Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议加强语法基础，注意句子结构，避免重复和无意义的词汇。可以尝试用简单明了的句子描述天气特点。

예시: I live in Italy, in a city near the sea. The weather is usually humid, and it often rains in summer, which I really like.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达混乱，建议练习用完整句子表达观点，并使用比较句型清晰说明原因。

예시: I prefer hot weather because I am not used to cold weather. My hometown is like Norway, where winters are very cold, so I enjoy warm weather more.

제안: 回答中有语法和表达不完整的问题，建议使用连贯的句子并用连接词使表达更流畅，同时提供具体例子支持观点。

예시: I prefer humid weather because it is better for my skin and makes it feel soft. Also, I feel more comfortable and relaxed in humid air than in dry air.

제안: 回答表达基本清楚，但有语法错误和词汇使用不当，建议注意时态一致性和词汇准确性，避免拼写错误。

예시: Yes, I check the weather forecast every day because I want to know what the weather will be like. For example, I pay attention to the temperature and whether it will rain so I can choose suitable clothes to wear.

제안: 回答内容不完整且表达混乱，建议学习相关词汇和句型，清晰表达观点并举例说明。

예시: In recent years, climate change has had serious effects on the environment and human life. For example, extreme weather events like floods and droughts have become more frequent.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰，建议练习用完整句子表达愿望，并用具体例子说明原因。

예시: Yes, I would definitely like to visit cities with different climates from my hometown. Experiencing new climates, such as colder or more tropical environments, can be refreshing and exciting. For example, visiting a snowy city would allow me to try winter activities.

× I live in Italian that would the city near by the sea, so the weather is very moist.

✓ I live in Italy, which is a city near the sea, so the weather is very moist.

这里'Italian'应为国家名Italy，且'city'前应加冠词'a'，'near by'应为'near'。名词单复数和冠词使用错误。

× 8 often rings in summer so I very like. Ring. Weather.

✓ It often rains in summer, so I like rainy weather very much.

'rings'应为'rains'，且句子结构混乱，需调整为正确的现在分词形式和句子结构。

× I prefer hot weather because I have fought to cold weather.

✓ I prefer hot weather because I am not used to cold weather.

'have fought to'用法错误，应为'not used to'表示不习惯。介词使用错误。

× In winter it feel very cold, so compare with the code Winder I enjoyed warm. Warm weather.

✓ In winter, it feels very cold, so compared with the cold winter, I enjoy warm weather.

'feel'应为'feels'，主谓一致错误；'compare'时态和结构错误，应使用过去式'compared'。

× I prefer humid weather becauses better for my skin.

✓ I prefer humid weather because it is better for my skin.

'becauses'拼写错误，应为'because'，且缺少主语和动词，需补充完整句子。

× It made me feel skin soft.

✓ It makes my skin feel soft.

'made'时态错误，应为一般现在时；'skin soft'词序错误，应为'skin feel soft'。

× Also, I found that I feel more comfortable and relaxing in the air. Is more as the rather than Dre.

✓ Also, I found that I feel more comfortable and relaxed in humid air rather than dry air.

'relaxing'应为形容词'relaxed'；'Is more as the rather than Dre'语法错误，需改为比较结构。

× Yes, I checked the weather forecast every day because I want to know what the weather will be like.

✓ Yes, I check the weather forecast every day because I want to know what the weather will be like.

'checked'应为一般现在时'check'，因为是习惯动作。

× For example, I pay attention to the temperature and weather it will rent so I can choose the most suitable closes to wear.

✓ For example, I pay attention to the temperature and whether it will rain so I can choose the most suitable clothes to wear.

'weather it will rent'应为'whether it will rain'，拼写和词语使用错误；'closes'应为'clothes'。

× 8 helping me to allow them.

✓ It helps me to prepare for them.

句子不完整且语法错误，需改为完整表达。

× In recent years, climate change has profound effects on the environment and human life. Uhm. Is specially a. Some weather events such as flaws and draws out tonight.

✓ In recent years, climate change has had profound effects on the environment and human life. Especially some weather events such as floods and droughts occur frequently.

'Is specially a'无意义，应删除；'flaws and draws out'应为'floods and droughts'，拼写错误；时态和句子结构需调整。

× Yes, I would definitely like to visit cities with different climates from my tongue.

✓ Yes, I would definitely like to visit cities with different climates from my hometown.

'my tongue'应为'my hometown'，词语使用错误。

× Is pricing on new climates such as a coder or more tropical environment can be refreshing and exciting?

✓ Experiencing new climates such as colder or more tropical environments can be refreshing and exciting.

'Is pricing on'语法错误，应为'Experiencing'；'a coder'应为'colder'，拼写错误；句子结构需调整。

× For example, visiting us know which city would allow me to try winter activities.

✓ For example, visiting unknown cities would allow me to try winter activities.

'us know which city'语法错误，应为'unknown cities'，词语使用错误。