Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，句子结构混乱，且有重复和冗余。建议简化句子，注意时态和单复数，避免重复表达。

예시: I live in a northern city in China where the weather is often humid and rainy. I don't like it because it makes going outside inconvenient since I always need to carry an umbrella.

제안: 回答中词汇使用错误（如'Azure'），语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议使用正确词汇，简洁表达个人感受，并注意语法。

예시: To be honest, I don't like hot weather because I am sensitive to high temperatures, especially during summer holidays. It makes me sweat a lot and my clothes get wet, which is uncomfortable when I'm outside.

제안: 回答中语法和词汇错误较多，表达不清晰。建议使用正确的词汇和句型，清楚表达原因，避免拼写错误。

예시: I prefer dry weather because clothes can dry quickly. When it rains often, clothes smell bad and I have to wash them again, which is very inconvenient.

제안: 回答不连贯，语法和词汇错误严重，表达混乱。建议简化句子，直接回答问题，使用正确的词汇和语法。

예시: No, I don't usually check the weather forecast because I am a casual person and don't like to prepare in advance. Sometimes my mother reminds me to take an umbrella if it might rain.

제안: 回答内容不清晰，语法和词汇错误严重，表达不完整。建议学习相关词汇，组织完整句子，清楚表达观点。

예시: I think the weather has become very strange recently, with extreme heat and cold. This shows that people need to protect our environment more carefully.

제안: 回答中语法错误多，表达不清晰，内容不连贯。建议简化表达，明确回答问题，使用正确的词汇和句型。

예시: Yes, I travel almost every year. However, I don't like the weather in some tropical cities because it is too hot and changes frequently, which can be uncomfortable.

× I live in a north city of China so the weather is really moist, so I actually don't like this kind of environment because it's very inconvenient.

✓ I live in a northern city of China, so the weather is really moist. I actually don't like this kind of environment because it's very inconvenient.

“north city”应为“northern city”，因为这里需要用形容词形式来修饰名词。

× There is always raining and I needed to take umbrella for go outside.

✓ It is always raining and I need to take an umbrella to go outside.

“There is always raining”结构错误，应使用“It is always raining”。“needed”时态错误，应为现在时“need”。“take umbrella”缺少冠词，应为“take an umbrella”。“for go outside”应为“to go outside”。

× To be honest, I don't like Azure because I think I'm very sensitive to the temperature on especially in the summer holiday.

✓ To be honest, I don't like the heat because I think I'm very sensitive to the temperature, especially in the summer holiday.

“Azure”用词错误，应为“heat”或“hot weather”。“on especially”结构错误，应去掉“on”。

× It's really make me sweating and it's so uncomfortable because closed will be wet and you need to change it so it's so embarrassed outside.

✓ It really makes me sweat and it's so uncomfortable because clothes will be wet and you need to change them, so it's embarrassing outside.

“make me sweating”应为“makes me sweat”，动词搭配错误。 “closed”应为“clothes”。“so it's so embarrassed”结构错误，应为“so it's embarrassing”。

× I prefer the dry weather because so close can be dry quickly.

✓ I prefer dry weather because clothes can dry quickly.

“so close”应为“clothes”，单复数错误。

× If I live in a weather which often raining, the clothes always have a little bit smile so I don't like yet.

✓ If I live in a place where it often rains, the clothes always have a little bit of smell, so I don't like it.

“a weather”错误，应为“a place”或“weather”。“which often raining”应为“where it often rains”。“smile”应为“smell”。“don't like yet”应为“don't like it”。

× You need to wash it again, it's really inconvenient and hustle.

✓ You need to wash it again, it's really inconvenient and a hassle.

“hustle”用词错误，应为“hassle”，表示麻烦。

× Saddam, do I check so? Weather forecast.

✓ Sometimes, do I check the weather forecast?

“Saddam”无意义，应为“Sometimes”。“do I check so?”语序和用词错误，应为“do I check the weather forecast?”。

× Because I'm a very casually person, I don't like to prepare anything for tomorrow.

✓ Because I'm a very casual person, I don't like to prepare anything for tomorrow.

“casually”是副词，应使用形容词“casual”来修饰“person”。

× I can't accept everything happen and sometimes my mother always remind me whatsoever tomorrow if I needed to take Umbrella shield.

✓ I can't accept everything that happens, and sometimes my mother always reminds me whether I need to take an umbrella tomorrow.

“everything happen”应为“everything that happens”。“remind me whatsoever tomorrow”结构错误，应为“reminds me whether I need to take an umbrella tomorrow”。“needed”时态错误，应为“need”。“Umbrella shield”应为“umbrella”。

× I think so whether a big come very weird, sometimes extremely hot also other times be extremely cold.

✓ I think the weather has become very weird, sometimes extremely hot and other times extremely cold.

“whether a big come very weird”语序和用词错误，应为“the weather has become very weird”。“also other times be”应为“and other times”。

× So I think maybe it will Newman people need to protect our environment.

✓ So I think maybe people need to protect our environment.

“it will Newman people”无意义，应去掉“it will Newman”。

× It's early.

✓ It's urgent.

“early”用词错误，应为“urgent”，表示紧迫。

× Yes, I almost traveled to say not every year, but actually I don't like the weather at Sarah because it's too hot because its tropical climate's.

✓ Yes, I almost travel every year, but actually I don't like the weather at Sarah because it's too hot due to its tropical climate.

“traveled”时态错误，应为现在时“travel”。“climate's”错误，应为“climate”。

× So the weather actually a change frequently.

✓ So the weather actually changes frequently.

“a change”应为动词“changes”。

× Sometimes it's it's very hard because the sounds.

✓ Sometimes it's very hard because of the sounds.

“because the sounds”缺少介词，应为“because of the sounds”。