Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答有些语法错误和重复，建议使用正确的时态和避免重复表达。同时，回答应更简洁，直接描述天气状况，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: Today, the weather is sunny and dry, which makes me feel comfortable. However, yesterday it was cloudy, so I preferred to stay indoors.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，建议使用正确的句子结构，清晰表达观点，并用连接词连接句子，使表达更自然流畅。

예시: I prefer chilly weather because the low temperature helps me focus better on my tasks without distractions. In contrast, hot weather makes me feel uncomfortable and less able to concentrate.

제안: 回答中有发音和词汇错误，建议使用正确的词汇和句子结构，避免语法错误，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: I prefer dry weather because wet roads become slippery and dangerous. Dry weather makes activities like riding bikes or working outside much easier.

제안: 回答中有语法和表达不准确，建议使用正确的时态和句子结构，避免重复，并用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: I check the weather forecast every morning when I wake up to decide what clothes to wear. Sometimes, I also check it again before going out to be prepared.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，建议使用完整句子，清晰表达观点，并用连接词连接句子，使表达更自然。

예시: The temperature has become warmer, causing sea levels to rise. As a result, many cities may be flooded or even disappear. Therefore, I think we should reduce carbon dioxide emissions.

제안: 回答中有词汇和语法错误，建议使用正确的词汇和句子结构，表达清晰，并用连接词使句子连贯。

예시: Yes, I would like to visit cities with climates very different from my hometown. I believe different climates can lead to diverse cultures and geological features, which are interesting to learn about.

× Today it's a sunny day but yesterday it is cloudy and I don't want to go outside because I like the sunny day and the the dry Rd. makes me feel comfortable.

✓ Today it's a sunny day but yesterday it was cloudy and I didn't want to go outside because I like sunny days and the dry road makes me feel comfortable.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses incorrectly. 'Yesterday' refers to the past, so 'is' should be 'was' and 'don't want' should be 'didn't want'. Also, 'the the dry Rd.' has a typo and should be 'the dry road'. Use plural 'sunny days' to generalize preference.

× A preferred chilly weather because the low temperature makes me fear a more focused on my tasks and I don't be disturbed. Uh, the high temperatures. Make me fear annoying so I couldn't concentrate on my.

✓ I prefer chilly weather because the low temperature helps me focus more on my tasks and I am not disturbed. The high temperatures make me feel annoyed so I can't concentrate.

'A preferred' is incorrect; it should be 'I prefer' for present preference. 'Makes me fear a more focused' is incorrect; it should be 'helps me focus more'. 'I don't be disturbed' is ungrammatical; correct form is 'I am not disturbed'. 'Make me fear annoying' should be 'make me feel annoyed'. 'Couldn't' should be 'can't' to match present tense.

× I preferred chihuahuas are since I don't like the road becomes so white and the slippery it's not easy to work in and the dryer wiser makes the things more easier such like a riding bikes or working around.

✓ I prefer dry weather since I don't like the road becoming so white and slippery; it's not easy to work on. The dry weather makes things easier, such as riding bikes or working outside.

'I preferred' should be 'I prefer' for present preference. 'Chihuahuas are' is likely a mishearing or typo; corrected to 'dry weather'. 'Road becomes' should be 'road becoming' to use gerund after 'like'. 'More easier' is incorrect; 'easier' suffices. 'Such like a riding bikes' should be 'such as riding bikes'. 'Working around' is vague; 'working outside' is clearer.

× Everyday morning when I wake up I will check the weather forecast to make sure what kind of clothes I will. Today and everyday I check it more than one times, especially in waking up time or before I go out.

✓ Every morning when I wake up, I check the weather forecast to decide what kind of clothes to wear today. I check it more than once every day, especially when I wake up or before I go out.

'Everyday morning' should be 'Every morning'. 'I will check' is future tense; present simple 'I check' fits habitual action. 'To make sure what kind of clothes I will' is incomplete; corrected to 'to decide what kind of clothes to wear'. 'More than one times' should be 'more than once'. 'In waking up time' should be 'when I wake up'.

× Temperature gets warmer so the sea level so increased and many cities will be a flooded even disappeared. So I think we should cut down the carbon dioxide.

✓ The temperature is getting warmer, so the sea level is rising and many cities may be flooded or even disappear. Therefore, I think we should cut down carbon dioxide emissions.

'Temperature gets warmer' is better as 'The temperature is getting warmer' for ongoing change. 'Sea level so increased' is incorrect; corrected to 'sea level is rising'. 'Will be a flooded even disappeared' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'may be flooded or even disappear'. 'Cut down the carbon dioxide' should be 'cut down carbon dioxide emissions' for clarity.

× Yes, I like to visit different kinds of cities which have the totally of V rails climate with my hometown and I think all the different climate may cause the different cultural and the geological knowledge.

✓ Yes, I like to visit different kinds of cities which have totally different climates from my hometown, and I think all the different climates may cause different cultural and geological knowledge.

'The totally of V rails climate' is incorrect; corrected to 'totally different climates'. 'With my hometown' should be 'from my hometown'. 'All the different climate' should be plural 'climates'. 'May cause the different cultural and the geological knowledge' is awkward; corrected to 'may cause different cultural and geological knowledge'.