Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时应避免语法错误，如“tropicals”应为“the tropics”，并且句子结构可以更简洁自然。可以增加一些具体细节来丰富内容。

예시: The weather where I live is generally warm and sunny because it is located in the tropics, so we don't experience winter. This makes it a great place for outdoor activities all year round.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如“Where the different beautiful dresses”不合适。建议使用更自然的表达，并避免口语填充词。

예시: I prefer hot weather, especially during summer, because I enjoy wearing colorful and beautiful clothes that make me feel happy under the bright sunlight.

제안: 注意语法错误，如“can makes”应为“can make”，并且可以提供更具体的原因来支持观点。

예시: I prefer wet weather because dry weather often makes my skin feel dry and uncomfortable, which is quite unpleasant for me.

제안: 回答中语法和表达不准确，如“check that why the almost everyday”和“clothes what I were”。建议使用更准确的句子结构，并说明具体时间和频率。

예시: Yes, I check the weather forecast almost every day, usually in the morning, because it helps me decide what clothes to wear for the day.

제안: 回答内容混乱且有多处语法错误，表达不清。建议理清思路，使用正确的词汇和句子结构，具体说明气候变化的影响。

예시: In recent years, climate change has caused more extreme weather events such as heatwaves, floods, and wildfires, which have serious negative effects on the environment and people's lives.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，如“wait another N stating”。建议使用更准确的表达，并增加细节说明为什么感兴趣。

예시: Definitely. Since I live in a tropical area, I would love to visit a city with a cold climate to experience winter and see snow, which I think would be very exciting and new for me.

× The weather is very good because this area is located in tropicals, which means there is no winter, so the weather is always sunny and warm.

✓ The weather is very good because this area is located in the tropics, which means there is no winter, so the weather is always sunny and warm.

“tropicals”应为复数名词“tropics”，表示热带地区，使用复数形式。

× Where the different beautiful dresses which can makes me feel happy.

✓ Where there are different beautiful dresses which can make me feel happy.

句子缺少动词“are”，且“makes”应为“make”，因为主语是复数“dresses”，动词应使用原形。

× I don't like the dry weather because it can makes me skin feel uncomfortable.

✓ I don't like the dry weather because it can make my skin feel uncomfortable.

“makes”应为“make”，因为情态动词“can”后接动词原形；“me skin”应为“my skin”，表示“我的皮肤”。

× I check that why the almost everyday because it can help me choose the clothes what I were.

✓ I check it almost every day because it can help me choose the clothes that I wear.

“that why the”不合适，应为“it”；“everyday”应为副词短语“every day”；“what I were”应为“that I wear”，使用关系代词和正确的动词形式。

× I believe that it is very important and useful for me.

✓ I believe that it is very important and useful for me.

此句无时态错误，保持原句。

× The most obvious of phenomena is that there are more and more exterm. Why there like El Nino and the global warming? In that case it could be caused a lot of damage is like solving drugs, evil, wildfire, so it is not good for the environment.

✓ The most obvious phenomena are that there are more and more extreme weather events like El Nino and global warming. In that case, they could cause a lot of damage such as droughts, floods, and wildfires, so it is not good for the environment.

句子结构混乱，需调整为正确的主谓一致和表达方式；“exterm”应为“extreme weather events”；“solving drugs, evil”应为“droughts, floods”；使用复数和正确的连接词。

× Definitely, like I mentioned before I live in the tropical area so I want to wait another N stating to experience the cold winter and watch it snow.

✓ Definitely, like I mentioned before, I live in the tropical area so I want to visit another nation to experience the cold winter and watch it snow.

“wait another N stating”不合适，应为“visit another nation”；“want to wait”应为“want to visit”，表达未来意愿。