Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时句子结构不完整，表达不够清晰，建议使用完整句子并注意时态一致，同时避免语法错误。可以更自然地描述天气变化。

예시: The weather here is quite typical for a tropical country. It is usually sunny in the morning, but in the afternoon, heavy rain often occurs.

제안: 回答中有很多语法错误和不连贯的表达，建议简洁明了地表达观点，并用连贯的句子说明原因。

예시: I prefer cold weather because hot weather makes me feel sweaty and uncomfortable. Cold weather is more refreshing and pleasant for me.

제안: 回答不完整且表达不清晰，建议使用完整句子并具体说明原因，避免口语化的填充词。

예시: I prefer dry weather because wet weather makes me feel tired and less energetic.

제안: 回答混乱且语法错误较多，建议直接回答问题并说明频率和原因，句子要连贯。

예시: I usually check the weather forecast every day, especially when I plan to go outside or travel to another country like China.

제안: 回答中有语法和词汇错误，建议用完整句子清晰表达观点，并具体说明气候变化的影响。

예시: Climate change has caused rising temperatures and global warming, which have led to sea level rise, more droughts, and flooding in many areas.

제안: 回答表达基本清楚，但句子结构简单且有语法错误，建议使用更完整和连贯的句子，并具体说明原因。

예시: Yes, I would love to visit cities with different climates because I enjoy traveling and experiencing diverse cultures and traditions.

× Hot afternoon is always heavy rain 'cause we live in a tropical country, so we are.

✓ Hot afternoons always have heavy rain because we live in a tropical country, so we do.

这里“Hot afternoon”应为复数形式“Hot afternoons”，因为指的是经常发生的事情。动词“is”应改为“have”以匹配复数主语。

× Hot weather always make you feel sweaty and.

✓ Hot weather always makes you feel sweaty.

主语“Hot weather”是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加-s，改为“makes”。

× Sweating make your clothes feels so smelly's and colors just nicer.

✓ Sweating makes your clothes feel so smelly and the colors just look nicer.

主语“Sweating”是单数，谓语动词应为“makes”。“clothes”是复数，谓语动词应为“feel”。“smelly's”错误，应为“smelly”。

× Windy and comfort, rible, comfy.

✓ Windy and comfortable, terrible, comfy.

“comfort”应为形容词“comfortable”。“rible”拼写错误，应为“terrible”。

× Oh, this one I prefer drying more than wet weather 'cause the wet weather always make me feel so like or less energetic.

✓ Oh, this one I prefer dry weather more than wet weather because wet weather always makes me feel less energetic.

“drying”应为形容词“dry”。“wet weather”是单数，谓语动词应为“makes”。“so like or less energetic”表达不清，改为“less energetic”。

× If I go back to China, I would like to check the weather forecast, but if I'm still in indoor then I want 'cause the weather all the same.

✓ If I go back to China, I would like to check the weather forecast, but if I'm still indoors then I don't want to because the weather is always the same.

“in indoor”应为“indoors”。“I want”后缺少动词，补充为“don't want to”。“the weather all the same”应为“the weather is always the same”。

× But if it were to China or maybe every day I will check the weather forecast because I will go out often.

✓ But if I were in China or maybe every day, I will check the weather forecast because I go out often.

“if it were to China”表达错误，应为“if I were in China”。

× Maybe. The environment like rising temperature, global warming on the sea level rise again and there is more drawled recently an flooding.

✓ Maybe. The environment is affected by rising temperatures and global warming, causing sea levels to rise again, and there has been more drought and flooding recently.

句子结构混乱，缺少谓语动词，词汇错误“drawled”应为“drought”，并且“an flooding”应为“and flooding”。

× I heard there is a flood in the Sahara desert.

✓ I heard there was a flood in the Sahara Desert.

“heard”是过去时，后面的“there is”应改为过去时“there was”以保持时态一致。

× Yeah, I will love it 'cause I like to travel, visit every single different area, culture and country, city.

✓ Yeah, I will love it because I like to travel and visit every single different area, culture, country, and city.

“culture and country, city”缺少连词，应加“and”连接。

× They have different traditional.

✓ They have different traditions.

“traditional”是形容词，句中应使用名词“traditions”。