Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to use clear and correct sentence structures and vocabulary. Avoid unclear or incorrect phrases like 'made an please send'. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details with linking words like 'for example' and 'additionally'.

예시: The weather where I live is generally mild and pleasant throughout the year. For example, summers are warm but not too hot, which makes outdoor activities enjoyable. Additionally, we have moderate rainfall in spring, which helps keep the environment green and fresh.

제안: Focus on completing your sentences and using correct vocabulary. Avoid fragmented sentences and unclear words like 'Check it' or 'comfort rible'. Use linking words to connect your ideas clearly. Try to give specific reasons and examples for your preference.

예시: I prefer cold weather because it feels refreshing and energizing, especially after spending time outdoors. For example, I enjoy wearing warm clothes and drinking hot tea, which makes me feel more comfortable. Additionally, cold weather is less likely to cause discomfort compared to hot weather.

제안: Use correct vocabulary and sentence structures. Avoid unclear words like 'comfort, rible' and incomplete phrases. Use linking words to organize your ideas logically. Provide clear and specific reasons for your preference.

예시: I prefer dry weather because it is more comfortable and convenient for daily activities. For example, I can go outside without worrying about getting wet or slipping on wet surfaces. Additionally, dry weather makes it easier to plan outdoor events or travel.

제안: Try to avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect your ideas clearly. Make sure your sentences are complete and vocabulary is accurate. Provide specific details about your habit and reasons.

예시: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every morning before leaving for work. I find it helpful to plan my day, such as deciding what to wear or whether to carry an umbrella. For example, if it is going to rain, I make sure to bring an umbrella or a coat.

제안: Focus on clear sentence structure and correct vocabulary. Avoid incomplete or unclear sentences like 'The desk will provide people with the property and live.' Use linking words to organize your ideas and provide specific examples of climate change effects.

예시: Well, it's an interesting question. I think there are many problems caused by climate change in recent years, such as hurricanes, floods, and droughts. These events cause significant damage to the environment and affect people's homes and lives.

제안: Use correct vocabulary and sentence structures. Avoid unclear words like 'friend Clomid' and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. Provide specific examples of climates and activities you want to experience.

예시: Yes, I would definitely like to visit cities with a different climate from where I live. Experiencing a new climate, such as colder or more tropical weather, can be refreshing and exciting. For example, visiting a snowy city would allow me to try winter sports and enjoy a completely different lifestyle compared to my usual warm surroundings.

× The weather where I live is generally made an please send throughout the year.

✓ The weather where I live is generally mild and pleasant throughout the year.

The original sentence uses incorrect words 'made an please send' which seem to be a mishearing or typo. The correct phrase is 'mild and pleasant' to describe weather. This correction fits the present tense and meaning.

× For example summer warm but not excessively hot which make outdoor activity enjoyable.

✓ For example, summer is warm but not excessively hot which makes outdoor activities enjoyable.

The subject 'summer' is singular, so the verb should be 'is' and 'makes' to agree with singular subject. Also, 'activity' should be plural 'activities' to generalize the statement.

× Additionally, we experience moderate rainfall during the spring which help keep the environment green in fresh.

✓ Additionally, we experience moderate rainfall during the spring which helps keep the environment green and fresh.

The relative clause refers to 'rainfall' (singular), so the verb should be 'helps'. Also, 'in fresh' is incorrect; it should be 'and fresh' to connect adjectives.

× I prefer cold weather because it feels refreshing an energizing, especially after spending times outdoors.

✓ I prefer cold weather because it feels refreshing and energizing, especially after spending time outdoors.

The word 'an' is incorrect; it should be 'and' to connect adjectives. Also, 'times' should be singular 'time' when used in this context.

× For example, I enjoy wearing. Close like. Check it and drinking hot water which make called a more comfort rible.

✓ For example, I enjoy wearing clothes like jackets and drinking hot water which make cold weather more comfortable.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains many errors. 'Close like. Check it' is unclear and likely meant to be 'clothes like jackets'. 'Make called a more comfort rible' is corrected to 'make cold weather more comfortable' to convey intended meaning.

× Additionally, cold weather is less likely to cause.

✓ Additionally, cold weather is less likely to cause illness.

The original sentence is incomplete. Adding 'illness' completes the thought and fits the context.

× I prefer to a better because it is more comfort, rible an convenient for daily activities.

✓ I prefer dry weather because it is more comfortable and convenient for daily activities.

The phrase 'to a better' is incorrect; it should be 'dry weather'. 'Comfort, rible an' is corrected to 'comfortable and' to properly use adjectives and conjunctions.

× For example, I can go outside without worrying about getting wet or slippery on wet surface.

✓ For example, I can go outside without worrying about getting wet or slipping on wet surfaces.

The phrase 'slippery on wet surface' is incorrect; 'slipping on wet surfaces' correctly uses the verb form and plural noun.

× Additionally, dry weather makes it easier to plan out or even enter well.

✓ Additionally, dry weather makes it easier to plan outings or even travel well.

The original sentence is unclear. 'Plan out or even enter well' is corrected to 'plan outings or even travel well' to make sense in context.

× I find it helpful to plan my day because to decide what to wear or whether to carry an umbrella, for example if it's going to rain and make sure that I have to bring umbrella or a code, especially the particular metric.

✓ I find it helpful to plan my day to decide what to wear or whether to carry an umbrella. For example, if it's going to rain, I make sure to bring an umbrella or a coat, especially in particular weather conditions.

The sentence had incorrect prepositions and awkward phrasing. 'Because to decide' is corrected to 'to decide'. 'Make sure that I have to bring' is corrected to 'make sure to bring'. 'Code' is corrected to 'coat'. 'Particular metric' is corrected to 'particular weather conditions' for clarity.

× I saying there are many problem that affects of climate change in recent years and those are hurricane, flood, drought which cause significant damage environment and the atmosphere of.

✓ I think there are many problems that are effects of climate change in recent years, such as hurricanes, floods, and droughts which cause significant damage to the environment and atmosphere.

The sentence had incorrect pronouns and verb forms. 'I saying' corrected to 'I think'. 'Problem' pluralized to 'problems'. 'Affects of' corrected to 'effects of'. 'Hurricane, flood, drought' pluralized. Added 'to' before 'the environment'. Removed incomplete phrase 'the atmosphere of' and replaced with 'and atmosphere'.

× The desk will provide people with the property and live.

✓ These disasters affect people's property and lives.

The original sentence is unclear and likely a mishearing. Corrected to a meaningful sentence related to previous context about climate change effects.

× Yes, I would definitely like to visit city with a friend Clomid from where I live experience a new climate such as a colder or more tropical environment can be refreshing an exciting.

✓ Yes, I would definitely like to visit cities with a climate different from where I live. Experiencing a new climate such as a colder or more tropical environment can be refreshing and exciting.

'City' changed to plural 'cities'. 'Friend Clomid' is unclear and removed. Sentence split for clarity. 'An' corrected to 'and'.

× For example, with sitting in snow visit, he would allow me to try winter spot, enjoy a completely different last I compared to my usual warm surrounding.

✓ For example, visiting snowy places would allow me to try winter sports and enjoy a completely different lifestyle compared to my usual warm surroundings.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Corrected to a coherent sentence with proper verb forms and vocabulary.