live? It depends.

“Where was it?”不符合语境，应改为“Where I live?”；“Depends.”缺少主语，应补充“It depends.”。

× I almost check it everyday.

✓ I almost check it every day.

“everyday”是形容词，表示“日常的”，此处应使用副词短语“every day”，表示“每天”。

× I wouldn't check it so frequently because it's very steady.

✓ I don't check it so frequently because it's very steady.

根据上下文，表达习惯动作，使用一般现在时更合适，故将“wouldn't”改为“don't”。

× I think one of the many facts of what I'm changing in recent years is global warming.

✓ I think one of the many facts of what is changing in recent years is global warming.

“what I'm changing”表达不当，应为“what is changing”，表示“正在发生的变化”。

× Which is causing the melting of ice burg.

✓ Which is causing the melting of icebergs.

“ice burg”拼写错误，应为“icebergs”。

× And as a result. CC level is arising and some islands are at risk.

✓ And as a result, CO2 levels are rising and some islands are at risk.

“CC level”不明确，应为“CO2 levels”；“is arising”用词不当，应为“are rising”；句子断句错误，应合并为一句。

× I think it would be very funny to eat all the fruits an experienced.

✓ I think it would be very fun to eat all the fruits and experience it.

“funny”表示“有趣的”但多指滑稽，应使用“fun”；“an experienced”用法错误，应为“and experience it”。