Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific details about the weather and seasons using linking words for coherence. Avoid redundancy and incomplete sentences.

예시: The weather where I live is mostly hot and humid because we are in the southwestern coastal area of India. However, it changes with the seasons; during the rainy season, it rains heavily, and in winter, the weather becomes cooler and windy.

제안: Your answer shows preference but lacks clarity and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then explain reasons using linking words. Use appropriate vocabulary to express feelings about the weather.

예시: I prefer cold weather because it feels refreshing and comfortable. In contrast, during summer, I sweat a lot and feel uncomfortable, which makes me dislike hot weather.

제안: Your answer has pronunciation and grammar issues and is somewhat unclear. Provide a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then explain reasons with linking words. Use correct vocabulary and sentence structure.

예시: I mostly prefer dry weather because it is easier to go outside without worrying about getting wet or dealing with drainage problems. Therefore, dry weather is more convenient for me.

제안: Your answer is repetitive and has incomplete sentences. Give a clear topic sentence about your habit, then explain when and why you check the forecast using linking words. Use complete sentences and appropriate vocabulary.

예시: Yes, I have the habit of checking the weather forecast before I go out. This helps me prepare for the weather conditions, such as carrying an umbrella if it is going to rain.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give specific examples using linking words. Use correct vocabulary and sentence structure to improve clarity.

예시: Climate change has had profound effects on the environment and human life. For example, we have seen an increase in extreme weather events such as hurricanes and floods, which have caused significant damage to communities and ecosystems.

제안: Your answer shows willingness but is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Provide a clear topic sentence, then explain reasons with linking words. Use correct vocabulary and sentence structure for clarity.

예시: Yes, I would like to visit other cities with different climates. For instance, experiencing a colder or warmer season would be a new and exciting experience for me.

× Mostly it will be hard.

✓ Mostly it will be hot.

The word 'hard' is incorrectly used to describe weather; the correct adjective is 'hot' to describe high temperature. Also, 'will be' is correct for future tense here.

× Just because of we are staying in the southern western coastal area of in India.

✓ Just because we are staying in the southwestern coastal area of India.

The phrase 'because of we are' is incorrect; 'because we are' is correct. Also, 'southern western' should be 'southwestern' as a compound adjective. The preposition 'of' before 'in India' is unnecessary.

× So kind of hard for us.

✓ So it's kind of hard for us.

The sentence lacks a subject; adding 'it's' (it is) clarifies the meaning.

× But. Also depends on the seasons.

✓ But it also depends on the seasons.

The sentence is incomplete; adding 'it' as subject and connecting the clauses properly improves clarity.

× When it's raining it will be raining more, when it's winter it will be windows season for us and when it's come to the whole season it will be like a more huh.

✓ When it's raining, it rains more; when it's winter, it is the windy season for us; and when it comes to the whole season, it is like more humid.

The sentence has multiple errors: 'windows season' should be 'windy season'; 'when it's come' should be 'when it comes'; 'it will be like a more huh' is unclear and corrected to 'it is like more humid' to make sense. Also, verb tenses and sentence structure are corrected for clarity.

× Its makers like, you know, feel.

✓ It makes you feel, you know, good.

'Its makers like' is incorrect; the intended meaning is 'It makes you feel'. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× An when it's come to the summer season will be sweating a lot and.

✓ And when it comes to the summer season, I sweat a lot.

'An' should be 'And'; 'it's come' should be 'it comes'; the sentence needs a subject 'I' and proper verb form 'sweat' for present tense.

× Feeling very sad about on the seasons.

✓ Feeling very sad about the seasons.

The preposition 'on' is unnecessary after 'about'.

× I prefer drive weather mostly.

✓ I prefer dry weather mostly.

'Drive' is a typo; the correct adjective is 'dry' to describe weather.

× I don't want to get any drainage or anything or on wet weather time so I'll be preferring on right weather time.

✓ I don't want to get any drainage problems or anything during wet weather, so I prefer dry weather time.

'On wet weather time' and 'on right weather time' are incorrect prepositional phrases; 'during wet weather' and 'dry weather time' are correct. Also, 'I'll be preferring' is awkward; 'I prefer' is better.

× It will be easy and convenient for us too. Eight out anywhere.

✓ It will be easy and convenient for us too to go out anywhere.

'Eight out anywhere' is a mishearing or typo; corrected to 'to go out anywhere' for clarity.

× Yeah, yes, I heard that habit of checking the weather forecast whenever I feel like to go out.

✓ Yes, I have the habit of checking the weather forecast whenever I feel like going out.

'Heard that habit' is incorrect; 'have the habit' is correct. Also, 'feel like to go out' should be 'feel like going out'.

× Oh, before I'm going out, I'll be checking on the weather forecast.

✓ Oh, before I go out, I'll check the weather forecast.

'Checking on the weather forecast' is incorrect; 'check the weather forecast' is correct. Also, 'before I'm going out' should be 'before I go out' for correct tense.

× It's. Tell us how the weather is like, you know. Upcoming.

✓ It tells us what the weather will be like, you know, upcoming.

'It's. Tell us' is incorrect; 'It tells us' is correct. Also, 'how the weather is like' should be 'what the weather will be like'.

× Yeah, I know where it is.

✓ Yes, I know what it is.

'Where it is' is incorrect in this context; 'what it is' is correct to refer to climate change.

× We can see that climate change is profound effects on the environment, human life.

✓ We can see that climate change has profound effects on the environment and human life.

'Is profound effects' is incorrect; 'has profound effects' is correct. Also, 'and' is added between 'environment' and 'human life'.

× Firstly, we have witnessed more if we can answer whether even such as hurricanes, floods and all sandwich as.

✓ Firstly, we have witnessed more extreme weather events such as hurricanes, floods, and so on.

The original sentence is unclear and contains errors; corrected to a clear sentence listing examples of extreme weather events.

× Caused significant damage to communities and ecosystem.

✓ They have caused significant damage to communities and ecosystems.

The sentence lacks a subject; adding 'They have' clarifies the meaning. Also, 'ecosystem' should be plural 'ecosystems'.

× Yes, I do like to go and visit other cities that have different climates from where I live.

✓ Yes, I would like to go and visit other cities that have different climates from where I live.

'Do like' is less natural here; 'would like' expresses preference more appropriately.

× It's later.

✓ Later,

'It's later' is incorrect and unclear; 'Later,' is used as a transition word.

× There are other cities where we can see Finder season or like a summer season.

✓ There are other cities where we can see a winter season or a summer season.

'Finder season' is a typo; corrected to 'winter season'.

× Are you going on so it's like something new experience for us to, you know, go and have experience on that.

✓ Going there is like a new experience for us to, you know, go and have experience with that.

The sentence is unclear; rephrased for clarity and correct preposition use.