Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，句子结构混乱，影响理解。建议简化句子，注意时态和主谓一致，避免重复和不完整句子。

예시: The weather in my city is very humid, especially in summer. Because of this, I often use an air conditioner to stay cool. During summer vacation, I usually stay at home to avoid the heat.

제안: 表达不清晰，句子不完整且有语法错误。建议直接表达喜好并给出具体原因，使用连词连接句子。

예시: I prefer cold weather because I enjoy making snowmen with my parents. I have never seen snow before, so I would like to experience it.

제안: 词汇使用错误（draw weather应为 dry weather），句子不完整。建议注意词汇准确性，句子完整表达观点并用连接词衔接。

예시: I prefer dry weather because it is more comfortable and convenient for daily activities. For example, I can easily go outside to exercise or meet friends without worrying about getting wet.

제안: 句子结构混乱，表达不完整。建议简洁明了地回答问题，注意时态和句子完整性。

예시: I sometimes check the weather forecast, especially before going out. A few days ago, I forgot to check it and it rained, so I didn't bring an umbrella.

제안: 表达不准确，词汇错误较多，句子不连贯。建议使用准确词汇，清晰表达观点并用连接词连接句子。

예시: I think the increase in cars on the road has led to more carbon dioxide emissions. This is a major cause of climate change. Therefore, we should use public transportation more often to reduce pollution.

제안: 句子结构混乱，表达不完整且有语法错误。建议直接表达愿望并给出具体原因，注意句子完整和连贯。

예시: I would like to visit cold cities like Harbin or other countries with snowy weather. I want to make snowmen with my parents because I have never seen snow before.

× I live in China, do you know the weather here it is very humid day especially in summer, so I can without my air conditioner and in the summer vacation I just can stay at home so I. Counts have some opportunities to go out.

✓ I live in China. Do you know the weather here? It is very humid, especially in summer, so I cannot live without my air conditioner. During the summer vacation, I usually stay at home, so I don't have many opportunities to go out.

原句句子结构混乱，缺少标点符号，导致表达不清晰。需要分句并添加适当的标点符号，使句子通顺易懂。

× so I can without my air conditioner

✓ so I cannot live without my air conditioner

原句中“can without”用法错误，缺少否定形式。应使用“cannot”表示不能没有空调。

× in the summer vacation I just can stay at home

✓ During the summer vacation, I usually stay at home

“just can stay”用法不当，表达习惯动作应使用一般现在时或频率副词。

× so I. Counts have some opportunities to go out.

✓ so I don't have many opportunities to go out.

“Counts”用法错误，应为“don't have”表示否定，且“opportunities”复数形式正确。

× Unlike the Harvey or just on like different countries, 'cause I want to make a snowman with my parents and I never seen it before.

✓ Unlike Harbin or other different countries, because I want to make a snowman with my parents and I have never seen snow before.

“Unlike the Harvey or just on like different countries”表达不正确，地名拼写错误且介词使用错误。应改为“Unlike Harbin or other different countries”。

× I never seen it before.

✓ I have never seen it before.

“never seen”缺少助动词“have”，应使用现在完成时表示过去到现在的经历。

× I prefer to draw weather because it is more comfortable and convenient for daily activities.

✓ I prefer dry weather because it is more comfortable and convenient for daily activities.

“draw weather”拼写错误，应为“dry weather”。

× Without worry about getting wet or.

✓ Without worrying about getting wet or being uncomfortable.

句子不完整，缺少谓语和宾语，需补充完整表达。

× And just several days ago I forgot to check the. On climate forecast but it is a rainy day so I was not to bring my umbrella.

✓ Just several days ago, I forgot to check the weather forecast, and it was a rainy day, so I did not bring my umbrella.

时态使用错误，需统一使用过去时态，且句子不完整，缺少部分词语。

× I think they're more and more car in the road.

✓ I think there are more and more cars on the road.

“car”应为复数“cars”，且“in the road”应为“on the road”。

× So they imaged inmate the carbon dioxide.

✓ So they emit carbon dioxide.

“imaged inmate”拼写错误，应为“emit”，且“the carbon dioxide”中“the”可省略。

× It is a big effect about the climate change.

✓ It has a big effect on climate change.

表达不自然，需调整句子结构，使用“have an effect on”固定搭配。

× So we need to use more public transportation. 2.

✓ So we need to use more public transportation.

句尾多余数字“2”，应删除。

× As I really like to do with this some cold weather city like Harbins or a different country.

✓ I really like to visit some cold weather cities like Harbin or different countries.

句子结构混乱，表达不清晰，需调整语序和用词。

× Be 'cause I want to make a snow with my parents and I never seen it before.

✓ Because I want to make a snowman with my parents and I have never seen snow before.

“Be 'cause”拼写错误，应为“Because”，且“make a snow”应为“make a snowman”，时态错误需用现在完成时。