Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时语法错误较多，表达不够自然，且句子结构重复。建议注意主谓一致，避免重复表达，并尝试使用更丰富的词汇描述天气和感受。

예시: The weather near the sea where I live is quite humid throughout the year. This makes it difficult for my clothes to dry, which is quite inconvenient. Moreover, the dampness sometimes causes me physical discomfort, like knee pain.

제안: 回答较为清晰，但表达略显重复。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并丰富词汇表达对天气的喜好。

예시: To be honest, I don't enjoy extremely cold or hot weather. I prefer moderate temperatures because they are perfect for outdoor activities like sports.

제안: 语法错误较多，表达不连贯。建议注意句子结构，避免断句不完整，并用更准确的词汇描述天气对身体的影响。

예시: I dislike both very dry and very wet weather. Dry weather makes my skin feel tight and uncomfortable, while wet weather prevents my clothes from drying properly.

제안: 回答内容完整，但表达重复且有语法错误。建议减少重复，使用连接词使句子更流畅，注意语法准确。

예시: Yes, I check the weather forecast every morning before going out because the weather here changes frequently. This helps me decide whether to bring an umbrella.

제안: 句子结构混乱，语法错误明显。建议理清句子逻辑，使用连接词，并准确表达因果关系。

예시: Climate change has had many negative effects recently. Heavy traffic and pollution contribute to increased carbon emissions, which in turn raise global temperatures.

제안: 表达不够清晰，句子结构不完整。建议明确表达想去的地方及原因，使用更自然的表达方式。

예시: Yes, I would love to visit southern China because it snows there in winter. I could enjoy winter activities like building snowmen.

× In my area is is near the sea so the weather is too wet all year around.

✓ My area is near the sea, so the weather is very wet all year round.

句子中缺少主语，应该用“My area”作为主语，且“all year around”应为固定搭配“all year round”。

× I feel uncomfortable because my clothes is usually don't dry.

✓ I feel uncomfortable because my clothes usually don't dry.

clothes是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式“don't dry”，且“is”多余，应删除。

× And beside it will let some physical issues like knee pain because it's too muggy and humid.

✓ And besides, it can cause some physical issues like knee pain because it's too muggy and humid.

“beside”应为“besides”，表示“此外”；“let”用法不当，应改为“cause”。

× I just enjoy the moderate weather that can suit for me to go outside and join some outdoor activities like doing some outdoor sports.

✓ I just enjoy the moderate weather that suits me to go outside and join some outdoor activities like doing some outdoor sports.

“suit for me”用法错误，正确表达为“suits me”。

× If the weather to dry it will makes my skin feel tight and uncomfortable.

✓ If the weather is too dry, it will make my skin feel tight and uncomfortable.

“weather”是单数，谓语应为“is”；“makes”应为“make”与主语“it”一致；“to dry”应为“too dry”。

× However, after weather is to add my clothes is always don't dry.

✓ However, when the weather is like this, my clothes always don't dry.

句子结构混乱，需调整为“when the weather is like this”；“is to add”无意义，应删除。

× I usually check forecast because in my area the weather is changeable so I can catch the real condition weather condition at that time.

✓ I usually check the forecast because in my area the weather is changeable, so I can know the real weather condition at that time.

“check forecast”应为“check the forecast”；“catch the real condition weather condition”表达重复且不自然，改为“know the real weather condition”。

× So I should make sure that whether I should bring an umbrella to go outside.

✓ So I should make sure whether I should bring an umbrella when I go outside.

“that whether”重复，应去掉“that”；“to go outside”改为“when I go outside”更自然。

× Will climate change has totally had a negative effect in recent years because of heavy traffic and human pollution is always related to a lot of problems in climate change and will lead to carbon emissions and the temperature will be higher than before.

✓ Climate change has totally had a negative effect in recent years because heavy traffic and human pollution are always related to many problems, leading to carbon emissions and higher temperatures than before.

句子结构混乱，去掉多余的“Will”，调整谓语和主语一致，简化表达使句子通顺。

× Well, I definitely want to enjoy something is located in the southern China because it can snow in winter.

✓ Well, I definitely want to visit somewhere located in southern China because it can snow in winter.

“enjoy something is located”结构错误，应改为“visit somewhere located”；“the southern China”应为“southern China”，不加冠词。