Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự mạch lạc và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lặp từ không cần thiết.

예시: The weather where I live is usually cold during winter, which I really enjoy because I don't like hot temperatures.

제안: Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và cung cấp lý do cụ thể cho sở thích của bạn.

예시: I prefer cold weather because it feels relaxing and the fresh air is very peaceful.

제안: Câu trả lời quá ngắn và thiếu chi tiết. Bạn nên mở rộng câu trả lời bằng cách giải thích lý do hoặc đưa ra ví dụ để làm câu trả lời phong phú hơn.

예시: I prefer wet weather because I enjoy the sound of rain and the cool atmosphere it creates.

제안: Câu trả lời thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và giải thích thói quen của mình một cách rõ ràng.

예시: No, I don't usually check the weather forecast, but sometimes I look at it on my phone when I plan to go out.

제안: Câu trả lời quá ngắn và không trả lời đúng câu hỏi. Bạn nên đưa ra ý kiến của mình về tác động của biến đổi khí hậu và giải thích rõ ràng.

예시: I think climate change has caused more extreme weather events, such as floods and heatwaves, in recent years.

제안: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác. Bạn nên sử dụng từ đúng và mở rộng câu trả lời với lý do cụ thể.

예시: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates because experiencing new environments is peaceful and refreshing.

× The weather, like where I live, is. Winter.

✓ The weather where I live is winter.

The original sentence has incorrect sentence structure with unnecessary commas and a misplaced period. The corrected sentence removes unnecessary punctuation and arranges the sentence properly to convey the intended meaning.

× I love it because it is very cold an.

✓ I love it because it is very cold.

The word 'an' is incorrectly used here and should be removed. The sentence is complete and correct without it.

× I don't hot.

✓ I don't like hot weather.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a verb. Adding 'like hot weather' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× I prefer cold weather pikas.

✓ I prefer cold weather because it is very relaxing and enjoyable with fresh air.

The word 'pikas' is incorrect and likely a mishearing or typo. The sentence is incomplete and unclear. The correction provides a complete and meaningful sentence.

× Is a very relaxed and enjoyable and fresh air.

✓ It has very relaxing and enjoyable fresh air.

The original sentence lacks a subject and uses incorrect adjectives. 'Relaxed' should be 'relaxing' to describe the air, and the sentence needs a subject 'It'.

× An fresh air is very peaceful.

✓ The fresh air is very peaceful.

'An' is incorrect before a word starting with a consonant sound. The definite article 'The' is appropriate here.

× No. I am not in the habit of checking the weather forecast because.

✓ No, I am not in the habit of checking the weather forecast because...

The sentence ends abruptly and is incomplete. It should be completed or connected properly. Also, 'No.' should be connected to the next sentence with a comma.

× I will watch. Weather in Rome I. In my phone and on my phone.

✓ I watch the weather in Rome on my phone.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. The correction combines the ideas into a clear, grammatically correct sentence.

× No, I don't think.

✓ No, I don't think so.

The phrase 'I don't think' is incomplete without an object or complement. Adding 'so' completes the thought.

× Yes, I would like to be with other cities that have different climbers from where I live because it's a very peaceful and refreshing.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit other cities that have different climates from where I live because they are very peaceful and refreshing.

'Be with other cities' is incorrect; 'visit' is appropriate. 'Climbers' is a misspelling of 'climates'. Also, 'it's' should be 'they are' to agree with plural 'cities'. The sentence is corrected accordingly.