Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear but could be improved by adding more specific details and using linking words to make it more natural and effective. Try to avoid very short answers and expand slightly with examples or comparisons.

예시: The weather in my country is usually humid and hot, especially during the summer months, which can make it quite uncomfortable to be outside for long periods.

제안: Try to use the correct tense and grammar, and make your answer more natural by using linking words and clearer explanations. Also, avoid redundancy and be more specific about your preferences.

예시: I prefer cold weather because I dislike feeling sweaty and uncomfortable, which often happens in hot weather.

제안: Your answer is understandable but could be more fluent and natural by avoiding repetition and using linking words. Also, try to provide a bit more detail to support your preference.

예시: I definitely prefer dry weather because it feels more comfortable and I don't have to worry about sweating as much as I do in humid conditions.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to organise your ideas clearly, use correct grammar, and explain your habits with specific details. Also, avoid repetition and incomplete sentences.

예시: I often check the weather forecast before I go out because in Taiwan, the weather can change quickly. If I don't check, I might forget to bring an umbrella, which can be a big problem.

제안: Your answer is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Try to express your ideas clearly and use linking words to connect your points. Provide specific examples of extreme weather to support your answer.

예시: I believe climate change has caused more extreme weather events recently, such as stronger storms and longer heatwaves.

제안: Your answer has some grammar and vocabulary mistakes. Try to speak more clearly and use linking words to connect your ideas. Also, provide more specific reasons for your preference.

예시: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates, such as Korea, where the weather is drier and cooler. I find that kind of climate more relaxing.

× I preferred cold weather because I don't like the feeling to getting sweat or getting like wet.

✓ I prefer cold weather because I don't like the feeling of getting sweaty or feeling wet.

The sentence incorrectly uses the past tense 'preferred' when the context requires present tense 'prefer' to match the ongoing preference. Also, 'to getting sweat' is incorrect; it should be 'of getting sweaty' to properly express the sensation. The phrase 'getting like wet' is ungrammatical and should be 'feeling wet' for clarity and correctness.

× I preferred cold weather because I don't like the feeling to getting sweat or getting like wet.

✓ I prefer cold weather because I don't like the feeling of getting sweaty or feeling wet.

The preposition 'to' is incorrectly used before 'getting sweat'; the correct preposition is 'of' to indicate the feeling associated with an action. Also, 'getting like wet' is incorrect; 'feeling wet' is the proper expression.

× I often chat anger weather forecast because in Taiwan, if you are if I didn't check the weather forecast before I go out, I it may run so I could forget to bring my umbrella with me.

✓ I often check the weather forecast because in Taiwan, if I don't check the weather forecast before I go out, it may rain and I could forget to bring my umbrella with me.

The phrase 'chat anger weather forecast' is incorrect; it should be 'check the weather forecast'. The pronoun usage 'you are if I didn't' is confusing and incorrect; it should be 'if I don't'. Also, 'I it may run' is ungrammatical; it should be 'it may rain'. These corrections clarify the meaning and correct pronoun and verb usage.

× I think the effect of climate change will be there Are there are more and more extreme weather these days?

✓ I think the effect of climate change is that there are more and more extreme weather events these days.

The original sentence misuses 'there are' and has a confusing structure. The corrected sentence properly uses 'there are' to indicate the existence of 'more and more extreme weather events'. Also, 'weather' should be pluralised as 'weather events' to be grammatically correct.

× Yeah, I would like to actually, I said it hit on Korea and the weather there is dry and a little bit colder than here.

✓ Yeah, I would like to. Actually, I said I went to Korea and the weather there is dry and a little bit colder than here.

The phrase 'I said it hit on Korea' is incorrect. It should be 'I said I went to Korea' to correctly express past action. The preposition 'on' is incorrectly used and should be removed. This correction clarifies the intended meaning and corrects preposition misuse.

× So I felt more like released there.

✓ So I felt more relaxed there.

The word 'released' is incorrect in this context; the correct adjective is 'relaxed' to express feeling at ease. This correction improves the sentence's meaning and grammatical accuracy.